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Practice Task 1 and Task 2
 Task Criteria How responses are assessed

1 Task Did you answer the question fully

achievement and write 150 words?

2 Task • Did you address all the points

response in the question?
• Did you provide a balanced
argument and support your
ideas with evidence and
examples?
• Were all of your ideas relevant
to the question?
• Did you write 250 words?
Both Coherence • Is your writing easy to
CRITERIA task and cohesion
•
understand?
Are your ideas well organised
and clearly linked?
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Task 1 Task 2 effectively?
Grammatical Did you use a wide range of
range and grammatical structures accurately
accuracy and effectively?
 TASK 1

You have to write at least 150

words.
You should spend about 20
minutes.
In this task, you must describe
a visual information, such as:
• Pie chart
• Bar chart
• Line graph
• Table
• Process
• Map
• Mixed-type
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DATA
DIAGRAM
 STRUCTURE

Introduction
01 Re-word the summary

Overview
02 Describe the main trends,
differences, or stages

Detail
03 Explain important features
with data.
 TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The three pie charts below show the changes in

annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,
1991 and 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

TASK 1
 TASK 1
INTRODUCTION The charts compare changes in the shares of five different items which
Paraphrase the question comprised the yearly expenses of a British school between 1981 and
2001.
OVERVIEW Overall, while the shares of two items experienced rises, there were
Describe the main trends, declines in the remaining three. Moreover, academic staff salaries
differences, or stages contributed the largest proportion of expenditure throughout the
survey, whereas insurance had the smallest share.
DETAIL Wages paid to the teaching staff accounted for the most significant
Explain important proportion of expenditure in 1981 (40%) and went up by a quarter
features with data before declining slightly. In comparison, the salaries of non-academic
employees were responsible for less than a third of all expenses in 1981,
but their share dipped substantially by 13% over the course of these 20
years.
On the other hand, insurance had the lowest proportion with a
minimum rise from 2% to 3% by 1991, before climbing almost threefold
in 2001. The share of furniture and equipment was initially as high as
that of educational resources (15%), but, while the former dropped by
2/3 before rising fivefold, the latter experienced a marked rise after
which it halved, reaching just below 10%.
NON-DATA
DIAGRAM
(PROCESS)
 STRUCTURE

Introduction
01 Re-word the summary

Overview
02 Describe the main trends,
differences, or stages

Detail
03
Explain important features
with data.
Separate ideas into
paragraph by grouping
stages
 TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the stages and

equipment used in the cement-making process, and
how cement is used to produce concrete for
building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

TASK 1
 TASK 1
INTRODUCTION The diagrams show how cement and concrete are produced.
Paraphrase the question Overall, there are five stages in the production of cement, while the
OVERVIEW procedure for producing concrete from cement and a few other simple
Describe the main trends, ingredients involves a single stage.
differences, or stages
Cement production begins when the initial raw materials, namely
DETAIL limestone and clay, are crushed using two rotating drums to make a
Explain important fine powder which is then mixed in a cylindrical mixer. The next stage
features with data involves a tube-like rotating heater with a blowtorch mounted at its
bottom opening. The mixed powder is fed from the top and
simultaneously heated and blended, after which it is transferred to a
grinder using a conveyor belt. There, it is milled to yield the final
cement product which is eventually packed in bags.
This cement is used as raw material in the production of concrete in a
second process. An initial mixture comprising 15% cement, 10% water,
one-quarter sand and half gravel is fed into a rotating concrete mixer
where they are stirred until the concrete mix is ready for construction
purposes.
NON-DATA
DIAGRAM
(MAPS)
 STRUCTURE

Introduction
01 Re-word the summary

Overview
02 Describe the main trends,
differences, or stages

Detail
03
Explain important features with data.
Separate ideas into paragraph by
grouping
- the remaining items and changed
items, or
- minor changes and major changes
 TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the site of a school in

2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in
2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

