TUGAS TUTORIAL KE-2

1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |rdutta@email.com | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | vincent.prasad@email.com | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked
with who has always distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we
first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams.
Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but
also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely
confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the
skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can quickly become
an asset and help your company grow.

If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)
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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms
of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown

Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)
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3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.
NAMA : ALFAND EDNANSYAH
NIM : 048432128
Permission to Answer
1. - The letter was addressed to Vincent Prasad
- Explains Ashley's skills and abilities
- sender or creator of the letter

2. - Error writing the word thank you: In the letter, the word thank u
The correct word should be thank you
- Date error: The letter was written on July 21 2021, but in the letter it says
4 July which should be 4 July
- Error in writing the word and: In the sentence " We are pleased to
enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts ", the word and should be written
correctly
- Error writing the "n" word: In the sentence "We hope you will find our
prices n terms satisfactory", the word "n" is used instead of "and" which
should be written correctly.
- Job title error: In the sentence "Robert Brown Sales Manage", the word
"Manage" should be written as "Manager".

3. Dear Prof. Allen Smith,

On behalf of the organizing committee, I would like to express our

deepest gratitude for accepting our invitation to be guest speakers at the
upcoming international seminar. Your expertise and insight in this area of
education is highly valued, and we are honored to have you as part of
our distinguished panel of speakers.

Your presence and contribution will undoubtedly enrich the seminar and
provide valuable knowledge to the participants. We believe that your
extensive experience and research in the world of education will be of
great benefit to participants and inspire fruitful discussions.

We have carefully designed the seminar program to ensure a dynamic

and engaging experience for all participants. Your keynote address on
the educational Seminar is highly anticipated, and we are confident it will
captivate the audience and encourage further exploration of the subject.

Once again, thank you for your willingness to share your expertise with us.
We greatly appreciate your commitment to advancing knowledge in this
area and your support for our seminars. We look forward to welcoming
you to our event and to the valuable insights you will bring.

If you have special requirements or need further information, please do

not hesitate to contact us. We will be happy to help you as much as we
can.

Thank you again, and we really look forward to welcoming you to this
seminar.

Regards,

Alfand Ednansyah
seminar chairman
Advanced Organization los dol