Professional Documents
Culture Documents
1. Check and re-check first whether notes on gathered facts are already complete and
organized.
2. If notes on gathered facts are insufficient, go back into the process of gathering more
facts related to the situation.
3. Make an outline of the report basing from the completely gathered facts.
4. Use the chronological order of writing in presenting facts and ideas in the written
report.
5. The outline of the report should basically answer the complete 5 W's and 1 H.
6. Prepare a report that could either be simple, brief, complex, or in memorandum form,
depending on its required format.
According to the Philippine National Police Investigative Manual, there are three types of
report writers: Those who write without thinking, those who write and think at the same
time, and those who think first and write afterwards.
The writers who write without thinking are those who do not bother to gather facts and
information to support the written report. They are those who are not keen in observing and
gathering facts to supplement the written output. These are also writers who are not conscious
of their grammar errors and do not intend to correct what is grammatically wrong. They are
On the other hand, there are also writers who write and think at the same time, these
are the writers who gather information and facts and put them into writing. In addition, they
review and verify their works but they are in a hurry to write, therefore the gathered
information are not properly documented. These kinds of writers are also partially conscious
of the grammaticality of their written output, and submit their reports with average accuracy.
The last types of report writers are those who think first and write afterwards. These
writers are those who gather specific data, facts, and evidences carefully before they write,
and they are very keen in observing and gathering information to back up their report. They
are also very conscious of their grammar and goes on correcting themselves to improve their
written output. Because they are diligent in collecting facts, their reports are accurate,
complete, fair, concise, and specific. These writers are concern about the conciseness of their
report with the purpose in mind that their reader will be able to understand everything they
have presented. Lastly, these are the writers who present reports that are free from biases,
prejudices, subjectivity, and errors in any form, and thus, they submit reports with 100%
accuracy.
Soriano (2005) stressed out the following reasons why police reports are important:
Reports may serve as records for planning, directing, and organizing units’ duties for police
administrators. In the prosecution of criminals, reports are used as legal documents, as a
reference used by other agencies, and as basis for researches. Reports may also help local
A well written report is also a result of carefully planned and designed writing.
Good report writers undergo the process of writing, editing, and revising their work. For a
work to be considered as good, it needs to possess certain qualities, like: Clarity, Accuracy,
Completeness, Brevity, Fairness, and Specificity. These are elaborated more with examples
on the concepts below:
1. Clarity
Accuracy is the conformity to facts and representation of truth with precision and
exactness. In writing a report, all facts and information whether favorable or
unfavorable to the concerned subject should be included, and these facts are verified
by statement of witnesses, and by reference to official records or reliable sources. An
accurate report is a true reflection and representation of the facts to the best of the
writer’s knowledge. An accurate report is also a specific report.
Examples:
Inaccurate: The child was hit by a speeding motorcycle.
Accurate: The child was hit by a blue Honda Wave motorcycle, which is
approximately travelling an estimated speed of 50 kph.
3. Completeness
Completeness refers to having all the necessary normal part, components, and style of
writing in its entirety. In writing a complete report the elements of the crime should be
established and the additional facts should prove those elements. Documentation of
the report should base from important statement and letters, findings of other
agencies, and laboratory reports. This should also answer the 5 W’s and 1 H
questions.
4. Brevity
Brevity has something to do with the quality or state of being brief and concise, with
the quality of terseness, and lack of wordiness. Brevity is achieved by omitting
materials or information that is useless, irrelevant, and redundant.
Examples:
Wordy: The victim telephonically contacted the police station right after the
incident happened.
Concise: The victim called the police station after the incident.
5. Fairness
6. Specificity
Specificity is the quality of writing pertaining to being explicitly definite and specific
rather than general. A good writer must be precise and specific in writing his or her
report, and should avoid ideas that could mislead the readers.
Examples:
Unspecific: She died of stab wounds.
Specific: She died of five stab wounds in her chest, and another five stab wounds
in her upper right rib cage.
The writing of police report is a tough job. It demands constant practice and application of
some fundamental principles of writing like perspective, selection, and organization.
Perspective refers to the point of view from which the investigator presents the findings of
his report based from gathered evidences. For maintaining the objectivity of the report, the
third person point of view should be used the writer should refer himself or herself as the
"investigator” or “the police officer”.
Selection of information relates to the gathered data in connection with how the writer
presents these in his report. Selectivity is vital since this will affect the investigator's decision
on the facts and information that he will include. He should discard irrelevant details to arrive
at a coherent report, and should only report information that are composed of physical
evidence, statement, and complete investigation. An effective writer should be able to make a
distinction between facts and opinions.