 TASK 1
INTRODUCTION The maps illustrate how a school site is planned to be developed over
Paraphrase the question a 20-year period.
OVERVIEW Overall, there will be extensive developments with regards to the
Describe the main trends, construction of buildings, facilities, and roads in the school site, and
differences, or stages several areas will remain the same.
DETAIL Several sites in 2000 will not change over 20 years. One car park to
Explain important the west of the site where the main entrance to the school was located
features with data will stick in the same position. Two school buildings, accommodating
600 students altogether, will also not be relocated as well as the
woodland in the north and the south.
There are several changes due to the planning to increase the number
of students served by the school by 400 in 2024. As a result, a new
school building will replace the old sports field, and the two original
buildings are going to be joined together. The old path will then
connect these to the new building number 3, no longer running to the
main entrance. Furthermore, a part of the woodland in the east is
planned to be deforested and replaced by a new car park as well as a
new, smaller sports field. Finally, a new road will be paved passing
south of the school building, which will connect the two car parks.
 TASK 2

You have to write at least 250 words.

You should spend about 40 minutes.
In this task, you must write an essay in
response to a topic.
Task types:
• Agree/disagree
• Advantages/disadvantages
• Discuss both views
• Problems/solutions
• Causes/solutions
• Direct questions
OPINION-LED
 STRUCTURE
Strongly
agree/
Paraphrase the question and state Paraphrasing statement disagree
01 your overall opinion (agree imposing Thesis statement
higher task for fast-food companies) Outline sentence

Explain and support your reason why Reason 1

02 fast-food companies should pay
higher tax.
Explanation
Example

Explain and support your reason why

03 fast-food companies should pay
higher tax.
Reason 2
Explanation
Example

Summary
04 Re-state your overall opinion and
summarise your main reasons.
Opinion/Position
 INTRODUCTION It is argued that governments should levy a tariff on junk food because the
Paraphrase the question number of health risks associated with consuming this kind of food is on the
Thesis statement rise. This essay agrees that a higher rate of tax should be paid by fast-food
Outline sentence companies. Firstly, alcohol and tobacco companies already pay higher taxes
and secondly, higher taxes could raise prices and lower consumption.
MAIN BODY Higher excise on liqueur and cigarettes has proven to be successful at curbing
PARAGRAPH 1 the harm caused by these substances. This revenue has been used to treat
Topic sentence health problems associated with these products and has proven useful in
Explanation advertising campaigns warning people about the dangers of alcohol and
tobacco abuse. Tax from fast food could be used in the same way. The United
Example
Kingdom is a prime example, where money from smokers is used to treat lung
cancer and heart disease.
Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. Fast food
MAIN BODY companies would pass on these taxes to consumers in the form of higher
PARAGRAPH 2 prices and this would lead to people not being able to afford junk food
Topic sentence because it is too expensive. Junk food would soon become a luxury item and it
Explanation would only be consumed occasionally, which would be less harmful to the
general public’s health. For instance, the cost of organic food has proven
Example
prohibitively expensive for most people and that is why only a small
percentage of the population buy it regularly.

CONCLUSION In conclusion, junk food should be taxed at a higher rate because of the good
Summary precedent set by alcohol and tobacco and the fact that the increased cost
should reduce the amount of fast-food people buy..
Opinion
 STRUCTURE

Paraphrase the question and state Paraphrasing statement

Discuss both sides but
disagree
01
your overall opinion (you feel plastic Thesis statement
bags should not be banned) Outline sentence

Side/View 1
02 Explain and support your reason why Explanation
plastic bags should be banned. Example

Explain and support your reason why Side/View 2

03 plastic bags should not be banned. Explanation
Example
Re-state your overall opinion (plastic Summary

04 bags should not be banned) and

summarise your main reasons.
Opinion/Position
 INTRODUCTION No one would deny that the plastic bags used in supermarkets and shops
Paraphrase the question have a negative effect on the environment because they do not degrade and
Thesis statement end up as litter in our cities or oceans. However, the replacements for plastic
Outline sentence bags also carry significant environmental risks. That is why I think plastic bags
should not be banned.
MAIN BODY The main environmental side effect related to plastic bags is that they pollute
PARAGRAPH 1 both the land and water. An insignificant percentage of people may reuse or
Topic sentence recycle plastic bags, but most ultimately litter or throw them in the trash. If
Explanation they are thrown in the trash, plastic bags will wind up in the ever-increasing
number of landfills and contribute to soil pollution. The ones that are simply
Example
tossed in the street clog drains in cities and eventually find their way to the
sea and entangle marine life. This is why many feel that plastic bags should
be banned.
MAIN BODY Despite the advantages of banning plastic bags, the solutions for plastic bags
PARAGRAPH 2 are worse than the original problem. Most people who advocate banning
Topic sentence plastic bags suggest paper bags (which are biodegradable) or reusable bags
Explanation that are typically made from cotton or plastic. Both of these replacements are
flawed. Paper bags require us to continue clearing forests and also carry a
Example
large carbon footprint. Reusable bags are plagued by similar problems.
Independent studies have shown that the production of cotton and reusable
plastic causes more harm to the environment than disposable plastic bags.
Coupled with the fact that reusable bags are more difficult to recycle, their
overall effect on the environment is worse.
CONCLUSION I do not think overly simplistic restrictions on plastic bags would have the
Summary desired positive effect. Rather than thoughtlessly banning them, policy makers
Opinion should come up with a policy that balances the materials we use for bags in
order to produce an overall positive impact on the environment.
 STRUCTURE
Advantages vs
Paraphrasing statement disadvantages
Paraphrase the question and state
01 your overall opinion (advantages
outweigh disadvantages)
Thesis statement
Outline sentence

Stronger Side
02 Explain and support your reason why Explanation
advantages on a stronger side. Example

Explain and support your reason why Weaker Side

03 disadvantages on a weaker side. Explanation
Example

04
Re-state your overall opinion Summary
(advantages outweigh disadvantages) Opinion/Position
and summarise your main reasons.
 Some authorities think that it is more favorable for pupils to begin studying languages at
INTRODUCTION primary school instead of secondary school. This essay will argue that the advantages of
Paraphrase the question this outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will first demonstrate that the earlier someone
Thesis statement learns an additional language the more likely they are to master it and that it brings
Outline sentence added cognitive benefits, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage,
namely confusion with their native tongue, is not valid.

MAIN BODY The main reason to start kids off with foreign languages early is that this increases
PARAGRAPH 1 the likelihood they will achieve fluency in adulthood. That is to say that they will have
Topic sentence far more years to perfect their skills and it will seem perfectly normal to speak
Explanation bilingually. For example, in countries such as Holland and Norway where English is
Example taught from a very young age, more than 95% of adults speak it at an advanced
level. Learning a second language also helps to improve overall cognitive abilities. In
other words, it benefits the overall development of a child’s brain. A recent survey by
Cambridge University found that children who studied a new language before the
age of 5 were significantly more likely to score higher in Mathematics and Science.
MAIN BODY Those opposed to this say that it causes the child to become confused between their
PARAGRAPH 2 mother tongue and the other language. However, there is actually no evidence to
Topic sentence support this view and children from bilingual families do just as well in both
Explanation languages. My own son was brought up speaking both Vietnamese and English and
Example outperforms most of his classmates in both.

CONCLUSION On balance, the fact that early foreign language learning leads to higher fluency and
Summary improved brain function clearly outweighs the flawed argument that it impairs uptake
Opinion of native languages.
DISCUSSION
 STRUCTURE

Discuss both views

Paraphrasing statement
01
Paraphrase the question and state
your overall opinion Thesis statement
Outline sentence

First Viewpoint
02 Explain and support your reason why Explanation
one side is important. Reason why you agree/disagree
Example

Explain and support your reason why Second Viewpoint

03 the other side is important. Explanation
Reason why you agree/disagree
Example

04 Re-state your overall opinion and Summary

summarise your main reasons. Opinion/Position (which one
is better or more important)
 INTRODUCTION It is often said that important people are born with certain characteristics that
Paraphrase the question enable them to become great leaders. The alternative view is that leadership
Thesis statement is a learnable quality. Personally, I agree with the latter viewpoint because
Outline sentence training and experience are more important than innate ability in this
situation.
MAIN BODY It is somewhat true that many individuals are born with distinctive personal
PARAGRAPH 1 traits that allow them the opportunity to become talented leaders. Leaders
Topic sentence tend to be those who are charming and persuasive. In contrast, those who lack
Explanation of these characteristics may have a difficulty inspiring the belief and loyalty
that all leaders require and end up as followers rather than leaders. For
Example
instance, a salesman who often fails to convince his clients to sign a deal may
be dissuaded from becoming the sales team leader since he does not believe
that he has what it takes to be one. The more convincing salesmen are more
likely to rise to that role.

