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    The document contains questions from a student about revising their first draft of an essay. It asks 5 questions to determine if the thesis is clear, the essay flows well, the intro and conclusion focus on the main point, if there are grammatical errors, and if the essay stays on topic. It then lists 5 things the student needs to finish on the draft like grammar checking, peer review, adding paragraphs and citations. It also lists 5 things the student wants to change like making the conclusion better, fixing the intro, adding transitions, and adding more details. Finally, it lists 5 things that are perfect already and will not be changed, like the organization, most of it making sense, the title, and using the proper

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    The document contains questions from a student about revising their first draft of an essay. It asks 5 questions to determine if the thesis is clear, the essay flows well, the intro and conclusion focus on the main point, if there are grammatical errors, and if the essay stays on topic. It then lists 5 things the student needs to finish on the draft like grammar checking, peer review, adding paragraphs and citations. It also lists 5 things the student wants to change like making the conclusion better, fixing the intro, adding transitions, and adding more details. Finally, it lists 5 things that are perfect already and will not be changed, like the organization, most of it making sense, the title, and using the proper

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    Ramos 1

    Isabella Ramos

    ENGL 1302 280

    Professor Jason Dew

    5 April 2023

    Homework: Week 11

    5 Questions about my first draft

    1. Is my thesis statement clear?

    2. Does my essay flow nicely and have good transitions?

    3. Are my intro and conclusion focused on the main point of the essay?

    4. Are there a lot of grammatical errors or phrases I should word better?

    5. Do I get off topic anywhere?

    “Revising”

    1. What five things do you need to finish on your draft?

    - Grammar check

    - Peer Review

    - Extra paragraphs

    - Meet word count

    - Add cited work

    2. What five things do you want to change in your draft?

    - I needed to make my conclusion better

    - Fix intro

    - Add transitions to each paragraph

    - Add extra details to each paragraph


    2

    - Find better articles

    3. What five things are perfect in your draft and you will not change them?

    - The way that i organized the essay

    - Most of it makes sense

    - The title

    - Proper MLA format

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