The bar chart illustrates the number of participants in the Olympics per year and also the number of

participants for female. The line graph, however, shows the total number of participants en the last
years in the Olympics.

At the bar chart is easy to see that the men have won significantly more successful than female. The
have participated more in the last years. In 1924 it was 2,300 participants and in 2012 it was 10,300
participants.

The line graph, on the other hand, shows the in total the number of participants in the Olympics’.
They can see it was incrementally up down in the las years.

To summarize therefore, both charts illustrate the increment of number of participants and shows
how the male are the most competitive in the Olympics and the last graph shows that it was
increment in near 8,000 participants more in the 2012.

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The pies chart shows the evolution about the online sales for different retail sectors like travel, film,
books and clothes in the New Zealand. To elaborate these graphs has been considered 2003 and
2013 years, where it evidence that in 2003 the travel sector it was a peak, however books sector was
least consumed. While in 2013 film sector was the most consumed sector.

The pie chart in 2003 easily indicate that sector books had less sales with 19%, if we compare this
sector with 2013 year its demonstrate that slightly increase to 22%. While films sector considerably
shooted up from 21% to 33% in online sales, however, travel section moderately rose from 36% to
29% in all New Zealand. In clothes sector significantly fell online sales in 8% to 2013.

In conclusion, therefore, both charts indicate that there are a lot of people that buy online through
from internet and it is leads for these principal four sectors in New Zealand, and actually film and
music section is the most consumed at market.