MAIN BODY However, there are also people who assert that leadership skills can actually
PARAGRAPH 2 be achieved through proper training and effort. That is why there is a larger
number of institutes offering leadership training programmes helping those
Topic sentence
who want to learn the skills required to be a leader. Public speaking is one of
Explanation many skills these schools can teach. Individuals who are shy and lack
Example confidence can find their feet in the leadership battle by learning the essence
of good body language, pronunciation, and other elements of good public
speaking. This will in turn make them better leaders.
CONCLUSION In conclusion, although some traits related to leadership are likely inherited
Summary there is tremendous room for people to grow into positions of responsibility if
Opinion they apply themselves fully to learning the skills and personal characteristics
of great leaders.
 STRUCTURE
Paraphrasing statement
01
Paraphrase the question and state
your overall opinion Thesis statement Discuss both views
Outline sentence

02 Explain and support your reason why First Viewpoint

one side is important. Explanation
Example

03
Explain and support your reason why
the other side is important. Second Viewpoint
Explanation
Example

04 Explain your opinion Explanation of your opinion

Example

05 Re-state your overall opinion and Summary

summarise your main reasons. Opinion/Position (which one
is better or more important)
 INTRODUCTION Information technology is becoming a ubiquitous part of learning. This essay
Paraphrase the question will show that this is a welcome development and can enhance educational
Thesis statement practice. It will first suggest that the instant availability of huge amounts of
Outline sentence information is the primary advantage, followed by a discussion of how it can
sometimes lead to plagiarism.
MAIN BODY The main benefit computers bring to learners is easy access to vast amounts
PARAGRAPH 1 of resources. Learners were once limited to the books they had and the
Topic sentence knowledge of their teacher, now they can learn about anything they choose at
Explanation the touch of a button. Google is a prime example, because it allows people to
easily search for whatever they are looking for quickly and accurately.
Example
MAIN BODY One possible drawback is that using the internet to complete academic work
can sometimes lead to pupils copying articles from the internet. As a result,
PARAGRAPH 2
students do not have to think about their tasks and learn very little. The
Topic sentence Sunday Times recently reported that 72% of college graduates in the UK
Explanation admitted to copying and pasting Wikipedia articles at least once.
Example
MAIN BODY Overall, it is a very positive development because most students will take
PARAGRAPH 3 advantage of the power of the information superhighway to enhance their
Explanation of studies, rather than using it to cheat. For example, in 2005 Cambridge
Opinion University found that students who regularly used a computer were 26% more
Example likely to get a first-class degree than those who did not.
CONCLUSION In conclusion, the web has provided a gateway to knowledge unlike anything
Summary seen before, and although it can sometimes lead to a few taking the easy
Opinion route and plagiarising, it is a very positive step in the evolution of education.
CAUSES AND
SOLUTION/
EFFECT
 STRUCTURE

Cause?
Solution?
01
Paraphrase both questions and state Paraphrasing statement
the main cause and solution. Thesis statement
Outline sentence

02 Explain the main cause(s). Support

your ideas.
Topic Sentence
Explanation
Example

03
Explain the possible solution(s) . Give Topic Sentence
reasons to support your ideas. Explanation
Example

04 Re-state the problem and Summary

summarise your main ideas. Opinion/Position
 INTRODUCTION Recent years have witnessed tremendous developments in agricultural science yet every day people all
Paraphrase the question over the world continue to suffer and even die from hunger. In my opinion, this is because innovations
rarely impact the developing world and the best solution for it is to direct humanitarian funding towards
Thesis statement these advances.
Outline sentence
The main cause of more advanced agricultural methods not reaching the people who need it the most is
MAIN BODY that the developing world has trouble implementing these methods. There are a number of reasons for
PARAGRAPH 1 this ranging from limited financial resources to poor existing infrastructure to political instability,
depending on the country in question. One example of this would be in many African nations, where
Topic sentence malnourishment has historically been highest. Countries like the Congo have seen revolution after
Explanation revolution over the last several decades, which has effectively destabilised the entire country. The
Example universities where students would learn about changes in agriculture are frequently shut down or
destroyed. The young people who would become agricultural scientists end up drawn into the conflict as
soldiers or victims. Long-term economic neglect means that the government has very limited ability to
subsidise farming. These problems are present to varying degrees in countries around the world and
offer one possible explanation for the continued prevalence of hunger.

