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1. What are the benefits and drawbacks of having a part time job?

Benefits:

 People can have/earn financial independence  They can earn extra pocket money and learn to
manage that money.
 Young people can learn a lot of useful skills  communication skills, time management,
problem-solving skills, teamwork skills.

Drawbacks:

 Distraction from the study  have negative effects on study results  difficult to find a proper
full-time job later.
 Have bad effects on health  invest more time when having a part-time job.

2. What are the benefits and drawbacks of having a pet?

3. Many people believe that working smart (work smart) (plans + goals) can help people easily get
successful. To what extent do you agree with the statement?

 Smart work leads to better results: When you have a goal in mind, you’re more likely to achieve
it than if you’re just working hard without a clear objective.
 Smart work is more efficient: You can achieve more in less time when you work smart. By being
strategic and focused, you can eliminate wasted time and effort.
 Smart work builds good habits: Working hard without a goal can lead to bad habits, such as
procrastination and disorganization. On the other hand, smart work fosters good habits, such as
planning and prioritizing.
 Smart work is more motivating: It can be hard to stay motivated when you’re just working hard
without seeing any results. However, when you have a goal in mind and you’re making progress
towards it, it’s much easier to stay motivated.

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A. Introduction: 2 nội dung


1. Nhắc lại đề bài (Background statement):

Nowadays, young people tend to find a part-time job because they know it will bring a lot of benefits
and drawbacks.

2. Câu trả lời (Thesis statement): Đề hỏi gì thì trả lời cái đó

 This essay will describe the advantages and disadvantages of having a part-time job.
 In my opinion, I agree/disagree with the statement for some reasons.
Nowadays, young people tend to find a part-time job because they know it will bring a lot of benefits
and drawbacks. This essay will describe the advantages and disadvantages of having a part-time job.

Nowadays, young people tend to find a pet because they know it will bring a lot of benefits and
drawbacks. This essay will describe the advantages and disadvantages of having a pet.

B. Body
1. Topic sentence: Câu chủ đề - giới thiệu đoạn đó nói về gì

 There are a number of _______ in ______/that _________

Ex: There are a number of benefits that young people should know when they find a part-time job.

 The _______ that _____________ are varied.

Ex: The family rules that my family members should remember and follow are varied.

2. Body (3 ideas)

- Firstly, ________ /First and foremost, __________/The first ________ is __________.

(Give example) For example, ______/ For instance, _______/ Especially, _______

First and foremost, people can have/earn financial independence. For example, when they are working
as a shop assistant, they can earn extra pocket money and learn to manage that money.

- Next, _____/ Moreover, ______/ Furthermore, ______/ In addition, ______/ Besides, _____

(Give description – How?) To do this, _______

Furthermore, young people can learn a lot of useful skills when having a part-time job. Especially, they
can learn communication skills, time management, problem-solving skills, teamwork skills.

There are a number of benefits that young people should know when they find a part-time job. First and
foremost, people can have/earn financial independence. For example, when they are working as a shop
assistant, they can earn extra pocket money and learn to manage that money. Furthermore, young
people can learn a lot of useful skills when having a part-time job. Especially, they can learn
communication skills, time management, problem-solving skills, teamwork skills. Last but not least, …..

C. Conclusion
In conclusion, _____/ To sum up, _____/ To summarize, ______

(Feeling) although there are many _________, I think _______________

(Suggestion) because there are _________, the government/ teachers/ parents/ young people/
students should _______________ to __________

Ex: In short, because there are a lot of useful treatments, young people should know some of them to
protect their health and their life when necessary.

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