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AMDG

+ ATENEO DE ILOILO SMCS

Santa Maria Catholic School
Junior High School Unit
Atria Park District, Pison Ave., San Rafael, Mandurriao, Iloilo City

Submitted by: (Safero Dominique K. Roque, Jeah Mari L. Panganiban, Niña Marie S. Muleta,
Prabhjot S. Sivia, Joachim Gabriel G. Montejo)

Date Submitted: January 8, 2023 (Grade 8_Temperance)

Subjects: English, Science, TLE, ICT

Eggcellent eggs!

Did you know that eggs can be healthy for you? Eggs happen to be rich in protein
and can provide you with essential fatty acids and minerals such as zinc, iron, and copper.
They are also a good source of D, B2, and B12 vitamins. Additionally, they have high
concentrations of betaine and choline is important making them good for the heart.

Deviled eggs are also known as stuffed eggs, Russian eggs or dressed eggs.Are hard
boiled eggs that have been shelled cut in half and stuffed with egg yolks and other
ingredients.Such as mayonnaise and mustard usually served as a cold side dish and appetizer
at parties.

The deviled eggs are our very own product! You can have it all in this canape!The taste,
the healthiness, and the easy bites you can take. We prepare our ingredients in an orderly
manner for our product. First, we make sure to organize what ingredients we are using for
our deviled eggs. Second, we start preparing our ingredients to make the deviled eggs. Third,
we start cutting the eggs in bite-sized pieces. Fourth, we prepare our eggs to make it as
deviled eggs. Lastly, we season and top it off with our tasteful garnish. .We also make sure
that the ingredients we are using are appropriate and safe to use in making our product
because we want to provide the best-tasting deviled eggs. When you eat two deviled eggs, you
consume one whole hard-boiled egg, about 0.5 tablespoons of mayonnaise, and just a trace
amount of seasoning.

The ingredients we use are safe and non-allergic to the consumer of our product. We
want to make sure our product tastes like how we wanted it to taste. We also prioritize safety
for others when they consume our product, which is mainly our objective. Our ingredients
contain vitamins that are beneficial but are also safe for our product in making deviled eggs.
Our ingredients are for everyone whether they are non-vegan or vegan, they are suitable for
eating without triggering any allergic reactions.

Salmonellosis is an infection with a bacteria called Salmonella, Salmonella live in the

intestinal tracts of animals, including birds. Salmonella are usually transmitted to humans by
eating foods contaminated with animal feces. Salmonella can happen if the food is not cooked
properly or not done well. In Salmonellosis, there are symptoms that can happen once you
are infected by this illness. Diarrhea, Fever and stomach cramps are the symptoms in
Salmonellosis, which can last up to days. But to counter this, there are also ways to treat this
type of illness. We can treat this illness by drinking healthy fluids and taking prescribed
medicines to recover.

Food preparation can be helpful in avoiding diseases as it is quite serious. If we are

able to avoid this, this can be suitable for the people that will be consuming our deviled eggs.
This also helps us maintain our body in a healthy way if we do the proper food preparation.
Preparing our food in a clean and orderly manner has a big effect on the product we make, as
it can be safe to consume for the people. If the preparation of the food is not properly done,
this can cause some issues because of this.. For example, food security. We need to secure our
food as it is quite important to us since we need it in our daily lives. We don’t want to escalate
the issue more as it can get more serious.

What are the benefits of our product? Our product contains vitamins A, B5, B12, D, E,
K, B6.Vitamin A is important for our vision, growth, cell division, reproduction and
immunity, The vitamin b’s are important because they are one of the building blocks of the
body and can directly affect your energy and metabolism.Vitamin K can help retain and
absorb calcium and phosphorus. Vitamin K helps build proteins that are needed for blood
clotting and building bones.Sadly there are also negatives.If not eaten in moderation it
could cause you to have health problems such as heart problems and diabetes due to them
having lots of cholesterol.
 Our products are hard boiled eggs that have been shelled, cut and stuffed.It has
positives and negatives such as the vitamin A improving vision, growth, cell division,
reproduction and immunity.The b vitamins are good for being building blocks of your body
and can directly affect your energy. There are also other benefits from the other
vitamins.The negatives are the chance of diabetes and heart problems due to high
amounts of cholesterol.

