高考应用文写作技巧(1)

1. 分词的使用
五、好作文中必须出现的几个句式 ① 分词表时间先后：

1. 分词的使用 Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.(辽宁)

2 With结构
2. ② 分词写景物：Bathed in the sunshine and delighted
g byy
fantastic scenery, we headed for …
3. It句式
③ 分词写逻辑：Encouraged by the fact that …, we
4. 倒装
made every effort to do …
5 定语从句
5.

2. With结构 3. It句式

① 描写人物： ① It is + adj./n. + for sb. to do sth.

He was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on his It iis vital
it l ffor us tto llearn computer
t well,
ll because
b it has
h
shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand. changed our life so much.
② 描写景物： ② It is + 被强调部分 + that…
With the brilliant sunshine carpeting the way home, I It is through the Internet that we can learn more.
rushed to the destination, energetic and excited. ③ It做形式主语的主语从句
③ 描写事件：A terrible accident happened yesterday,
yesterday It would mean a ggreat deal to me to listen to the tape
p
with nine people killed and almost eighty injured. and learn what is covered in the talk. （全国卷）

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 4. 倒装
5. 定语从句
① Only/Not only 位于句首
① 两句并一句：
Only in this way can we…
Only by this means can we… The fl
Th flatt iis in
i a building
b ildi on Fangcao
F Street.
St t It is
i nott far
f
Only via this means can we… from Jianxin Chinese School.→
M l via
Merely i this
thi means can we… The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not
far from Jianxin Chinese School. (全国卷)
② 地点状语位于句首
地 句首 ② which指代前一句话：
On the wall hangs a picture of our family.
It was q
quite an experience
p for us both, which I’ll never
③ As引导的前置结构
Ridiculous as the picture seems, it still represents a forget for the rest of my life. (北京卷)
phenomenon / tendency / trend that … …

2014考书信体作文的省份： “贴近生活”
1. 【全国Ⅰ卷】咨询信 “注重实际运用能力”
2 【北京卷】道歉信
2.
3. 【天津卷】介绍信 1考老师，2考记忆力
4. 【浙江卷】建议信
5 【上海卷】建议信
5.
6. 【安徽卷】建议信
7. 【四川卷】告知信

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 斐斐点睛 开头段落

虎头———猪肚———凤尾
虎头 猪肚 凤尾 1. 问候：
2. 自我介绍（同位语＋定从/分词）
问候 I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in
包含要点1 客套
自我介绍 Xinhua high school. Born in a family of writers, I’m keen
包含要点2 +
背景 格式 on reading novels and writing poems.
包含要点3
目的

喜欢
sb.
b iis fascinated
f i d with…
ih 1. 我得知..
sb. is immersed in… （湖北）我从网上得知你们学校提供食宿。
sb. is in love with… （天津）我从老师那儿得知你将来我校交换。
sb.
b iis crazy about…
b （
（安徽）我从你的来信中得知你近日容易发脾气，
）我
sb. is addicted to… 使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。

sb. is devoted to…

开头段落

3. 故事背景（我之所以写信，是因为…）
事背景（我 为 ）
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 开头段落 书信体作文

3. 故事背景（我之所以写信，是因为…） 建议信
I was informed by…that… 申请信
I was kept up to date on… 感谢信
I learned in your micro-blog that… 道歉信
4. 目的（我想申请/邀请/道歉/求助…） 邀请信
I’m writing this letter to… 求助信
咨询信
告知信

I am writingg these letters to offer yyou

建议信 邀请信 I am writing
iti tot invite
i it you to
t join
j i the....
th
some suggestions.

I am writing
iti to
t apply
l for
f the
th job/
j b/ I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
favor
申请信 求助信 I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
position/chance/opportunity.

I am writing to express my heartfelt I am writing to ask you for some

感谢信 咨询信
gratitude/appreciation to you
you. relevant questions.

I am writing to express my heartfelt I am writing

g to inform you
y of some
道歉信 告知信
apology to you. relevant details.

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 1. 建议信 结尾段：

开头段：I am writing these letters to offer you some suggestions. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. If there is
anything else I can do for you
you, please let me know.
know
中间段：
Here are several suggestions for you. 【2014浙江卷】
(1) You should/ought to do sth. 学校图书馆需要购置 批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，
(2) You are supposed to do sth. 你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文
(3) Why not do sth.?
sth ? 学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120
books) 请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120
(4) If I were you, I would do sth. 词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
(5) It is high time that you did sth. 注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。

Dear Mr.
Mr Wang,
Wang Dear Mr. Wang,
（故事背景+写信目的）
_____________________________________________
Informed that our library is going to buy books
books, I am writing this
_______________________________________
letter to offer some suggestions.
Yours sincerelyy
Li Yue
提建议：
What we need most are popular science books. Owing
to…(Because…)
( )
In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and
p
inspiration. That is whyy I recommend another category
g y of books：
literary books. As for the reasons,…
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结尾段： 2. 申请信
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. If there is
开头段：I am writing to apply for the job/position/ chance/opportunity.
anything else I can do for you, please let me know.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue

中间段：
I have the confidence that I can handle the job well.
As for the reasons, for one thing, … for another, …

申请项目：志愿者 支教老师 夏令营 记者

申请项目：志愿者、支教老师、夏令营、记者 (2) 知识类：
① Once I won the second prize in the CCTV national English
申请理由：
speaking contest.
(1) 经验类：
② In my spare time, I used to communicate with my foreign friends
① Living in Ottawa/Seattle for half a year as an exchange student,
student I
through the Internet, exchanging ideas on cultural difference and
do well in English speaking and writing.
current affairs.
② In
I 2008
2008, I served
d as a volunteer
l t iin th
the B
Beijing
iji Olympic
Ol i Games,
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therefore, I was equipped with adequate relevant experience and
social skills.

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 (3) 性格类： 斐斐点睛
① I’m also the vice monitor of my class, which has equipped me with
虎头———猪肚———凤尾
虎头 猪肚 凤尾
a strong body and the ability of leadership.
② Being the team leader of our school basketball team, I get along
问候
well with my teammates, enjoy many outstanding awards and a 包含要点1 客套
自我介绍
harmonious interpersonal
p relationship
p in my
y team. 包含要点2 +
背景 格式
包含要点3
目的
结尾段：
Hopefully, the chance would be offered to me. If so, I would devote all
my effort
ff and
d wisdom
id to your company/this
/ hi activity.
i i

Until you make peace with who you are,

are you
you’ll
ll never be content
with what you have.
除非你能和真实的自己和平相处 否则你永远不会对已拥有
除非你能和真实的自己和平相处，否则你永远不会对已拥有
的东西感到满足。