写作技巧 1

Three paragraphs
Para1. Opinion/Phenomenon/Choice
Para 2. Reasons /Pros and Cons of sth./Lists
Para 3. Conclusion/ Prospects of sth./ What should we do?
A good essay must meet the following standards:
1.To the point. 2. Coherence.
3. No grammar or spelling mistakes. 4. Advanced vocabulary and sentences.
5. Good handwriting.

1.阐述观点的一二三原则
(1) to begin with, furthermore, finally
(2）to start with, in addition, finally
(3）to begin with, more importantly, finally
(4）first of all, in addition, most importantly
(5）first and foremost, besides, last but not least ( last but certainly not least 最后但是肯定不是
最不重要的是)（推荐）
(6) most important of all, moreover, finally
(7) on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
(8）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
2、短语优先原则
The students should have ability of critical thinking.
The students should cultivate the ability to put forward questions, which is the cornerstone of
critical thinking.
3、多变句式原则(1)加法
Currently, some people tend to live in big cities to enjoy the comfort, convenience and advanced
technology which big cities bring to them, while others prefer to live in the countryside to enjoy
the peace, relaxation and coziness.
（2）超级句式：not only…… but also
Not only can online shopping bring us convenience, but it can also save a large amount of
money, for the same commodities you buy online tend to be much cheaper than those in shopping
malls.
（3）因果
then, *therefore, *consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, as a consequence , for this reason,
so that, thereby
There is a vast ocean of information online ,in newspapers or on TV. Consequently, it is
imperative for us to analyze, sort out and identify information in order that we can absorb
information which is useful and informative.
（4) 附加 在句子中穿插定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语，使句子有变化。
For one thing, in such an information explosion age, almost every corner of our life seems stuffed
with misleading information, as a consequence of which, people have to consume much time and
energy to obtain the correct information.
（5）排比（排山倒海句）

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一个个的排比句，一个个的对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文
章有排山倒海之势！
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London
for you.

高级词汇和句式
随着经济的繁荣和社会的进步 with the booming of the economy and the advancement of the
society
随着人民生活水平的显著提高 with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard
先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
为我们日常生活增添了情趣 add much spice / flavor to our daily life
人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed that…
众所周知：It’s universally acknowledged that...
我同意前者(后者)观点 I give my vote to the former / latter opinion.
引 起 了 广 泛 的 公 众 关 注 sth. has aroused wide public concern. / sth has drawn great public
attention.
不可否认 It is undeniable that…
热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion / debate
有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
双方的论点 argument on both sides
发挥日益重要作用 play an increasingly important role in…
对…必不可少 be indispensable to …
正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:
对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive / negative effects/impacts on…
利远远大于弊 The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
导致，引起 lead to / give rise to / contribute to / result in
复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
责任感/ 成就感 sense of responsibility / achievement
竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
开阔眼界 broaden one's horizon/widen one's horizon / broaden one's vision
学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into consideration
从另一个角度 from another perspective
做出共同努力 make joint efforts
对…有益 be beneficial to / be conducive to…
为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for…
综合素质 comprehensive quality
致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…
应当承认 Admittedly,
不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty

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满足需求 satisfy / meet the needs of... / cater to one’s needs
可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母 I 大写)
方便快捷 convenient and efficient
在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
环保的材料 environmentally friendly materials
社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
大大方便了人们的生活 sth has greatly facilitated people's lives.
对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
在一定程度上 to some extent
理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
…必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…
日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce /keen social competition
眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
长远利益 long-term interest
从长远来看 in the long run/term
从短期来看 in the short run/term
相反地 on the contrary/ conversely
词汇 普通版 高级版
越来越 more and more an increasing number of, increasing(ly), growing number of people
很，非常 very extremely, exceedingly, intensely, awfully
人 people, persons individuals, characters, folks
各行各业的
all kinds of people people from all walks of life
人
因此，结果 so therefore
因为 because in that
最后 at last eventually
然而 but however, whereas
表明 show demonstrate, indicate，illustrate
记住 remember bear in mind that…, bear/keep sb./sth. in mind
引起、导致 cause lead to, contribute to, give rise to, result in, trigger
提高 improve enhance
改变 change transform, alter
利用 use utilize, take advantage of
强调，重视 emphasize attach great importance to
知道 know be aware of
好的 good desirable, beneficial, advantageous, favorable, rosy, promising, superior
坏的 bad undesirable, unfavorable, dreadful, adverse
美丽的 beautiful attractive, gorgeous, eye-catching
有活力的 energetic dynamic, vigorous
健康的 healthy robust, sound, wholesome

