Writing Draft 1: Uni1, page 16

Topic: Benefits of the computer

Thesis statement: If you need something to work or to do your virtual classes,

you need a computer.

We know that the technology is advancing little by little and when the technology
advance we advance too, and we are becoming dependent on technology. For
example: When in the TV comes out a new cell phone, the mayority of the people
goes and buys it. Also we have been using the technology to distract us, when
we have free time. In my case, I have started "fit in" at age 11, The most important
device that I has been using is my computer.
The computer saved me in different ways, for example: with my virtual classes at
ICPNA or some projects that I have. Not only I used the computer, my family too.
For example: I remember that a month ago my dad was working, he needed to
make a presentation in Prezi and with his computer he can do it quickly, also my
mom has been using her computer a lot since 2020, as she is a teacher and she
works at two works and with the computer it has been easier for her to teaches
classes.
The computer helps us communicate with others, for example: social networks
like Facebook, Whatsapp, Instagram, etc. But in my case I use Whatsapp Web
on my computer because WhatsApp sends me zoom or met links to enter my
virtual classes. I think that social networks and devices are where most
teenagers are, because they are on the cell phone or on the computer. I've had
some friends who spends a lot of time on the computer, playing games or
chatting with their friends. For example: I have a friend who has been studying
at ICPNA too and I know that he spent a lot of time on the computer, so he
repeated the cycle and felt bad for that.
In conclusion i think that the computer is a device that we need a lot for
example: to work, to the virtual classes, to do projects, etc. We always said that
we need something more important that the cell phone and now we’ve had that
is the computer. We use it a lot in the pandemic and In my case i said that i
need the computer a lot. Probably i said that it is my best friend and i don't
know, What can i do without it? And i think that most of the people wonders that
when they have a computer, my answer for this question is anything the
computer now is a part of my life and i loves it.

Students Name: Yamile Cabrera