Rewrite the following sentences to make them clearer and more concise.

1. A SWOT analysis is a useful tool for helping a person to better understand what his situation is.
(11 words)
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2. There was an angry customer who started shouting at me. ( 6 words)

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3. When a student writes a report, it should be noted that he should use the APA style. (12 words)
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4. A need exists for us to find a solution to the problem. (6 words)

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5. IT was the department which was conducting an investigation of the crash. (6 words)
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6. We can have a talk about that at a later date. ( 6 words)

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7. More information will be sent from our main office in the coming week. (9 words)
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8. Strata is a company that is involved in the manufacturing of spare parts for planes. (5 words)
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9. The recommendation UC usually advises students is to visit the Writing Center at least once a
week. (9 words]
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10. It was challenging to find a suitable job notice. (7 words)

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 Edit the following sentences to make them clearer and more concise:

1. The implementation of the plan was successful.

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2. Less attention is paid to commercials that lack human interest stories than to other kinds of
commercials.
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3. Tom worked in a national forest last summer, which may be her career choice.
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4. The decision that was reached by the committee was to postpone the vote.
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5. My car is borrowed every Saturday by Gina.
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6. The disk drive of the computer was damaged by the electrical surge.
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