Vélez Rivera 1

Mirelys Z. Vélez Rivera

Dr. Cynthia Aradillas

ENGL 1302-181

October 2023

Instructor Feedback

Professor Comments on First Draft:

 Fix MLA Date

 Make sure the writing is double-spaced.

 Text presents evidence to support the thesis statement but lacks connections to show

conversations among the sources.

 Subpoints somewhat correspond to the thesis statement and are somewhat supported by

textual evidence from the sources.