MOST IMPORTANT ELEMENTS OF

PROSE FICTION
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CHAPTER III
PROSE FICTION

Prose fiction is the telling of stories which are not real. More specifically, fiction is
an imaginative form of narrative, one of the four basic rhetorical modes. Although the
word fiction is derived from the Latin fingo, fingere, finxi, fictum, "to form, create", works
of fiction need not be entirely imaginary and may include real people, places, and
events. Fiction may be either written or oral. Although not all fiction is necessarily
artistic, fiction is largely perceived as a form of art or entertainment. The ability to create
fiction and other artistic works is considered to be a fundamental aspect of human
culture, one of the defining characteristics of humanity.
Even among writing instructors and best-selling authors, there appears to be little
consensus regarding the number and composition of the fundamental elements of
fiction. For example:
* "Fiction has three main elements: plotting, character, and place or setting." (Morrell
2006, p. 151).
* "A charged image evokes all the other elements of your story—theme, character,
conflict, setting, style, and so on." (Writer's Digest Handbook of Novel Writing 1992, p.
160)
* "For writers, the spices you add to make your plot your own include characters,
setting, and dialogue." (Bell 2004, p. 16)
* "Contained within the framework of a story are the major story elements: characters,
action, and conflict." (Evanovich 2006, p. 83)
* " . . . I think point of view is one of the most fundamental elements of the fiction-
writing craft . . ." (Selgin 2007, p. 41)

Here are some elements of fiction (character, plot,

setting, theme, Point of view, style, diction, and symbol

 and allegory). While these elements are not all found in

every work, they are critical to the understanding of each

piece you read.

3.1 CHARACTER
Characterization is often listed as one of the fundamental elements of fiction. A
character is a participant in the story, and is usually a person, but may be any persona,
identity, or entity whose existence originates from a fictional work or performance.
Characters may be of several types:
Point-of-view character: the character from whose perspective (theme) the audience
experiences the story. This is the character that represents the point of view the
audience will empathize, or at the very least, sympathize with. Therefore this is the
“Main” Character.
Protagonist: the driver of the action of the story and therefore responsible for achieving
the stories Objective Story Goal (the surface journey). In western storytelling tradition
the Protagonist is usually the Main Character.
Antagonist: the character that stands in opposition to the protagonist.
Supporting character: A character that plays a part in the plot but is not major.
Minor character: a character in a bit/cameo part.
• Analyzing characterization is more difficult than describing plot; human nature is
infinitely complex, variable and ambiguous. It is much easier to describe what a person
has done instead of who a person is.
• In commercial fiction, characters are often two-dimensional, and act as vehicles to carry
out the plot. The protagonist must be easily identified with and fundamentally decent,
if he has vices they are of the more ‘innocent’ type, the kind the reader would not mind
having.

TYPES OF CHARACTERS
* Flat Characters- Usually have one or two predominant traits. The character can be
summed up in just a few lines.
Round Characters- Complex and many faceted; have the qualities of real people.
*Static Character- A character that remains essentially the same throughout.

