The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to

Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and

1996.

The line graph indicates changes about the number of complaints made about from
four different sources to Environmental health authorities in the city of Newtown over
a span of 16 years from 1980.
As for road works, there was a constant fall with the number falling from the peak of
roughly 650 in 1980 to the bottom of 100 in 1996. With regard to factories, during
initial 6 years, the number rose from 400 to approximately 700. This is then followed
by a leveling off until 1996. Remarkably, since 1982, numbers for the latter have
exceeded those for the former.
Traffic and domestic/household presented similar trends in their numbers of noise
complaints in the 16 years. To be more specific, during the first 4 years, figures
presented leveling offs at 300 for the former and 500 for the latter, respectively. Then
in the coming 2 years, drops were displayed with each dropping by 100, followed by
another leveling off until 1988. The final 8 years experienced dramatic growths with
the number for the latter peaking at 1,200 in 1996, twice as much as that for the
former.

During 1980 to 1984

During + 一段时间 --- During the period from 1980 to 1984 / During the 4 years from
1980

It (traffic noise) had a decrease from 1984 to 1986 --- 主语错误 the number of
complaints made about traffic noise

Then. It had a rapidly increase. --- 词性修饰 adj + n / adv + v

Road works made about the greatest number of noise among the given four sources
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Australian household energy use / 4% / lighting

100% of energy

Lighting 消耗/使用 energy

In 1980, 650 complaints were caused by noise from road works.

15% of greenhouse gas is emitted from heating.
4% of energy is used on lighting.
13% of water in North America is allocated for domestic use.

In 1980, there were 650 complaints caused by noise from road works.
There is 15% of greenhouse gas emitted from heating.
There is 4% of energy used on lighting.
There is 13% of water in North America allocated for domestic use.

In 1980, the number of complaints caused by noise from road works was 650.
The percentage of greenhouse gas emitted from heating is 15%.
The percentage of energy used on lighting is 4%.
The percentage of water in North America allocated for domestic use is 13%.

In 1980, road works caused 650 noise complaints. \

Heating emits 15% of greenhouse gas.
Lighting uses 4% of energy.
Families consume 13% of water in North America.

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The largest percentage of water in North America is allocated for industrial use,
accounting for 43%.
The largest percentage of school spending was consumed on teachers’ salaries in
1981, accounting for 40%.
The largest percentage of greenhouse gas is emitted from water heating, accounting
for 32%.

Industry consumes the most water in North America with 43%

Teachers’ salaries consumed the most school spending with 40%.
Water heating emits the most greenhouse gas with 32%.

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Took up the dominant role