MAIN BODY The solution that I believe would be most effective is directing humanitarian funds previously focused on
food aid towards education and agricultural infrastructure. Food aid is a notoriously poor solution
PARAGRAPH 2 because it only offers an immediate solution and warlords often exploit it to support their continued
Topic sentence mistreatment of their people. It hurts more than it helps. However, there would be better long-term
Explanation effects if international organisations and governments redirected that money into helping build better
Example farms, provide more modern equipment, and sending qualified professions to train people in need. There
is a TedTalk by a young man in Kenya who built his own windmill out of old bicycle parts and by
reading a book in the local library. It is large enough to power his own house and he was seeking
financing for a larger one that would power irrigation channels for the entire village. If more people like
him can be found or trained then this will have an impact that lasts for decades and is relatively
impervious to the factors preventing agricultural advances from taking root in developing countries.

CONCLUSION In conclusion, developing companies face myriad problems that hinder their ability to take advantage of
newer agricultural models and we should direct more funding to helping these countries learn more
Summary about new farming methods. This is likely to be an important issue in the world as the gap between rich
Opinion and poor, develop and undeveloped widens while technological progress continues its indifferent march
forward.
 STRUCTURE

Cause?
Effects?
01
Paraphrase both questions and state Paraphrasing statement
the main cause and effect. Thesis statement
Outline sentence

02 Explain the main reason/cause(s).

Support your ideas.
Topic Sentence
Explanation
Example

03
Explain the effect(s) . Give reasons Topic Sentence
to support your ideas. Explanation
Example

04 Re-state the problem and Summary

summarise your main ideas. Opinion/Position
 INTRODUCTION Sleep deficiency is a common phenomenon that people use to have at present. The
Paraphrase the question reasons for this may be the enhancement of human competitiveness and the
Thesis statement development of sleep distractors. As a result, lack of sleep may influence people’s health
Outline sentence individually and also socially affect people around them.
MAIN BODY The improvement of human competitiveness that forces people to increase their
PARAGRAPH 1 productivity may be the first reason behind the lack of sleep. The development of
Topic sentence industry leads people to compete each other to succeed. Human behavior, for instance,
Explanation which basically carries a never-ending satisfying, is a supporting factor that make people
never stop reaching their success. Consequently, people tend to work a lot and
Example
automatically it will reduce their sleep time. Sleep time may also reduce due to the
expansion of sleep distractors. The growth of the internet has led to a variety of sleep
distractors such as social media, games, and entertainment on mobile phones or
computers. There is no denying that people nowadays spend most of their time, even
their sleep-time, on it.

MAIN BODY Common effects of sleep deficiency can be the health condition of people and their
quality of social interaction. People who sleep less could have severe problems with their
PARAGRAPH 2
health because the normal length of sleep for people is eight hours. This may lead to the
Topic sentence
metabolism problem and low immunity that make people easily infected by diseases. As
Explanation well as health problems, people could also have social problems that might be affected
Example by their interactions with others. For instance, people with sleep deficiency may not have
a good mood to live their lives, so they will have less performance in interacting with
people around them. It could lead to low-quality relationship with others.
CONCLUSION
Summary In conclusion, people with sleep shortage may be affected by the increase in
competitiveness between humans, and the availability of sleep distractors. Hence, people
Opinion
may less healthy and less sociable.
Two-part
questions
 STRUCTURE

Two question
01
Paraphrasing statement
Paraphrase both questions and state
Thesis statement
your overall opinion
Outline sentence

02 Explain the main problem(s).

Support your ideas.
Topic Sentence
Explanation
Example
Explain and support your reason why

03 governments should/not encourage

more people to live in smaller towns.
Topic Sentence
Explanation
Example

04
Summary
Re-state your overall opinion and
Opinion/Position
summarise your main reasons.
 INTRODUCTION More and more people live in cities today than at any point in the past and this
Paraphrase the question trend will likely continue in the future. This has resulted in many problems
Thesis statement including extreme overcrowding and governments should take measures to make
Outline sentence living outside cities more attractive.
There are a wide range of drawbacks associated with the rise of modern cities
MAIN BODY but one of the most obvious issues is related to population density. The large
PARAGRAPH 1 number of people crammed into a relatively small area has caused expensive
Topic sentence housing, increased traffic and severe pollution. For example, apartment prices in
Explanation mega-cities like Tokyo and New York have soared to the point where only the
wealthiest inhabitants can afford decent living standards. Regardless of
Example
financial status, all city dwellers have to deal with more and more traffic jams as
the population increases while the area of cities remains fixed. Finally, all these
people living and travelling in one place puts a tremendous strain on the
environment and some cities, like Beijing in China, have become dangerously
polluted.

