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FADE IN
1A Close up/Pan Out
Beginning of Dramatic Block 1
EXT. CHURCH STEPS - NIGHT (6 YEARS AGO)
FATHER ALWYN
Yes, yes, sorry. As I've said before,
the situation is out of hand. This
entity is unlike any I've evaluated To explain
before. We will need an expert
Exorcist before the child's soul is
lost to us.
2C Close Up
The BUZZ of a street light as it flickers overhead
3AINT.Master
BEDROOM - Shot
NIGHT
FATHER ALWYN
I may question myself. But I would
never question the grace of God. We
can save you Bruce. However you are
to reinforce
correct, I can't do it alone. That's
why we've called an expert.
3C Medium Shot/Tilt Down
BRUCE
Another Exorcist for me to devour! I
graciously accept Father.
FATHER ALWYN
Dramatic Block 1 Ends Thank you for coming so quickly. My
name is Father Dean Alwyn, the mans to explain
name is Bruce. He's upstairs whenever
you're...
Dramatic Block 2 Begins 5B Long 2 Shot
MORDECAI
(Interrupting)Kitchen? to ignore
5C Long 2 Shot FATHER ALWYN
I beg your pardon? to clarify
MORDECAI
Well you can't have it. Now where is
the kitchen? to demand
FATHER ALWYN
Pass the dining room. to inform
Mordecai moves past Father Alwyn and rushes to the kitchen.
MORDECAI 6C Medium
I'm here to expel an entity. At least
that's what the bishop tells me. Can't to reevaluate
do that on an empty stomach can I?
FATHER ALWYN
Can you really save him? to question
MORDECAI
I'm going to be brutally honest. My
role here is to makes sure that entity
leaves this earth. That's all. to clarify
MORDECAI (CONT'D)
(Mouth full)The man's life will be
determined by his strength and his
will to live. (Swallows) Have Faith
father, that's what priests do isn't
6E Close Up it?
FATHER ALWYN
I know this has been troubling you for
some time. to reassure
BRUCE
It's just, it's been years father, he
was like a brother to me, and I can't
understand why he'd take his own life, to doubt
and right in front of our church! It's
Father Alwyn pats his shoulder and looks towards the window
pane gleaming light.
Father?
FATHER ALWYN
Do not fear, for I have redeemed you;
I have summoned you by name; you are
mine. When you pass through the
waters, I will be with you; and when
you pass through the rivers, they will
not sweep over you. When you walk
through the fire, you will not be
burned; the flames will not set you
ablaze.
BRUCE
For I am the Lord your God.
FATHER ALWYN
Have Faith my son... 7B Medium CloseUp
to reassure
INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT (NOW)
8A Close UP
Father Alwyn Comes out of his trance and grips his Crucifix.
FATHER ALWYN
God will Prevail. Always.
Unrolls tools
Packs Crucifix
Packs Rosary
Packs Syringes
MORDECAI
Has he been asleep long? to analyze
9B Two Shot Pan
FATHER ALWYN
No, he was awake when I left. Couldn't
have been more than twenty minutes
passed.
to state
MORDECAI
Well then, let's wake him up.
9C-I Close Up
Mordecai grabs his frequency device and begins to tune, a
variety of WHITE NOISE screams into the room. The noise stops
but Mordecai still tunes the device. With a sudden burst
Bruce begins to scream. TO DISRUPT
9D Close Up High Angle
BRUCE
(Screaming)Turn it off! Turn that damn
box off you insufferable bastard! to demand
9E Two Shot Pan
Mordecai Turns off the device, slowly turns to Father Alwyn.
MORDECAI
See father, science and religion co-
opting against evil is the true
harmony the world needs. to mock
BRUCE
Dismount that high horse exorcist. You
are a pain in our ass, but ultimately
you still have one major flaw. to criticize
MORDECAI
(Mockingly) Enlighten us with your
ancient knowledge oh mighty dark to mock
spirit.
BRUCE
You're still just a human. Mortal.
Sinful. Imperfect, just as your God
made you. to criticize
MORDECAI
Well guess what. I may be imperfect.
(Whispers) but at least I'm not the
devil's sloppy seconds. to insult
Bruce begins to throb and struggle in the chair with no
success of escaping.
9H Medium Shot
FATHER ALWYN
Please Mordecai, stop this. Remember
the man inside. to plead
MORDECAI 9I Two Shot Pan
Right. Right. Let's Begin.
(Assertively) Demon, I demand your
name. to command
BRUCE
You can have it on your first trip to
hell!
9J Two Shot Pan to deny
Mordecai Splashes the demon with holy water and reveals his
crucifix to Bruce.
MORDECAI
(Assertively Yelling) YOUR NAME DEMON!
Give me your name! to DEMAND
Mordecai pulls out an old book hidden in his coat, and turns
the pages. He then holds his hands out, and recites a
passage.
