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Proposal Meeting Report

Date consultation: Wed, 7th February 2024 Next Consultation date: Tue, 13th february 2024

A. What have been discuss

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1. Comments format writing.
2 Conduct background
- global burden
- incidence ( adult , pediatric)
- current treatment, diagnostic, are still less in children
- children are indicating theres active transmission in House
3 Make the paragraph smooth and easy to follow (cohesion)
4 In the last part 1 background, add tb cause pedaitric health
5 Elaborate more parents play role so much about nutriotion <5 years
6 Search why TB lead to poor nutrition
- bcz of poor appetite
- poor absorbtion
7 Everytime stated higher or lower , put also the number of RO, or RR.
8 How much odd ratio getting tb if living with index case.
9. Provide mortality rate ( berapa per 100.000)
10 Mention undernutrition can risk many infectious disease. Mention a few disease and mention
tb.
11. Explain how tb cause low/hiigh weight. How the mechanism.
12. Provide plaausible explantion (bio mechanism). not cell levels. Maybe psychological.
- if proble if poor appetit and if problem is absorbtion. Different solution.
13. Paraphrase the sentence.
14. Clear the sentence in first paragprah part 1.3.
Being close contact doesn’t mean lead to any disease. This sentence is confusing.
15. Parent awareness is keyword. Put the key words in first pargraph.
Start parent awareness about nutrition in general. Other infectious disease.
Than move to tb.
16. Make clear about definition.
- awareness
- knowledge
- perception
- attitude
17. Under treatment why they loss weigth. Bcz of side effect, or what ? explain.
18.

B. What I learn

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1. To achieve goals and succes not only smart. But need other characteristic. Resilience,
preserverence.
2 Searching technique in pubmed.
How to read and get point from multiple journal into one conclusion.
3. Conduct background and foreground.
Foreground ---> knowledge gap ---> study design.
C. homework to do

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1. Make a list of articles to practice foreground and next meeting will practice it.
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