3.2 PLOT
Plot, or storyline, is often listed as one of the fundamental elements of fiction. It is
the rendering and ordering of the events and actions of a story. On a micro level, plot
consists of action and reaction, also referred to as stimulus and response. On a macro
level, plot has a beginning, middle, and an ending. Plot is often depicted as an arc with
a zig-zag line to represent the rise and fall of action. Plot also has a mid-level structure:
scene and sequel. A scene is a unit of drama—where the action occurs. (Bickham 1993:
23-62).
Plot refers to the series of events that give a story its meaning and effect. In most
stories, these events arise out of conflict experienced by the main character. The conflict
may come from something external, like a dragon or an overbearing mother, or it may
stem from an internal issue, such as jealousy, loss of identity, or overconfidence. As the
character makes choices and tries to resolve the problem, the story’s action is shaped
and plot is generated. In some stories, the author structures the entire plot
chronologically, with the first event followed by the second, third, and so on, like beads
on a string. However, many other stories are told with flashback techniques in which
plot events from earlier times interrupt the story’s “current” events.
All stories are unique, and in one sense there are as many plots as there are stories. In
one general view of plot, however—and one that describes many works of fiction—the
story begins with rising action as the character experiences conflict through a series of
plot complications that entangle him or her more deeply in the problem. This conflict
reaches a climax, after which the conflict is resolved, and the falling action leads quickly
to the story’s end. Things have generally changed at the end of a story, either in the
character or the situation; drama subsides, and a new status quo is achieved. It is often
instructive to apply this three-part structure even to stories that don’t seem to fit the
pattern neatly.
THE STRUCTURE OF THE PLOT
NO THE STRUCTURE OF THE PLOT
1 EXPOSITION/COMPLICATIONS: Plot events that plunge the protagonist
further into conflict.
2 CONFLICT: *Conflict- A clash of actions, ideas, desires,
or wills.Types of Conflict: Person vs.
Person, Person vs. Environment, Person vs.
Self.
 Rising action: The part of a plot in which
the drama intensifies, rising toward the
climax
 Climax: The plot’s most dramatic and
revealing moment, usually the turning
point of the story
 Falling action: The part of the plot after the
climax, when the drama subsides and the
conflict is resolved.
3 THE ENDINGS/ *HAPPY ENDING- Everything ends well for
RESOLUTION our protagonist. More often used in
/DENOUMENT commercial fiction.
*UNHAPPY ENDING- Most instances in life
do not have pleasant ends, so literary
fiction that tries to emulate life is more apt
to have an unhappy conclusion. These
endings force the reader to contemplate
the complexities of life.
*INDETERMINATE ENDING- No definitive
ending is reached. This leaves the reader
to ponder the many issues raised.

3.3 SETTING
 Setting, the location and time of a story, is often listed as one of the fundamental
elements of fiction. Sometimes setting is referred to as milieu, to include a context (such
as society) beyond the immediate surroundings of the story. In some cases, setting
becomes a character itself and can set the tone of a story. (Rozelle 2005: 2).
Setting, quite simply, is the story’s time and place. While setting includes simple
attributes such as climate or wall décor, it can also include complex dimensions such as
the historical moment the story occupies or its social context. Because particular places
and times have their own personality or emotional essence (such as the stark feel of a
desert or the grim, wary resolve in the United States after the September 11 th attacks),
setting is also one of the primary ways that a fiction writer establishes mood. Typically,
short stories occur in limited locations and time frames, such as the two rooms involved
in Kate Chopin’s “The Story of an Hour,” whereas novels may involve many different
settings in widely varying landscapes. Even in short stories, however, readers should
become sensitive to subtle shifts in setting. For example, when the grieving Mrs. Mallard
retires alone to her room, with “new spring life” visible out the window, this detail about
the setting helps reveal a turn in the plot. Setting is often developed with narrative
description, but it may also be shown with action, dialogue, or a character’s thoughts.
Social context: The significant cultural issues affecting a story’s setting or authorship
mood: The underlying feeling or atmosphere produced by a story
The setting of a story is its overall context- where, when and in what circumstances the
action occurs.
• Setting as Place- The physical environment where the story takes place. The description
of the environment often points towards its importance.
• Setting as Time- Includes time in all of its dimensions. To determine the importance,
ask, “What was going on at that time?”
• Setting as Cultural Context- Setting also involves the social circumstances of the time
and place. Consider historical events and social and political issues of the time.
3.4 THEME
Theme is the meaning or concept we are left with after reading a piece of fiction.
Theme is an answer to the question, “What did you learn from this?” In some cases a
story’s theme is a prominent element and somewhat unmistakable. It would be difficult
to read Kate Chopin’s “The Story of an Hour” without understanding that the institution
of nineteenth-century marriage robbed Mrs. Mallard of her freedom and identity. In
some pieces of fiction, however, the theme is more elusive. What thought do we come
away with after reading Jamaica Kincaid’s “Girl”? Those mothers can try too hard? That
oppression leads to oppression? That a parent’s repeated dire predictions have a way of
becoming truth?

There are eight elements of fiction:

*Plot and Structure

*Characterization
*Theme
*Setting
*Point of View
*Style

Plot- The sequence of incidents or events through which an author

constructs a story. *The plot is not merely the action itself, but the
way the author arranges the action toward a specific end (structure).

Important elements of Plot: *Conflict- A clash of actions, ideas,

desires, or wills

Types of Conflict: Person vs. Person, Person vs. Environment, Person

vs. Self.

*Protagonist- The central character in a conflict

*Antagonist- Any force arranged against the protagonist- whether

persons, things, conventions of society, or the protagonists own
personality traits.

