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Big freeze

Draft email 1

Hi,

Its Bridget and Emma and we have decided to raise money for MND by having an event based of the
big freeze show. This will be pre-filmed and live on the event day.

So, your probably wondering what you have to do. If you choose to participate in jumping in the
pool and being filmed while doing it, you will dress up in your chosen costume (keep in mind you’ll
be jumping in the pool with it on) and come to Emma’s house to have an interview and slow-mo of
you jumping in the pool in your costume. Then later on we will have a viewing day where your
segment with be played along with the other contestant’s to raise money. On the day we will also
encourage you to do it live. Don’t tell anyone you have been invited (unless necessary e.g. to drive
you there.) This would be during the July school holidays, (date yet to be confirmed and yes in
winter get with the program.) This would be a fun thing to do, we hope you can help raise money for
this cause.

Now, if your family would like to come and watch please advise them they won’t be required to wear
a costume, but it is recommended, they will have to pay a donation of $3 (cash) to watch and you if
you decide to participate we will take away that price, so you donate $0. If you decide not to
participate but still want to come for the live event and official day, that’s okay but your donation
price will stay at $3.

Please reply ASAP with any questions and whether you’re participating.

-Thanks Bridget & Emma


Good copy email 1

Hi,

It’s Bridget and Emma and we are raising money for MND by hosting a Big Freeze event.

To accept the challenge and help fight Motor Neurone Disease (MND) you must jump in the pool
while dressed up in your chosen costume – whilst being filmed at our event.

We will make a video of all participants jumping and being interviewed at the event – and you can
order your video copy on the day for a donation of $5.

Please encourage friends and family to come along and watch you jump LIVE for a gold coin donation
entry fee. Beanies are encouraged.

Bring extra gold coins to participate in SURPRISE GAMES AND DARES on the day.

Our Big Freeze event will be held during the July school holidays at Emma’s house, date yet to be
confirmed - and yes in winter - get with the program!

This is going to be a very fun event, we hope you can come and help raise money for this cause.

Please reply ASAP with any questions and whether you’re jumping for MND.

Thanks, Bridget & Emma

FAQs (or as we like to say – True Facts)

1. We will donate all funds raised to FightMND and support research to help find an effective
treatment and ultimately a cure for MND.
2. Motor Neurone Disease (MND) is the name given to a group of diseases affecting the nerve
cells (neurones) controlling the muscles that enable us to move around, speak, swallow and
breathe.

People to ask-
- Taylor
- Julia
- Maddy
- Calvin
- Lila
- Imogen
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contestants-
name- Outfit- When- Idk-----
Emma - July -
holidays
Bridget - July -
holidays
Natalie - July -
holidays
Graeme - July -
holidays

I wonder
who else
will join
Did I type
that

Raffle-
2 dollar per ticket, special- 3 tickets for 5 dollars.
Minniiiii jaaammm!!!!!!!!! Chocolate….
Probably a hamper idk… if u read this send me a lion
on messages!

Winning-
funniest biggest Best reaction Best outfit

prize

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