Writing Draft 1: Uni1, page 16

Topic: Benefits of the computer

Thesis statement: If you need something to work or to do your virtual classes, you need
a computer.

We know that the technology is advancing little by little and when the technology
advance we advance too, and we are becoming dependent on technology. For example:
When in the TV comes out a new cell phone, the mayority of the people goes and buys
it. Also we have been using the technology to distract us, when we have free time. In
my case, I have started "fit in" at age 11, The most important device that I has been
using is my computer.
The computer saved me in different ways, for example: with my virtual classes at
ICPNA or some projects that I have. Not only I used the computer, my family too. For
example: I remember that a month ago my dad was working, he needed to make a
presentation in Prezi and with his computer he can do it quickly, also my mom has been
using her computer a lot since 2020, as she is a teacher and she works at two works and
with the computer it has been easier for her to teaches classes.
The computer helps us communicate with others, for example: social networks like
Facebook, Whatsapp, Instagram, etc. But in my case I use Whatsapp Web on my
computer because WhatsApp sends me zoom or met links to enter my virtual classes. I
think that social networks and devices are where most teenagers are, because they are
on the cell phone or on the computer. I've had some friends who spends a lot of time on
the computer, playing games or chatting with their friends. For example: I have a friend
who has been studying at ICPNA too and I know that he spent a lot of time on the
computer, so he repeated the cycle and felt bad for that.
In conclusion i think that the computer is a device that we need a lot for example: to
work, to the virtual classes, to do projects, etc. We always said that we need something
more important that the cell phone and now we’ve had that is the computer. We use it a
lot in the pandemic and In my case i said that i need the computer a lot. Probably i said
that it is my best friend and i don't know, What can i do without it? And i think that
most of the people wonders that when they have a computer, my answer for this
question is anything the computer now is a part of my life and i loves it.

Students Name: Yamile Cabrera