MAIN BODY In my opinion, governments have a duty to encourage citizens to move to more
PARAGRAPH 2 rural areas. If cities continue to expand unabated then the above problems will
only get worse. We might one day find ourselves living in densely packed,
Topic sentence
heavily polluted cities that resemble scenes from a dystopian science fiction film.
Explanation In order to prevent this from happening, the government can give tax breaks to
Example companies that choose to locate offices and production facilities outside the city.
This will provide more jobs for people who are willing to live in the countryside.
CONCLUSION In conclusion, the concerns related to overcrowding in cities can and should be
Summary somewhat countered by governments incentivising living in rural areas. If this is
Opinion done then we may still face problems related to cities in the future, but at least
they will not be as serious.
 PRACTICE

(TASK 1)
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy

is used to produce electricity

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

TASK 1 The diagram below shows how
geothermal energy is used to produce
electricity
 The diagram below shows how
geothermal energy is used to
TASK 1 produce electricity.

INTRODUCTION The diagram illustrates the process by which geothermal energy

Paraphrase the question is used in the production of electricity.
OVERVIEW Overall, there are five steps in the process, starting from
Describe the main trends, pumping down cold water into the geothermal zone, to producing
differences, or stages electricity from the generator, which is then sent into the
electrical grid.

DETAILS 1 In the first step, cold water is pumped down 4.5 km underground
Explain important through the injection well. Next, the water is injected into the
features with data geothermal zone, where hot rocks heat the water up as it passes
through the Earth. Once the water has been heated up, it enters
the production well and is then pumped up to the ground and
into the condenser.
DETAILS 2 The last two stages are carried out above ground at the power
Explain important plant. First of all, steam is produced from the hot water in the
features with data condenser. In the following step, the steam passes into the turbine
and makes it spin. Finally, the generator, which is powered by the
turbine, produces electricity where it is then transferred into the
electric grid via power lines.
 PRACTICE
(TASK 2)
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:

Give reasons for your answer and include any

relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.
 Some people believe that
allowing children to make their
INTRODUCTION According to some people, children should be allowed to decide what they own choices on everyday
Paraphrase the question should eat, wear or watch. However, others opine that if children have the matters (such as food, clothes
Thesis statement freedom to make their own choices, they will grow up into selfish individuals. and entertainment) is likely to
Outline sentence In my opinion, children should definitely have the liberty to make their own result in a society of individuals
decisions; however, since they are too young to understand what is good or who only think about their own
bad for them, parents should help them make the right decisions. wishes. Other people believe
that it is important for children
MAIN BODY It is important for a child to learn how to make decisions regarding his to make decisions about matters
PARAGRAPH 1 lifestyle or future career as decision making is an important skill for success that affect them.
First viewpoint in life. When he is allowed to make his own choices he will learn to take the
Discuss both these views and
Explanation responsibility for his actions. This is another skill required for success.
give your own opinion.
Example Needless to say, a child who takes small decisions right from his childhood
can deal with the conflicts and challenges in life more efficiently.
MAIN BODY On the contrary, when children have total freedom to make their own
PARAGRAPH 2 choices, they may fail to consider the feelings of others. For example, a
Second viewpoint child may insist that he should be able to watch cartoon whenever he wants
Explanation to. He may not consider what other members of the family want to watch
Example on TV. If his parents allow him to have his way all the way, he will definitely
grow into a selfish person who does not care for others. It is, therefore,
important for parents to set the limits of the freedom their children can
have.
CONCLUSION In conclusion, I believe that even though children should be allowed to make
Summary their own choices, parents should teach them to respect the feelings of
Opinion others; otherwise, they may end up becoming selfish.
THANKS
Do you have any questions?

Irsa Wafiatul Qisthi

+62 896 1941 8519

irsa.ieltspresso@gmail.com

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