An apartment you often visit.

I am going to talk about my best friend’s apartment, which I pay a visit to regularly.

In retrospect, I first went to this place after my best friend, Van, had bought this flat in the
city center. She threw a house-warming party and I got an invitation from her.

I and my friends all liked her spacious apartment. Since then, we have developed a habit of
My friends and I
going there whenever we have time to spare. Since then/ Van's house has been our meeting place/ gathering
gathering there. features point.
The apartment has minimalist design with black and white color, which gives me a feeling of
space.
But what strikes me the most is the bookshelf filled with books of various genres. This can
widen my horizons about many aspects of life, extend my vocabulary, heal my soul.(ý này hơi lạc/ chữa lành
tâm hồn-> bỏ)
coherence ( -> English books- my-go to genre of books help me extend my vocabulary
self-help
One more thing I like about book-> healismy
her house soul)
the modern gadgets. With the voice-controlled
door lock, she doesn’t need to bring the physical key. Another example is the remote
controlled air conditioner. She can open the app on the smartphone, turn on the air
conditioner before she sets foot onin her house, which means that she doesn’t have to wait to
enjoy the cool air. Everything is ready before she arrives home.
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Saying I am jealous of having a house like hers is an overstatement, but gotta honest with
you, this apartment is worth living.
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I wish that one day I could save enough money to buy an apartment like hers.

There is no need for any physical key in her house as the door is voiced-controlled.

COMMENTS:
Nói theo cụm hơn a nhé. Phần When hơi rời rạc
bookshelf /f/, aspects of, developed a habit of, I like (no s),
Âm chuẩn quá a ui, kiểm soát tốt, nhưng a cần luyện để nghe như kể chuyện hơn nhé ạ! Lúc lên xuống, nhanh chậm, ngắt
nghỉ hợp lí hơn ạ!