Class code: LOP50

Student’s name: LÊ MINH THƯ

Peer editor’s name: TRẦN MINH TÂM
Deadline nộp bài: 23h59 thứ 7 ngày 18/3/2023

WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON 3

Unit: 5
Topic: Describe your pet or your favorite animal.

Here are some suggested questions:

1. What is that animal?

2. What does it look like?

3. What does it often do?

4. How do you feel about your pet or that animal?

 1st draft (SV làm bài viết lần 1 vào OUTLINE bên dưới)

OUTLINE

Topic Sentence:My dog is very cute___________________________________________________________ 

Supporting Sentence 1:____Name_____________________________________________________

Detail 1:_It’s called Gau____________________________________________________________________

Supporting Sentence 2:_Body________________________________________________________

Detail 2:_brow plumage, four legs is very short, erect ears, beady eyes.
____________________________________________________________________

Supporting Sentence 3:_Hobby________________________________________________________

Detail 3:_play with ball, favorite food is pate and sausage.

____________________________________________________________________
Concluding Sentence: I love my dog, Gau’s not only a animal but also a friend with me.
________________________________________________________

 Self-assessment (checklist) SV dùng bảng câu hỏi để tự đánh giá bài viết lần 1 của
mình

Questions Yes / No Comment

1. Does the outline have a topic sentence?  YES  
2. Does the outline have supporting sentences?  YES  
3. Does each supporting sentence relate to the topic?  YES  
4. Does the supporting sentences include the details
related to some or all five senses (taste, touch, smell,  YES  
sound, and sight)?
5. Does the concluding sentence rephrase the topic
 YES  
sentence or summarize the main points?
 

 Peer assessment (checklist) Bạn SV khác sẽ đánh giá bài viết lần 1 của minh dựa vào
các câu hỏi bên dưới
Questions Yes / No Comment
 Bạn chỉ thiếu
phần nói khái quát
1. Does the outline have a topic sentence?  Yes qua như giống gì
hay vì sao có
được thú cưng.
2. Does the outline have supporting sentences?  Yes  
3. Does each supporting sentence relate to the topic?  Yes  
4. Does the supporting sentences include the details
related to some or all five senses (taste, touch, smell,  Yes  
sound, and sight)?
5. Does the concluding sentence rephrase the topic
 Yes  
sentence or summarize the main points?
  Final version: SV copy bài viết ở mục 1st draft dán vào ô màu xanh. GV chỉ chấm bài ở ô
này mà thôi.

My dog is very cute. It’s called Gau. It’s look like a baby bear because it have a brown
plumage, four legs is very short, erect ears and beady eyes. This is a reason why I call it Gau.
Gau’s love to play with it’s ball. A ball like a friend of Gau and Gau very like it. A favorite food
of Gau is a pate and sausage. Every eat Gau alway want it. I love my dog, Gau’s is not only a
animal but also a friend with me.

 Rubric for grading

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