Agnes Ayudante TEACHING READING TO THE BEGINNING READERS OF THE 21ST CENTURY

USING ORAL GRAPHIC LANGUAGE PROGRAM (OGSL)

Consider the title: The effect of Oral Graphic Language program to beginning
readers’ word recognition and comprehension
You may cite more studies that show the effectiveness of OGSL
Strength: Citing both local and foreign sources
You only have one independent variable, which must be labelled properly.
Main goal should indicate that you will ascertain the effect.
Include instruments
Consider deleting “level” in order for you to have more choices in your
statistical analysis especially in the inferential analysis
(no need to justify in the paper… Why don’t you consider including a
comparison group? )
Use APA format for citing secondary sources
Revise matrix for review of related literature.
Almodiente Use the COE Research Format
Heading will be the same
Use APA format for citing secondary sources
Improve the rationale
Allot one box for one independent variable
Review the spelling of the words
In the background of the study, discuss the rationale for the intervention.
Discuss the figure in relation to the theoretical framework.
Have one research question that aims to find the if there is a significant
difference in the pretest and posttest for each group.
State the inferential questions after the descriptive questions.
Improve the definition of your intervention.

Consider deleting “antas” especially in the inferential questions.

Specify the type of quasi experimental research. Cite your source.

Baldad Delete attitude

Cite local studies in the background
Attitude may not be included
Decide if you will use action research or experiment. Though, an experiment
may be embedded in an action research, your research goal must be aligned
with your research design.
Revise research questions and the “last parts” of your paper.
Calimotan Heading should be the same
There could be a better research problem that you will focus on.
Paradigm is no needed.
If you can’t provide a rationale for your IV, just delete the IV.
Your paradigm is not appropriate for qualitative research
We need to meet and talk.
Capospos PAGSUSURI NG IT’S NOT THAT COMPLICATED NI EROS S. ATALIA
GAMIT ANG DULOG NA QUEER

Paradigm is not required.

If you want to include a paradigm, you need to improve it
Explain theory queer. Your research questions must be based on your
theory.

Explain the significance of your study in education.

Gomez THE EFFECT OF SCHOOL-BASED FEEDING PROGRAM ON the READING

PERFORMANCE of wasted and severely wasted pupils

 You need to have a theory that connects the biological needs and intellectual or
reading performance

Specify the type of experimental research

Will you use height and weight?

Recognize the weakness of your research… There could be extraneous variables

in your research.
Orbino Good writing
Just use the IV-DV format for the paradigm or you may use an action research
paradigm
Please include qualitative research questions based on the action research
paradigm
please don’t use wiki as a source
work with parents or with other teachers

Belgira Use Oxford comma

Provide a rationale for the variables (note that strategies are not included)
Teacher is not an independent variable
Paradigm is not required
Why do you need IV? Your choices must be justified.
Diaresco Use action research paradigm , review research questions, describe the
instruments, look for a better theory, make this research collaborative
Fabila Inclusion of the instruments and discussion of literature are commendable…
but in a correlational research, there is no intervention. Let us meet and discuss
for us to align your research goals and design
Jayme Title needs improvement… learners are not variables. .. survey involves a large
sample. Take time to reflect on the revision of the title and research goals

Pastrana Check the spelling… the title should clearly show what will be analyzed and
what theoretical lens will be used in the analysis

There are broad terms such as popular culture that must be revised.
Specify the focus of your study or else data collection will be overwhelming.
Sadsad Consider: Effectiveness of Synthetic Phonics Instruction in Spelling and

Word Recognition of Struggling Readers

Use future tense

Revise research questions
Specify the type of experimental research

Serra Inclusion of IV must be rationalized

Please improve the title
Specify the descriptive design…
Revise research questions because some questions could not be answered
through this research