Organization is the process of how a report is put together after the specific details of facts
have been gathered. Organization of the report should follow after the investigator had
conducted and gathered the evidences necessary in the investigation. The chronological order
of narrating events should be used in writing the report. Basing from a specific and detailed
outline, the report shall follow the rules of writing and stylistics.
WHAT?
This question answers about what offenses are committed, what kind of evidence was
retrieved, what properties are stolen or burglarized, and what are the possible motives of the
crime.
What law was violated?
What did the suspect do to the victims?
What was the reaction of the victim's family?
What was the motive of the criminal?
What did the police do with the victims?
What was the response the victims?
What type of property was attacked?
What was stolen, lost, or found?
What was committed?
What evidences are recovered from the crime scene?
What are the elements of the crime?
What kinds of weapons were used in the crime?
What did the police officer do after being notified about the crime?
What agencies are notified about the crime?
What evidences are presented in court?
What is the verdict of the case?
What made the suspect confess?
What type of vehicle was used by the culprits?
WHERE?
WHEN?
This question answers about the exact time and date when the offense was committed, the
properties found, and the suspects apprehended.
When was the exact time that the crime was committed?
When did the crime happen?
When was the body of the victim recovered?
When was the suspect arrested?
When did the police arrive?
When did the suspects surrender to the authorities?
When are they going to investigate?
When will they file a complaint?
When will be the hearing?
When will be the deadline of the investigation?
When are you going to submit your investigation report?
When will the suspects be prosecuted?
When are we going to discuss about your testimony?
When are you going to appear in court?
WHY?
This question answers about the objects or desire which motivated the offense or the crime.
For crime against persons, the possible object of the attack might be revenge, ransom, sexual
HOW?
This question answers the general manner in which the crime was committed.
How was the offense or the crime committed?
How did the policemen respond?
How did the suspect react to the authorities?
How did the investigator handle the case?
How did they discover the evidences?
How was it reported?
How are you going to answer the accusations?
How are you going to explain everything to the police?
How did the law enforcers arrest the criminal?
How much was the damage of the property?
How much money was stolen?
How was entry gained in the property?
How many people are involved in the commission of the crime?
How are you going to give your alibi?
How will you plead, guilty or not guilty?
On the other hand, police report deals with the story of action performed by police
personnel. It is a chronological or step-by-step account of an incident that transpired in a
given time, at a given place. It is also defined as an account of some subjects specifically
investigated, or an official statement of facts. Police report results from the fact that someone
has asked for them and needs them for immediate or future use. In any event, police reporting
has become one of the most significant processes in modern police operations.
A police officer, after rendering his/her duty, must render a report. His immediate
supervisor must be aware of the things he/she had done in the field during his/her tour of
duty, and submitting a report is the only way to do that, making a report is also the means of
recognizing his/her good deeds that may deserve a merit or award.
Quite literally, the success of police operation depends upon the quality of the reports
and the ability of the police officer to write them effectively. The PNP relies on written
reports to relay information to superiors, co-workers, the courts and numerous other agencies.
Reports are also used to train personnel and to get people to follow procedures and policies.
Written reports are something we hardly just avoid. Yet, there are those who regard
their importance to be over emphasized and downgrade the need to express ideas in writing.
This lack of understanding commonly reflects itself in reports that are too frequently
incomplete or poorly prepared.
1. Assumption. This pertains to the belief of somebody that something is true without
having any proof.
2. Chronological Order. It refers to the arrangement of events and/or actions in the
order or by the time of their occurrence.
3. Communication. It is defined as the use of language, spoken or written to exchange
ideas or transfer information. Communication includes also the use of non-verbal
language (sign, symbol) to exchange ideas or transfer information. The transfer of
information or ideas from one person to another includes the transmission and receipt
of a message to effect some type of action or change.
4. Coherence. In writing, this means to be logically or aesthetically consistent so that all
the separate facts or information fit together and add up to a harmonious or credible
whole report.
5. Conclusion. It pertains to a decision made or an opinion formed after considering
relevant facts or evidence.
A. To Preserve Knowledge. Knowledge when in use can be shared and used by others for
greatest possible benefits. It can pass on from generation to generation;
B. To provide Accurate Details. Regardless of the length of time the details recorded in a
written report will be available for future time and for any purpose with accuracy:
C. To Aid the Personnel and Other Agencies. Written report provides valuable assistance
to other members of investigation agencies and other law enforcement agencies. Record
and report are important part of achieving mutual cooperation among agencies national,
local or private entities, and
D. To Coordinate the Activities within the Organization. A report by an individual may
be concerned of another office within the organization. Mutual and supportive roles
would result to closely coordinate activities when the report is widely disseminated or not
limited to a few.
