Peer feedback

1. Is the script scary enough? Is there anything I should change to make it creepier?

It definitely works the way it is however if you wanted to amp up the creepiness, I
feel like the doll can do more creepy stuff than just jumping from place to place.
Maybe show it destroying something or something equally as creepy.

2. Is the ending strong enough? Should I change it?

Yes. I love the revelation of the doll getting out of being buried.

3. Did you like the script? Please elaborate why yes or no.

I really liked it. I like the whole premise of the story and I think it works excellently for
a short film.

4. Is it boring? Is there anything I could do to make it more interesting?

Overall, it’s not boring, as I said above, I think changing up how the doll is creepy
could help make it more interesting.

5. Is the dialogue realistic?

Occasionally, it flitters between who is scared of the doll, I don’t know if this is
intentional or not. The dialogue for the most part is realistic in my opinion,
occasionally they talk a little bit too much but I don’t think this takes away from the
script at all.