FORM OF AUTHOR REPLAY AIP CONFERENCE PROCEEDING
IN CONJUNCTION WITH 3rd-IC2MS 2021
Manuscript Code : Paper 47
Manuscript Title : Identification of Ammonia as A Biomarker of Chronic Kidney
Disease by Gas Sensor Array
Reviewer ( 1 / 2 / 3 )*
Reviewer Comment
1. The title does not describe the contents
of the manuscript. The authors did not
examine the actual samples (infectious
disease samples) from kidney disease
patients. They only demonstrated the
proposed method for ammonia and other
solutions. Therefore, the title should be
changed, for example, “ The
development of gas sensor array for
selective detection of ammonia.”
2. The novelty of this work should be
emphasized in the abstract, and in the
introduction section as well.
3. Sensing mechanism of the proposed
method towards ammonia is not clear.
4. Chemical reactions in equations (1) to
(4) must be revised. Is oxygen ion O-?
5. Please provide a figure/photograph of
the sensor
6. English needs improvement.
* Please cross out the unnecessary answer
Author Replay
The title in the manuscript has been
revised according to your suggestion.
Thank you very much for your advice.
The novelty of this research lays on the
application of gas sensor array to detect
compounds that not specified as the
target compounds of the sensors that
applied. The analysis based on the
pattern of these cross selective and cross
sensitive sensor array. Some revisions
have been both in the abstract and in the
introduction.
Sensing mechanism was based on the
related literatures in the references.
Detail reactions and proposed mechanism
could be found in the literature that cited.
The reaction is in accordance to the
literature that cited.
The sensor image has been added in the
manuscript (Fig. 1)
Some revision on grammar and sentences
have been done, hopefully the manuscript
become more readable, thank you.