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Comet

- 0:03 english text “i nto”  should be “into”


- From 0:50 to the end, there are many texts with incorrect cut. The japanese and english
are not the same, both in length and their meanings  Remake all of this
Racing into the night
- I like the animation you create in 0:17, would it be possible to re-use this in future MV?
It’s suit to use when the beat drop like that
- 0:43 there are 2 square texts in english, remove it
- 2:49 english text should be cut after “truth”, the rest should be move to next line
- From 2:51 to the end, texts are incorrect  Remake from this to the end
Monster
- This song have a lot of beat drops, and it’s also very fast rhythm too. So the cozy
animation with slow motion is not fit.  Can you change it to some fast animation? Like
heart pumping for example?
- The distance between japanese and english text is not consistent  Please make it the
same for the rest of video
- 1:12 lyric text hidden by the video frame
- 1:27 the lyrics has end but you keep it until 1:32  remove the (Ah) in the romaji and
hide the text after it end. For the (Ah) you can make another line
- 2:11 text is not center
Idol
- This song also have fast rhythm so it’s not fit with slow animation  Can you change it?
I would like to use the stage animation for this (the animation near the end)
- Also you scale the face too close
Flower
- The face scaled too close. The image for this MV has already very close so you shouldn’t
use scale
Pollen and Lipstick
- I feel like the blue lyrics for male singer is not show up clearly. Please check if you can
improve it
Dragon Night
- Overall it’s good
- From 0:54 to 1:13 is free beat, it will be better if you apply some animations in there like
you did with all the videos above. The same will be applied to 2:04 to 2:34, and from 3:17
to the end.
- This song is about 2 people stop fighting and truce, so I would like you focus on 1
character in each part, and show both of them when sings the chorus “Dragon Night”
Victims
- Everything is good
- The bear is missing his ears in the MV but it’s okay, you just need to be careful next time
Nomad
- Why you focus on the hand of this character for half of the song? You should both scale
and transition it so the face of character showing earlier
- Everything else is good
Blessing
- I like the transition you make, it’s refreshing. But you should make transition when the
song changes part. The art suddenly change when singings is something I don’t want.
- As for the rest, all is good
Fireworks
- It’s got copyrighted and can’t be uploaded  Can you change the speed to 95%?
Level 5
- It’s got copyrighted and has been removed  Can you change the speed to 95%?

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