All police reports must contain certain qualities, which can be categorized as
Accurate, Clear, Complete, Concise, Factual, Objective and Prompt.
A. Accurate. This means that the report is in exact conformity to fact (errorless). A fact
is something that has been objectively verified. You must report the facts correctly
and without error. If it is a criminal incident report, the elements of the crime are a
must for accuracy. One must restrict his/her report to the facts of the incident as one
saw it or as victims and witnesses reported the. One must accurately report the
conditions of the scene as he/she found them;
B. Clear. The language and format in one's report must be simple and direct to the point.
Clear means plain or evident to the mind of the reader. One should use simple words
so the reader will know exactly what he/she needs to know. Avoid use of words that
can have double meanings, slang, jargon and unnecessary abbreviations;
A. Word Usage:
Police officers from all over the country tend to use similar words and phrases. But
you should always make sure you know the correct definition and spelling of the
words you will use in the reports.
Generally, the "who," "when," and "where" appear at the beginning of the report. The
reader needs to know the persons involved, the date and time the incident happened, and the
location at which it took place. "What” happened is usually unfolded throughout the report.
The "how" is closely related to the what. The "why" belongs to before or after the what,
depending on the situation. These six questions cover the essentials of many typical police
report. A police report is written because a crime is committed, and investigation of it is
made. If the writer has failed to ask important questions during investigation in his/her field
note or tickler, then he/she is in for an incomplete report, which understandably will be
unreliable.
A. TOP SECRET - A document which unauthorized disclosure of its contents would cause
exceptionally grave damage to the nation, politically, economically or from security aspect.
This category is reserved for the nation's closest secrets and is to be used with great reserve.
This kind of document has the highest level of sensitivity.
Examples:
(1) Very important political documents dealing with such matters as negotiations for our
country.
(2) Major governmental projects such as drastic proposals to adjust the nation's economy
(before official publications).
(3) Matters relating to new and far reaching experimental, technical, and scientific
development in methods of warfare, defense against biological warfare, or matter
affecting future operation strategy. A TOP SECRET grading is justified if:
a. It is likely to influence military strategy materially:
b. It gives us a prolonged military advantage over the nation: c.
c. It is liable to compromise some other project similarly graded
d. The critical information relates to vital strategic areas and the supply of vital
strategic materials.
e. The information indicates the capabilities or major successes of our
intelligence services which would imperil secret sources.
f. The critical information on cryptography relates to devices and equipment
under development.
g. It is a compilation of data or items which individually may be classified as
SECRET or lower, but which collectively should be put in a higher grade.
(1) Original classification authority for assignment of TOP SECRET classification rests
exclusively with the head of the Office. This power may however, be delegated to
authorized offices in instances when necessity for such arises.
(2) Derivative classification authority for TOP SECRET classification (authority for) may
be granted to those officers who are required to give comments or responses to a
communication that necessitates TOP SECRET response.
Examples:
(1) High level directives dealing with important negotiations (as distinct from major
negotiations which would be in the TOP SECRET category) with other countries.
(2) Proposals for new schemes of government or other controls, foreknowledge of which
would seriously prejudice their operation.
(3) Matter relating to certain new methods of warfare or defense, including scientific and
technical developments, not classified as TOP SECRET, e.g. new design or service
aircraft, guided projectiles/missiles, tanks, radar and anti-submarine devices. A
SECRET grading is justified if:
a. It materially influences a major aspect of military tactics;
b. It involves a novel principle applicable to existing important projects.
c. It is sufficiently revolutionary to result in a major advance in existing
techniques or in the performance of existing secret weapons;
d. It is liable to compromise some other projects already so graded.
e. It refers to plans or details of schemes for the defense of areas other than vital
strategic areas, including plans or particulars of operations connected with
them.
f. It involves vital military information, including photographs, etc., relating to
important defenses, establishment and installation.
Examples:
(a) Plans of government projects such as land development, hydro- electric schemes, road
development, or development of areas.
(b) Routine Service Reports, e.g., on operation and exercises, which contain information
of value but not of vital interest to a foreign power.
(c) Routine Intelligence Report.
(d) Technical matter not of major importance but which has a distinct military value or
required protection otherwise., e.g., new weapons calculated to influence minor
tactics or service test of war equipment of a standard pattern. A CONFIDENTIAL
grading is justified if:
i. It is more than a routine modification or logical improvement of existing
materials and is sufficiently advanced to result in substantial improvement in
the performance of existing CONFIDENTIAL weapons:
ii. It is sufficiently important potentially to make it desirable to postpone
knowledge of its value reaching a foreign nation;
iii. It is liable to compromise some other projects already so graded;
Classification Authority
Examples:
1. Departmental Books of Instructions and Training and technical document intended for
official use only or not intended for release to the public;
2. Routine information relating to the supply and procurement of military stores;
3. Minor modifications and routine test of equipment;
4. Certain compilations of data or item which individually maybe unclassified and which
in its aggregate warrants a classification.