References:

9 Health Benefits of Eating Eggs for Breakfast. (2016, October 25).

https://www.keckmedicine.org/blog/10-healthy-benefits-of-eating-eggs-for-breakfast/

Sandi Busch, A. A. (2018). SFGATE. Benefits of Deviled Eggs.

https://healthyeating.sfgate.com/benefits-deviled-eggs-7984.html

Lady’s Choice Health Benefits. (n.d.).

https://www.ladyschoice.com.ph/momspiration/lady-s-choice-health-benefits.

Physicians Committee for Responsible Medicine. (n.d.). Health Concerns With Eggs.
https://www.pcrm.org/good-nutrition/nutrition-information/health-concerns-with-eggs

Wikipedia contributors. (2022, December 29). Deviled egg. Wikipedia.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deviled_egg

Cronkleton, E. (2022, April 29). Why Is Vitamin B Complex Important, and Where Do I Get It?

Healthline. https://www.healthline.com/health/food-nutrition/vitamin-b-complex

Vitamin D. (2022, November 14). The Nutrition Source.

https://www.hsph.harvard.edu/nutritionsource/vitamin-d/
Vitamin K. (2019, July 2). The Nutrition Source.

https://www.hsph.harvard.edu/nutritionsource/vitamin-k/

Eggs: Are they good or bad for my cholesterol? (2022, January 21). Mayo Clinic.

https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/high-blood-cholesterol/expert-answers/cho

lesterol/faq-20058468

Department of Health. (2022, October 5) Causes and Symptoms of Salmonellosis.

https://www.health.state.mn.us/diseases/salmonellosis

CDC.GOV (2019) What are the symptoms of Salmonella?

https://www.cdc.gov/salmonella/general
PT Output #1: Draft 1/Outline ( 36 pts)

Criteria 4 3 2 1

- The persuasive - The persuasive - The persuasive - The persuasive

Structure speech includes a speech has a speech has a vague speech does not
clear introduction, slightly unclear introduction, body follow the correct
body, and introduction, and conclusion. format & or has
conclusion. body, and missing parts (intro,
conclusion. body, conclusion).

Hook The hook is catchy The hook is There is an attempt The hook does not get
and really gets the slightly catchy. to write a hook. the reader’s attention
reader's attention. Makes the readers However, it is at all.
curious to read unclear and not
more. catchy enough to
get the reader's
attention.

Thesis -The thesis - The thesis - The thesis - There is no thesis

statement statement is clearly statement is statement is stated, statement.
stated and strongly clearly stated. but unclear and
maintained. However, it is not unfocused.
strongly
maintained.

Organization - There is a logical - There is a - There is a weak - The ideas presented

(x2) connection and slightly connection among have no transitional
transition of ideas inconsistent ideas. connections.
from the beginning connection among
to the end. ideas from
beginning to the
end.

Evidence & - The content - The content - The evidence There is no evidence
Elaboration provides thorough provides provided does not provided. The content
and convincing somewhat support the main is purely from
evidence that thorough and idea. personal opinions.
supports the main convincing
idea. All ideas are evidence that
precise, relevant, & supports the main
comprehensible. idea.
.

Persuasive -The persuasive -The persuasive The persuasive There is an attempt to

Elements speech uses all the speech uses any speech uses one use the elements.
(Ethos, Logos, elements (ethos, of the two out of out of the three However, it is not
Pathos) logos, and pathos) the three elements (ethos, strongly maintained.
accurately & elements (ethos, logos, and pathos)
 effectively and is logos, and pathos) and is slightly
strongly effectively and is maintained all
maintained maintained all throughout the
throughout the throughout the text.
text. text.

Emphasis All the emphasis There are at least Only one emphasis There is an attempt to
Markers markers are used two emphasis marker is used in use an emphasis
(Emotive in the text markers used in the text and is marker. However, it is
Words, Personal accurately and the text accurately slightly maintained. not maintained and is
Pronouns, effectively. and effectively. inaccurate.
Exaggeration,
Repetition)

Conventions in Demonstrates Demonstrates Does not adhere to The content lacks

writing correct standard minimal errors on the correct use of command of Standard
English grammar the use of standard English English convention.
convention standard English convention. (Correct grammar,
(Correct grammar, convention. (Correct grammar, capitalization,
capitalization, (Correct grammar, capitalization, spelling etc.)
spelling etc.) capitalization, spelling etc.)
spelling etc.)