Introduction:

-In this modern society, with the advanced technology, education has changed a lot in many aspects.
This has raised the question whether school is still considered necessary for students or they can study
through the internet on their own

-I partly agree with this idea

Body 1: Agree

+Online information is available in many forms, for example audio, video, images, texts, etc -> students
can easily study without the assistance from other people

+Kids can access a wider range of knowledge in various fields which is convenient and available at the
fingertips

+helps to avoid financial costs that burden regular students, such as transportation, lower tuition fee
and accommodation

Body 2:

+Schools are undeniably of great importance in each person’s life

+Going to school helps kids improve their social skills, communication skills

+Not all information online is right

+Some students don’t have the awareness to study through the internet without teachers’ supervision.

Conclusion

-The internet is definitely a powerful tool to help children get access to much wider world of knowledge.
But we cannot deny the importance of conventional schools

-Students need to learn how to balance both sides so as to gain more benefits