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富裕的 rich wealthy, well-to-do, well-off, affluent
贫穷的 poor needy, impoverished, poverty-stricken
明显的 obvious apparent, evident, manifest
流行的 popular prevailing, prevalent
有帮助的 helpful beneficial, rewarding, conducive
很多 many numerous, a large number of, a host of, an army of, a sea of, a multitude of
人们认为 People think (that) It is considered that…
I reckon…/ I hold the view that…/ For my part, …/ From my own perspective,
我认为 I think…/ In my …/ From my standpoint, …/ All things considered…/ If you ask me…/ As far
在我看来 opinion… as I’m concerned, …/ Personally, …/ To tell you the truth, …/ To be honest,
…/ To be frank, …/ Frankly speaking, …

2021-12-1 大学英语四级真题作文 Part I Writing (30minutes)

Directions: Suppose your school is organizing an orientation program to help the freshmen adapt
to the new environment and academic studies. You are now to write a proposal, which may
include its aim, duration, participants and activities. You will have 30 minutes to write the
proposal. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

范文 A Proposal for the Orientation Program

Dear school leaders,
To help freshmen adjust to our university life and ease their transition into college, as a
sophomore from Medical School, I propose that an orientation program should be offered.
The suggested details are as follows.First and foremost, considering the COVID-19
pandemic,the program combines online courses that students must complete before the start of
classes on September 8th with offline activities to be held in our gym or playground from
September 1st to 7th.The virtual program will contain an introduction to the various resources and
opportunities available to freshmen, including academic support, health and security knowledge,
and a welcome speech addressed by school leaders,etc.For the offline activities, there will be
military training which is an opportunity for freshmen to socialize with each other while further
engaging with campus faculty and staff.Finally, all freshmen are required to participate in and
complete the orientation program.
Through this program, I believe, first-year students will lay the ground/foundation for future
learning, exploration and social networking.社交.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
socialize [ˈsəʊʃəlaɪz] vi.（与…）交往，联谊; 参与社交;
virtual [ˈvɜːtʃuəl] adj.实质上的，事实上的; （计算机）虚拟的;
二：作文常用句子
图表作文常用句型
*As is vividly depicted in the picture, .....正如图所描述的
*As is vividly shown/demonstrated/illustrated/ described in the cartoon/picture, .....正如图所描述
的

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 As is shown in the picture/graph… 如图所示…
The picture shows that… 图画显示…
As can be seen from the table, … 从表格中可以看出…
From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…
All these data clearly prove the fact that…
所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即….
The picture reveals/ uncovers/ shows/ demonstrates a serious phenomenon in modern
society， that is ，… 图画揭露了现代社会一个严重的现象，那就是
这些词要了解：
graph 柱状图 table 表格 pie chart 饼状图

The increase of …. in the city has reached 20%.这个城市的….增长已达到 20%.

In 1985, the number remained the same. 1985 年,这个数字保持不变.
There was a gradual decline in 1989. 1989 年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.
英语四六级作文基本句式总结 1
1.表示原因
*1)There are three reasons which can account for this trend/tendency/ phenomenon.
*2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
*There are three reasons which can account for the changes that have taken place in our life.
Firstly ， people’s living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly ， most people are well
paid ， and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least ， more and more people
prefer to enjoy modern life.
2.表示好处
1)It has the following advantages. 2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot. *4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us. * 6) .... is conducive to us
*Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better and they can open our eyes and
broaden our horizons. Therefore，reading extensively is extremely conducive to the mental well-
being as well as the formation of outlook on life and value.
3.表示坏处 1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmful to us.
*There are pros and cons of shopping on line
*There are both advantages and disadvantages of shopping on line.
*..... is a double-edged sword. ....... 是一把双刃剑。
*Just as a coin has two sides, .... has both advantages and disadvantages.
*.... has both merits and demerits.

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 *... has both advantages and drawbacks.
The advantages of shopping on line far outweigh the disadvantages.
However，everything has two sides. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our
health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1)It is important( significant 重要的, necessary，imperative,必要的 difficult，convenient
方便的， possible)for sb.to do sth.
2)We think it necessary to do sth.
3)It plays an important role in our life.
**…is playing an increasingly important/ significant role in our life
…… 在我们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用
have positive impact on 对……有积极影响
have negative impact on 对……有消极影响
*have both positive and negative impact on 对……既有积极影响也有消极影响
*exert positive influence on 对……有积极影响
Computers are now being used everywhere ， whether in the government ， in schools or in
business. Soon， computers will be found in every home，too. We have good reason to say that
computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the
Computer Age.