A sentence is the most fundamental and versatile tool available to the writer.
Sentences generally flow from a subject, to a verb, to any objects, complements, or modifiers,
but can be ordered in a variety of ways to achieve emphasis.
According to the definition, a sentence must express a complete thought. It is true that
the words “The notorious robbers” create a mental image, but in terms of communicating a
though to the reader, something is lacking.
To complete the thought started by the words, you must tell what the robbers did, or
what happened to the robbers, or what the robbers are.
Sometimes a word can express a complete thought. Consider the following example:
“Go.”
The meaning or thought of the above expression is complete. The understood subject
is the person to which is implied, “you”.
A sentence consists of two basic parts, the subject and the predicate. The subject of a
sentence, a noun or a pronoun (and its modifiers) is the part about which something is being
said. The predicate is the part that says something about the subject. Although a subject may
appear anywhere in a sentence, it most often appears at the beginning.
Subject Predicate
Lightning strikes
A compound verb consists of two or more verbs that are joined by a conjunction and
have the same subject.
Helen chose a seat near the door and sat down. [compound verb: chose and
sat]
B. CLASSIFICATION OF SENTENCES
Sentences may be classified according to their purposes: (1) to make a statement, (2)
to ask a question, (3) to command or request, or (4) to exclaim or to express a strong feeling
or emotion.
Note: It is rather unlikely in a piece of technical report you should have to use an
exclamatory sentence; however, it is convenient to remember the purpose of such sentences.
Classified according to their structure or parts, there are four kinds of sentences:
simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex.
A clause is a group of words with subject and verb. If the clause expresses a complete idea, it
is obviously a sentence or independent clause. But if the clause has a subject and verb but it
does not express a complete idea, it is a subordinate clause.
subject verb
which / bought
subject verb
Independent clauses may be joined by coordinating conjunctions (and, but, for, nor, or, yet)
or by conjunctive adverbs (accordingly, also, besides, consequently, furthermore, hence,
however, moreover, nevertheless, still then, therefore, thus)
3. A complex sentence is a sentence that contains are one independent clause and at
least one subordinate clause.
a. The person who looks for success often finds it. [The independent clause is
the person often finds it. The subordinate clause is who looks for success.]
As you combine short and choppy sentences to form longer, more mature sentences,
you will be making choices with regard to sentence structure and emphasis. In general terms,
short sentences are good for emphatic, memorable statements. Long sentences are good for
detailed explanations and support. There is nothing inherently wrong with a long sentence or
even with a complicated one, as long as its meaning is clear and direct.
Three Sentences:
One Sentence:
There may be more than one correct way to combine short related sentences.
Three Sentences:
Like adjectives, participial phrases help you add concrete details to nouns and
pronouns in sentences. In the following example, the participial phrases are printed in
boldfaced type. Notice how they describe the subject of the sentence, “PhD candidates.”
Prepared for the Final Test and having paid the tuition fee, the PhD candidates
went into the classroom.
Participial phrases are often a useful way to combine sentences and to express ideas
concisely.
Two Sentences:
One Sentence:
The second sentence has been turned into a participial phrase, tired by the test, and attached
to the first sentence. Unnecessary words have been deleted.
Two sentences:
One Sentence:
Joining two subjects or two verbs by the conjunctions and, but, or or is common in
most writing, as is the joining of two independent clauses to make a compound sentence.
Two subjects or two verbs may also be joined by correlative conjunctions such as either…or,
neither…nor, and both…and.
Independent clauses are joined into a compound sentence by conjunctions such as and, but,
for, and or and by other connectives such as furthermore, yet, for example, however,
either…or, and neither…nor. The relationship of the independent clauses determines which
connective works best.
John worked hard all night, but he could not finish the assignment.
Ideas in separate sentences can be combined by using the appropriate connecting words.
Two Sentences:
One Sentence:
Helen showed early signs of interest; for example, she began engineering school when
she was only eighteen.
D. Combine, short, related sentences into a complex sentence by putting one idea into a
subordinate clause.
Beta Corporation now employs 500 people. It was founded just three years ago. [the
two ideas are equally important.]
Beta Corporation, which now employs 500 people, was founded just three years ago.
[The number of employees is subordinated.]
