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    The peer feedback for the script praised the ending for being unexpected with the doll coming back to life at the end. While the reviewer thought the script could have been scarier by showing more horror, they still enjoyed it overall and found it had a good balance of dialogue and actions. The script was also considered easy to follow and not boring.

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    The peer feedback for the script praised the ending for being unexpected with the doll coming back to life at the end. While the reviewer thought the script could have been scarier by showing more horror, they still enjoyed it overall and found it had a good balance of dialogue and actions. The script was also considered easy to follow and not boring.

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    The peer feedback for the script praised the ending for being unexpected with the doll coming back to life at the end. While the reviewer thought the script could have been scarier by showing more horror, they still enjoyed it overall and found it had a good balance of dialogue and actions. The script was also considered easy to follow and not boring.

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    Peer feedback

    1. Is the script scary enough? Is there anything I should change to make it creepier? I
    think there could have been a bit more horror involved I would of liked to see John
    get scared a bit too. But I did still enjoy it

    2. Is the ending strong enough? Should I change it? I really liked the ending I’m glad it
    didn’t end with the just them burying the doll and it actually coming back right at the
    end

    3. Did you like the script? Please elaborate why yes or no. Yes it was easy to follow and I
    liked the horror aspect

    4. Is it boring? Is there anything I could do to make it more interesting? No it wasn’t


    boring

    5. Is the dialogue realistic? Yes I liked the use of the actions they were both making
    during the script it wasn’t just straight dialouge

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