Describe a recent event that made you happy

You should say:

What the event was
When and where it happened
Who participated in this event
What you saw or did and explain why this event was so enjoyable

What - When and where: Who:

- My mom’s birthday party which falls fell
on 23th July
- =>decided to celebrate by hosting an
indoor event => holding a party at home
may bring a warm and buzzing
atmosphere
- Actually, it was more of a family dinner
=> since my mom invited some of her
colleagues to visit to share the joy with
her

What you saw or did: Why:

- Ii must admit that i’ve intended to prepare
this party for a long time => my mom is
always snowed under with work and
household chores => doesn’t care much
about her birthday => wanna surprise and
tried my best to make it become one of
the most unforgettable events of her life
- I can say that i do have a knack for
cooking => prepared some of the dishes
that my mom favorsadores, ranging from
western food to vietnamese food
- had my brother give who gave me a hand
in decorating => the living room was
aesthetically decorated with blink lights
and colorful balloons
- when we finished eating, i brought out the
cake and light candles then we all sang
the happy birthday song to my mom =>
she hugged me so tight and said that she
was blown away by that and bursted into
tears sến
- honestly speaking, that party is a
memory that i really treasure => the first
time i’ve done sth that i’ve never had the
chance to do it before is to celebrate a
birthday party for my mom
- did have a blast at the party => the
atmosphere was vibrant and everyone
seemed to enjoy the event deeply => a
great chance to strengthen the bond
among our family members and the
guests
- but on top of that, the happiest thing is
to see my mom delighted and having a
ball at the party => from the bottom of
my heart, i believe that this event has
somehow cherished my mom, which
makes made it become one of the most
memorable unforgettable events of her
life and i hope that i can continue holding
her birthday party in the upcoming years.

Fluency and Coherence vẫn giống bài trước, vẫn khá giống đọc script căn bản do e
(7) viết draft idea kĩ qúa full hết cả câu cú nên thành ra mình k
có sự ứng biến tức thời nhìu ấy

Lexical Resource (7) lưu ý cách dùng từ 1 số chỗ nha, nhìn chung vocab oke,
nhưng em nên lưu ý dùng thêm collocation nha, đa phần
vẫn là từ đơn ấy

Grammar (8) cố gắng dùng thêm mệnh đề quan hệ hoặc đảo ngữ nhé,
 kiểu đa dạng ngữ pháp hơn xíu ấy

Pronunciation (8) phát âm tốt, k chê j đc mỗi tội intonation lên xuống nhìu hơn
nhaaaa

Overall 7.5 – điểm mang tính chất tham khảo thôi vì fluency là
chưa tính chuẩn đc e ahh