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Body 1

- Want their children to be well rounded

Sp: improve career prospect

- Want the kids to follow their dream

Sp: past- can not fufill the dream- make children to follow that

Body 2 : (NEGATIVE)Health problems

-cause depression – bad behavior

SP: this is because- offspring- overload- stress

EX: Ha Noi- suicidie- parents force to study with an intense schedule

-exhausted- physical health

SP: stay at one place work- sedentary lifestyle

WRITING TASK 2

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In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been place on the opinion that

parents tend to put a strain on young child by forcing them to be successful without considering

their feelings. This tendency is attributed to a host of reasons and I firmly believe that it is a

detrimental development.
It is understandable why the caretaker want their childern to be well-rounded. First and formost,

this is due to the aspiration of improve the youth’s career prospect in the future. In fact, every

parents hold a dream of seeing their sons or daughters succeed and enter a pretigious university .

Therefore, strict management at the early age is necessary. Secondly, father and mothers also

desire to make the youngster to follow the dream, which they have not achieved yet. This is

because, in the past, due to the lack of money the caretaker were not able to fufill their dream so

that parents absribe their ambition to the kids. For that reasons, irrespective of how the young

feel, parents often put high pressure on them.

This trend also has an adverse bearing on children in some aspects. Initially, working with

intense schedule might cause several health problems. Indeed, it is said that the youth, nowadays,

face with despression in light of having lots of stress; thus, it leads to the occur of bad behavior

in children. For example, there was a high school students in Ha Noi commit suicide as the strict

supervision of his parents. Secondly, the bond between family members will be faded due to the

appearence of opposition between the kids and their caretakers. In other words, the young might

against their parents rules, which results in the deterioration of family relations.

In conclusion, while the benefits of making children to obey and work hard is undeniable, I am

convinced that it is a bad development. Additionally, parents should let the kids to do what they

want instead of putting a burden on them.

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● Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:

○ Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Why do parents do this?

■ Main idea 1: The predominant factor leading to this phenomenon is the

competitive attitude among parents (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt

khác: this parenting trend can also be attributed to cultural norms HOẶC:

Parents compete with their friends (reunions are mostly to brag about your

kids) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "boast" tiếng

anh

■ Supporting idea:

■ They have a feeling of pride when their child excels in

various fields and often associate it as matter of their status

in society (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Peer

pressure has urged parents to push their kids harder in order

to become the most accomplished individuals and bring

honor to their family)

■ Children’s fulfillment will mirrors on what happens around

them and parents believe that achieving much in life is a

good reflections.

■ Example: In most Asian countries, children doing poorly at schools

are considered a disgrace to their families. >> IELTS TUTOR

hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "argue" tiếng anh

■ Main idea 2: life is a race for success, so

■ arents may fear that they are not doing enough to position their child for

future achievements and that their child might be left behind

■ Supporting idea:
 ■ Parents often force their children to engage themselves in

various activities both of academic and non-academic

nature as they believe competency in different areas is

required for a successful life in future >> IELTS TUTOR

hướng dẫn Cách dùng "even"

■ In order to win the race and be honoured as a so-called

“successful” person, one must constantly compete with

others.

■ Example:

○ Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 Is this a positive or negative development for the

children?

■ Main idea 1: Chronic stress over how to achieve exceptional grades and

outstanding performance in extracurricular activities may put young

people at risk of developing depression, sleep deprivation and other

mental conditions (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: When

children feel the enormous pressure to meet their parents high

expectations, there are tendencies that they will suffer from mental health

and sleep deprivation) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng giới

từ "regarding" tiếng anh

■ Supporting idea:

■ This, in turn, may lead to various negative repercussions

such as deterioration in their mental health owing to

depression or anxiety.
 ■ In some circumstances, it can even lead to situations

wherein the child may decide to run away from home

because of his inability to deal with the stress.

■ Example: According to WHO, for instance, one in every five

children between the age group of 13 and 15 in Sri Lanka suffer

from depression due to parental pressure.

■ Main idea 2: By focusing solely on achievements, high-pressure parents

have taught their kids to fear failure and become unwilling to take risks.

■ Supporting idea: This is detrimental because people can only

succeed if they are allowed to fail, make mistakes and learn from

them. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "by" tiếng

anh

■ Example: