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    The document contains peer feedback on a script. The feedback provider found the script to be creepy rather than scary, thought the ending was fine as is, liked the script for its good flow and found it interesting rather than boring, and thought the dialogue seemed realistic.

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    The document contains peer feedback on a script. The feedback provider found the script to be creepy rather than scary, thought the ending was fine as is, liked the script for its good flow and found it interesting rather than boring, and thought the dialogue seemed realistic.

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    Emilys Peer Feedback Sheet From Kai

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    The document contains peer feedback on a script. The feedback provider found the script to be creepy rather than scary, thought the ending was fine as is, liked the script for its good flow and found it interesting rather than boring, and thought the dialogue seemed realistic.

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    Peer feedback

    1. Is the script scary enough? Is there anything I should change to make it creepier?

    It think it’s more creepy than scary

    2. Is the ending strong enough? Should I change it?

    I think the ending its fine as it is

    3. Did you like the script? Please elaborate why yes or no.

    I like it, it has a good flow to it that makes sense

    4. Is it boring? Is there anything I could do to make it more interesting?

    No it seems interesting

    5. Is the dialogue realistic?

    Yes it seems like it is

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