*Suspense- The quality in a story that makes readers ask “what’s

going to happen next?”. In more literary forms of fiction the
suspense involves more “why” than “what”. Usually produced through
two devices; either mystery (an unusual set of circumstances for
which the reader craves an explanation) or dilemma (a position in
which a character must choose between two courses of action, both
undesirable.)

Characterization

Analyzing characterization is more difficult than describing plot;

human nature is infinitely complex, variable and ambiguous. It is
much easier to describe what a person has done instead of who a
person is. •In commercial fiction, characters are often two-
dimensional, and act as vehicles to carry out the plot. The
protagonist must be easily identified with and fundamentally decent,
if he has vices they are of the more ‘innocent’ type, the kind the
reader would not mind having.•Characters are presented in two
different ways- directly and indirectly.•Direct Presentation- The
reader is told straight out what the character is like.•Indirect
Presentation- The author shows the character through their actions;
the reader determines what the character is like by what they say or
do.•Dramatization- Characters are shown speaking and behaving, as
in a play.

Types of Characters

* Flat Characters- Usually have one or two predominant traits.

The character can be summed up in just a few lines.

*Round Characters- Complex and many faceted; have the qualities

of real people.

* Stock Characters- A type of flat character. The type of

character that appears so often in fiction the reader recognizes them
right away.

*Static Character- A character that remains essentially the same

throughout.

Theme

 The theme of a piece of fiction is its controlling idea or its

central insight. It is the unifying generalization about life
stated or implied by the story.
 While theme is central to a story, it is not the whole purpose.
The function of a literary writer is not to state a theme by to
show and describe it.
 Theme does not equal “moral”, “lesson”, or “message”.


1.Theme should be expressible in the form of a

statement with a subject and predicate.
2.The theme should be stated as a generalization
about life.
3.Be careful not to make the generalization larger
than is justified by the terms of the story. Avoid
terms like, every, all, always, in favor of words
such as, some, sometimes, may. 4.Theme is the
central and unifying concept of a story. Therefore
it accounts for all the major details of the story, is
not contradicted by any detail of the story, and
cannot rely upon supposed facts.
5.There is no one way of stating the theme of a
story. As long as the above requirements are met
the statement is valid.

Setting.

The setting of a story is its overall context- where,

when and in what circumstances the action occurs.

 Setting as Place- The physical environment

where the story takes place. The description of
the environment often points towards its
importance.
 Setting as Time- Includes time in all of its
dimensions. To determine the importance, ask,
“what was going on at that time?”
 Setting as Cultural Context- Setting also
involves the social circumstances of the time and
place. Consider historical events and social and
political issues of the time.

Point of View.
Point of View is simply who is telling the story. *To
determine POV ask, “who is telling the story”, and
“how much do they know?”

Omniscient POV- The story is told in third person

by a narrator who has unlimited knowledge of events
and characters.

Third Person Limited POV- The story is told in third

person but from the view point of a character in the
story. POV is limited to the character’s perceptions
and shows no direct knowledge of what other
characters are thinking, feeling, or doing.

First Person POV- The author disappears into one

of the characters. Shares the limitations of third
person limited. Uses the pronouns “I” and “we”.

Second Person POV- Uses the pronoun “you”.

Infrequently used.

Style.

•Style is the manner in which an author uses words,

constructs sentences, incorporates non-literal
expressions, and handles rhythm, timing, and tone.
•When asked to discuss style, you are being asked
to describe how or explain why the words,
sentences, and imaginative comparisons are effective
in terms of what is being created. *Diction-
Central to an author’s style. Includes:

1. Vocabulary- Choice of words

a. Simple words- Everyday word choice. (“She was

sick for a long time.)

b. Complex words
c. Concrete words- Things we can touch, see,
etc. (Jeans, book,..)
d. Abstract words- Words that express
intangible ideas (freedom,
heritage, something)

2. Syntax- arrangement of words, their ordering,

grouping and placement within phrases, clauses, and
sentences.
3. Rhythm- The pattern of flow and movement
created by the choice of words and the
arrangement of phrases and sentences. Rhythm is
directly affected by the length and composition of
sentences, the use of pauses within sentences, the
use of repetition, and the ease or difficulty in
pronouncing the combinations of word sounds in the
sentences.