Beta Corporation, which was founded just three years ago, now employs 500 people.
[The founding date is subordinated.]
The adjective clause must always be placed next to the word or words it modifies.
Two Sentences:
One Sentence:
I studied the book of Jeremy Stephens, who worked in England with Thomas Leary.
Example:
John and Helen both received high grades because they worked hard. [Because they
worked hard gives the cause of John’s and Helen’s receiving high grades.]
To combine sentences by using an adverb clause, you must first decide which idea should
become subordinate. You must decide which subordinating conjunction best expresses the
relationship between two ideas.
Two Sentences:
One Sentence:
When Professor Sanchez explained the problem once more, the students finally
understood.
Two Sentences:
One Sentence:
A noun clause is a subordinate clause used as a noun. Note the following examples of
noun clauses and how they are used.
Whoever borrows a book from the library, must not write on any page or mark on any part
of it in any way. [noun clause used as subject]
1. What is a paragraph?
The basic rule of the thumb with paragraphing is to keep one idea in one paragraph. If
you begin a transition, a new idea belongs in a new paragraph. There are some simple ways
to tell if you are on the same topic or a new one. You can have one idea and several bits of
supporting evidence/details within a single paragraph.
Your notes provide the key or topic sentence and the outline for the paragraphs.
Check for completeness and rearrange sentences if it is necessary. Write the paragraph using
12 to 15 word sentences. Paragraphs in police reports generally have five (5) to seven (7)
sentences or approximately 100 words. However, it is acceptable in police reports to write
one or two-sentence paragraphs. One or two-sentence paragraphs are used to mark transition
3. Elements of a Paragraph
Furthermore, the supporting sentences should stick together in such a way that the
topic is developed clearly and logically in order to achieve Coherence. As you will see, all of
these traits overlap. Using and adapting them to your individual purposes will help you
construct effective paragraphs.
i. Unity. The entire paragraph should concern itself with a single focus. If it begins with
one focus or major point of discussion, it should not end with another or wander
within different ideas.
ii. Coherence. Coherence is the trait that makes the paragraph easily understandable to a
reader. You can help create coherence in your paragraphs by creating logical and
verbal bridges using appropriate transition words.
a. Logical bridges
i. The same idea of a topic is carried over from sentence to another.
ii. Successive sentences can be construed in parallel form.
b. Verbal bridges
i. Key words can be repeated in several sentences.
ii. Synonymous words can be repeated in several sentences.
iii. Pronouns can refer to nouns in previous sentences and pronouns should
agree with their antecedents in person, number and gender.
iv. Transition words can be used to link ideas from different sentences.
iii. A topic sentence
A topic sentence is a sentence that indicates in a general way what idea or thesis the
paragraph is going to deal with. Although not all paragraphs have clear-cut topic
sentences, and despite the fact that topic sentences can occur anywhere in the
paragraph (as the first sentence, the last sentence, or somewhere in the middle), an
easy way to make sure your reader understands the topic of the paragraph is to put
i. To begin a new idea or point. New ideas should always start in new paragraphs. If
you have an extended idea that spans multiple paragraphs, each new point within that
idea should have its own paragraph.
D. Margin Rules:
1. Top – first page (without printed letterhead), typed letterhead, ¾ inch or 5 roller
spaces from the edge of the paper;
2. Top – second page and succeeding pages, 1 ¼ inches or 7 roller spaces from the top
edge of the paper;
3. Left Margin – 1 ¼ inches or 15 bar spaces;
4. Right Margin – ¾ inch or 7 bar spaces; and
5. Bottom – 1 ¼ inches or 7 roller spaces.
Definition of Terms:
INFORMAL REPORT
FORMAL REPORTS
a. OPERATIONAL REPORTS
-Include those relating to the reporting of police incidents, investigation,
arrests,
identification of persons, and a mass of miscellaneous reports necessary to
the conduct of routine police operations.
c. TECHNICAL REPORTS
-Presents data on any specialized subject, but usually relate to completed
staff work and add to the specific knowledge necessary to proper functioning
of police management.
d. SUMMARY REPORTS
-Furnish intelligence information necessary to the solution of crime accident
and police administrative problems.
CASE REPORT-Refers to the initial detailed listing of the facrs of the case.
RECORD MANAGEMENT
Function of administrative management business operations and education
concerned with the creation, protection, retention, retrieval, preservation of records
and records information required for the continuance of government, business and
industry operations at cost consistence with services involved.
WHAT ARE THE ELEMENTS POLICE RECORDS?
The police records elements are established to provided all departmental records
keeping and information retrieval service except those records exclusively concerned
with personnel, fiscal and related management matters.