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Final Writing 1

Topic: Benefits of the computer

Thesis statement: If you need something to work or to do your virtual classes, you
need a computer.

We know that the technology is advancing little by little and when the technology
advance, we advance too, and we are becoming dependent on technology. For
example: When in the TV comes out a new cell phone, the majority of the people
goes and buys it. Also, We have been using technology to distract us, when we
have free time. In my case, I have started "fit in" at age 11. The most important
device that I has been using is my computer since 2020.
The computer save me in different ways, for example: with my virtual classes at
ICPNA or some projects that I have. Not only I used the computer, my family too.
For example: I remember that a month ago my dad was working, he needed to
make a presentation in Prezi and with his computer he can do it quickly, also my
mom has been using her computer a lot since 2020, as she is a teacher and she
works at two works and with the computer it has been easier for her to teach
classes.
The computer helps us communicate with others, for example: social networks
like Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram, etc. But in my case, I use WhatsApp Web on
my computer because WhatsApp sends me zoom or met links to enter my virtual
classes. I think that social networks and devices are where most teenagers are,
because they are on the cell phone or on the computer. I've had some friends who
spends a lot of time on the computer, playing games or chatting with their friends.
For example: I have a friend who has been studying at ICPNA too and I know that
he spent a lot of time on the computer, so he repeated the cycle and felt bad for
that.
In conclusion, I think that the computer is a device that we need a lot, for example:
to work, to take virtual classes, to do projects, etc. We always said that we need
something more important that the cell phone and now we’ve had that is the
computer. We use it a lot in the pandemic and in my case, I said that I need the
computer a lot. Probably I said that it is my best friend and I don't know, what can
I do without it? Many people will ask that and my answer would be anything. The
computer now is a part of my life and I love it.

Student’s Name: Yamile Cabrera

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