一、用于作文开头的：
1、Many people insist that... 很多人(坚持)认为……
2、With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that... 随着科
技的发展,越来越多的人认为……
3、A lot of people seem to think that... 很多人似乎认为……
4. 众说周知*** It’s universally acknowledged that…
It’s wildly acknowledged that…. It’s well-known that …
As we all know, .....
5. ***an increasing number of people /people in mounting numbers/an unprecedented number of
people/ people with increasing numbers 越来越多的人
二、引出不同观点的：
1、People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe
that.... 人们对……的观点因人而异。有些人认为.....然而其他人却认为……
2、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
3、People may have different opinions on... 人们对……可能会有不同的见解。
4、There are different opinions among people as to... 关于……人们的观点大不相同。
5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure).
对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。
三、得出最终结论的：
1、Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that...
因此，自然我们得出以下结论。。。
**2、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
**There is no doubt that job-hopping has its merits and demerits.
*There is no doubt that job-hopping has both pros and cons.

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 **There is no doubt that job-hopping has both advantages and disadvantages.
毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。
3、All in all, we cannot live without... But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to
cope with the problems that would arise. 总之，我们没有……是无法生活的。但同时，我们必
须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
***4. in a nutshell, to sum up, in a word, to conclude, in conclusion , all in all, in summary 总之
in short 简而言之
四、提出最终建议的：
1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
"It is high time" 打头，为该句增色。注：that 后跟虚拟语气，后跟动词的一般过去式，
表示“是某人做...的时候了
**It’s high time we took prompt and effective measures to change the situation.
2、It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ... 该是采
纳……的建议，
3、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ... 毫无疑问，对……
问题应予以足够的重视。
4、Obviously,.... If we want to do something... , it is essential that... 显然，如果我们想做某事，
我们需要……
5、Only in this way can we... 只有这样,我们才能...
Only by adopting positive attitude can we ensure a bright future.
6、It must be realized that... 我们必须意识到...
五、预示后果：
1、Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that... will lead us in danger.
很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险。
2、No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that...
毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则很可能会……
六、作文结尾句子
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 应立即采取措施阻止
这一事态的发展。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.
… has increasingly become a common concern of the public，according to a survey, 调查内容说
明这种现象的情况(或者是一个例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.
导致这种问题\现象有几个原因
… has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated( 表
达)in the following aspects…..给我们的社会和日常生活带来很多影响，主要有下面几方面：
A dozen of measures are supposed to be taken to prevent … from bringing us more harm.
我们应该采取一些措施来预防…..带来更多危害。

2021-12-1 六级真题 Part I Writing (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay related to the short passage
given below. In your essay, you are to comment on the phenomenon described in the passage and
suggest measures to address the issue. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200
words.

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Some parents in China are overprotective of their children. They plan everything for their
children, make all the decisions for them, and do not allow them to explore on their own in case
they make mistakes or get hurt.
范文 1：
provoke [prəˈvəʊk] vt.激起，引起； namely ： that is 即
thought- provoking 发人深省的 accumulate [əˈkjuːmjəleɪt] v.积累，积聚;
be prone to ：tend to 倾向于 torture[ˈtɔːtʃə(r)] n. 折磨; 痛苦; vt.使痛苦;
Currently, a universal phenomenon has provoked wide-spread concern from the public,
namely, some parents in China are overprotective of their children. There are some thought-
provoking reasons behind it.
To begin with, overprotective parents are so worried about their children that they are prone
to plan and do everything for their children . More importantly, they love their children and any
physical or mental labor would be regarded as a torture for their children. Consequently/, they
prefer to do themselves.
In a bid to (为了）address the issue positively and effectively, some measures should be taken
by overprotective parents. For one thing, parents are suggested to encourage their children to
explore the world bravely, allowing them to make mistakes because on certain occasions these
experiences will enrich their life and they can accumulate knowledge and skills from it. For
another thing , parents can give their children constructive and positive suggestions and guidance
on their study and life so that their children can adapt themselves better to the environment and the
society.
In a nutshell, only by adopting the above measures can overprotected children step out of the
ivory -tower 象牙塔 set by their parents. (192 words)

范文 2：There has been such a phenomenon in China that some parents are overprotective of
their children by planning everything and making all the decisions for them for the sake of their
not making mistakes or getting hurt. The thought-provoking reasons triggering this phenomenon
are as follows.
Firstly, parental disbelieving for their children's capability to take good care of themselves and
worrying about their offspring's well-being and safety may present a problem that parents are
prone to arrange everything beforehand for their children. Apart from this, the meticulous care
from parents appears to be the core reason for the occurrence of the phenomenon. It's noteworthy
that children may lack the corresponding competence to cope with the obstacles and setbacks on
the course of their life if being over-protected. Consequently, parents are supposed to alter their
former educational mode, foster their children's resilience, stress tolerance and optimistic
mentality, thereby leaving them more independent and self-assured through enabling them to
tackle the problems by themselves.
offspring：descendant 后代 meticulous [məˈtɪkjələs] adj.谨小慎微的；
mentality [menˈtæləti] n.心理; 智力; resilience [rɪˈzɪliəns] n.耐受力；弹性；弹力；