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Benefits:
People can have/earn financial independence They can earn extra pocket money and learn to
manage that money.
Young people can learn a lot of useful skills communication skills, time management,
problem-solving skills, teamwork skills.
Drawbacks:
Distraction from the study have negative effects on study results difficult to find a proper
full-time job later.
Have bad effects on health invest more time when having a part-time job.
3. Many people believe that working smart (work smart) (plans + goals) can help people easily get
successful. To what extent do you agree with the statement?
Smart work leads to better results: When you have a goal in mind, you’re more likely to achieve
it than if you’re just working hard without a clear objective.
Smart work is more efficient: You can achieve more in less time when you work smart. By being
strategic and focused, you can eliminate wasted time and effort.
Smart work builds good habits: Working hard without a goal can lead to bad habits, such as
procrastination and disorganization. On the other hand, smart work fosters good habits, such as
planning and prioritizing.
Smart work is more motivating: It can be hard to stay motivated when you’re just working hard
without seeing any results. However, when you have a goal in mind and you’re making progress
towards it, it’s much easier to stay motivated.
Nowadays, young people tend to find a part-time job because they know it will bring a lot of benefits
and drawbacks.
2. Câu trả lời (Thesis statement): Đề hỏi gì thì trả lời cái đó
This essay will describe the advantages and disadvantages of having a part-time job.
In my opinion, I agree/disagree with the statement for some reasons.
Nowadays, young people tend to find a part-time job because they know it will bring a lot of benefits
and drawbacks. This essay will describe the advantages and disadvantages of having a part-time job.
Nowadays, young people tend to find a pet because they know it will bring a lot of benefits and
drawbacks. This essay will describe the advantages and disadvantages of having a pet.
B. Body
1. Topic sentence: Câu chủ đề - giới thiệu đoạn đó nói về gì
Ex: There are a number of benefits that young people should know when they find a part-time job.
Ex: The family rules that my family members should remember and follow are varied.
2. Body (3 ideas)
(Give example) For example, ______/ For instance, _______/ Especially, _______
First and foremost, people can have/earn financial independence. For example, when they are working
as a shop assistant, they can earn extra pocket money and learn to manage that money.
- Next, _____/ Moreover, ______/ Furthermore, ______/ In addition, ______/ Besides, _____
Furthermore, young people can learn a lot of useful skills when having a part-time job. Especially, they
can learn communication skills, time management, problem-solving skills, teamwork skills.
There are a number of benefits that young people should know when they find a part-time job. First and
foremost, people can have/earn financial independence. For example, when they are working as a shop
assistant, they can earn extra pocket money and learn to manage that money. Furthermore, young
people can learn a lot of useful skills when having a part-time job. Especially, they can learn
communication skills, time management, problem-solving skills, teamwork skills. Last but not least, …..
C. Conclusion
In conclusion, _____/ To sum up, _____/ To summarize, ______
(Suggestion) because there are _________, the government/ teachers/ parents/ young people/
students should _______________ to __________
Ex: In short, because there are a lot of useful treatments, young people should know some of them to
protect their health and their life when necessary.