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    The document contains peer feedback on a script. The feedback suggests that the script contains scary elements and has a good cliffhanger ending revealing a doll. While the dialogue between characters was enjoyed, it was suggested that making the doll attack or write on a wall could make the script more interesting. The dialogue was praised as being realistic and believable for the characters.

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    Peer feedback

    1. Is the script scary enough? Is there anything I should change to make it creepier?
    There’s plenty of scary elements throughout.

    2. Is the ending strong enough? Should I change it? I think that the reveal of the doll on
    the counter is a good cliff hanger ending

    3. Did you like the script? Please elaborate why yes or no. I liked the dialogue between
    john and Yvonne and the script was very enjoyable

    4. Is it boring? Is there anything I could do to make it more interesting? The doll could
    maybe attack one of them or could write something in dirt on a wall

    5. Is the dialogue realistic? The dialogue is very good and makes me believe that they
    are a couple.

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