MORDECAI
NAH, IEH NAB, IX OL, CA VABZIR, ZILDAR
K' ETHARZI. QUASB LONSHIN DE UNPeH A
MONONS DE ECURB.
FATHER ALWYN
I've never heard latin like that? to ask
MORDECAI
That's because it's Enochian. Dead
language, but ancient demons know it
well enough. to clarify
BRUCE
9M M/CU OS
How is it that you of all humans can
speak the language of the Fallen? to question
MORDECAI
That's just a small taste of what's to
come. to state
Mordecai reaches for a rag and gags Bruce. TO PREPARE
MORDECAI
You'll be begging to tell me your name
9N I-M/CU soon. to MOCK
MONTAGE START
TO TORTURE
Mordecai Continues to recite enochian
Bruce Screeches
Mordecai lines the silver blade with holy water and salt, and
places it on Bruces forehead, burning him, Bruce screeching.
END MONTAGE
MORDECAI
Ask yourself this father. What's more
important to you, his life damned, or
End of Dramatic Block 2 his soul saved. TO QUESTION
Dramatic Block 3 Begins
Mordecai re-enters the bedroom leaving Father Alwyn in the
hallway, he begins to enter another trance.
not married.
11A Close UP Tilt Down
FATHER ALWYN
I see, does the father know?
to probe 11B Close UP Tilt Up
WOMAN
Father...Two months ago, I was raped.
This child is not made with purity.
to divulge
FATHER ALWYN
I...I see. How unfortunate. Well with
tragedy comes... to sake
WOMAN
(Interrupting) Father I am aborting
this child. to foresake
FATHER ALWYN
My child. I know this is a difficult
decision. And the church does not
allow such acts. I urge you to
reconsider. There are special programs
that can help you, resources for...
to reinsure
WOMAN
Father, I've spoken to an
obstetrician. If I have this child, I
will not survive the pregnancy. If I
have this child. I'll die.
to deny
FATHER ALWYN
I...I'm sure God would...
WOMAN
What do I do Father. What's more
important? My Life, or my soul? to question
MORDECAI
Then you might guess what this is? to mock
13-I Close UP
Mordecai waves the vial in front of Bruce.
BRUCE
Blessed blood of the possessed. TO REVEAL
FATHER ALWYN
Blessed Blood? You TOOK blood from a
young girl? to question
MORDECAI
I took blood from a possessed vessel
and purified it using a ritual from
the key of solomon. Worked once so
it'll work again. to restate
Dramatic Block 3 Ends
FATHER ALWYN
Dramatic Block 4 Begins You're going to kill this man! FULCRUM
to question
MORDECAI
Not unless the ENTITY has something to
tell me. to propose
FATHER ALWYN
This isn't the only way. We have to
have faith in God Mordecai. to prevent
MORDECAI
God failed you! That's why I'm here! to erupt
13H 3 Shot
Mordecai Shoves Father Alwyn to the ground and tries to
inject Bruce.
13J Close UP
MORDECAI
And I DON'T fail! to state
13K 2 LongShot
Mordecai's hand stops in front of Bruce, and is slowly pushed
13Lforce.
away by an unseen MediumBruce's restraints release, and
Bruce stands up. Alwyn stands and is pushed across the room,
as Bruce slaps the needle out of Mordecai's hand and grabs
his neck. TO RELEASE
13M OS Close UP
BRUCE
Time to die Mordecai! to threaten
13N Medium 2 Shot
13O Medium
Mordecai begins to struggle reciting more words inLow
Latin, but
Bruce does not back off. Alwyn slowly crawls toward the two,
and grabs the needle. Flashes of Alwyn's choices flash before
him. TO CHOOSE
13P OS 3Shot
BRUCE (CONT.)
Tonight, I kill two hands of God. to mock
ALWYN
Bruce! to call
13P OS 2Shot
Bruce pushes Mordecai, and turns to attack Alwyn. Alwyn then
pulls himself close to Bruce.
BRUCE
You'll be the first I send down! to threaten
MORDECAI
Got you!
13R 2Shot
13Q Master
Mordecai begins the exorcism ritual, Father Alwyn recites the
same latin incantation. The light within Bruce shines white
hot and a dark fog is released from his body, ROARING as it
burns into the floorboards. Father Alwyn stands up, Mordecai
approaches Bruce's unconscious body.
13R 2Shot
MORDECAI
It's Done. The demons expelled. to state
FATHER ALWYN
Is...Is he? 13s Overhead to ask
Both Mordecai and Father Alwyn stand and wait for a response
as they look at each other with gloom.
13R Closeup
FATHER ALWYN (CONT'D) to beg
Forgive me. Father.
Dramatic Block 4 Ends FADE TO BLACK