You are on page 1of 6

The graph described the figure of the closure and new store openings from 2011 to 2018.

According to the graph, there was a hugh number of new shop, which reached the highest
point of 8500 in 2011. In 2012, the figure went down sharply to approximately 4000, but from
2012 to 2014, the number of new shops open increased gradually to 6000 and declined sizbly
to 3000 in 2018.

With the total number of shops that closed from 2011 to 2014, it still remaining the same at
6000. In 2013, the figure of shop closures reached the highest point of 7100 compared to 5000
openings shop. In contrast, the country witnessed the amount of shop that closed hit a low of
1000, but it surged quickly to 5000 in 2016 and remain almost constant in 2018.

Overall, The number of shops that new open declined more than the total of shop closures so
the country should have tackle this situation.

(160 words)
The first chart described the percentage of electrical devices in Family and the second
chart showed the total number of hours that the household did the chores from 1920 to 2019.

Looking at the first chart, the figure of washing machine increased from 40% to 70%
during 1920 and 1960. Despite the slightly decreased in 1980, the percentage of it rose quickly
from 62% to 72% in 2019. The number of using refrigerator in family surged dramatically from
0% to 100% in 1980 and it remained the same in 2019. In contrast, the vacuum cleaner
witnessed the trend that increased gradually to 100% in 1980 and stayed the same at 2019.

From the second chart, the housedhold chores that per family had done per week
shrank consistently from 50 to 20 between 1920 and 1960. But from 1960 to 2019, the total
hours doing chores per household decreased gradually to 10 hours per week.

Overall, The electrical machines used by family increased continuosly while the total
hours doing chores per week was declined.

(173 words)
Instead of setting an apointment with a normal doctor, recently, people who have health
problems, choose other medicines and treatments are increased. In my opinion, I think this a
negative development and I will discuss in this article.

On the one hand, self-medication could leave consequence. That means, When people has
health problems, they will not have enough knowledge to choose the right treatment method or
remedy for themself. Otherwise, using drugs without a doctor prescription can make the disease
become worse. For example, In the pandemic, if people got sick by covid-19 and they cured
their illness by using unknown drug instead of going to see a doctor, they would increase their
motarlity rate to 70%, which was very dangerous at that time.

On the other hand, Doctor takes a very vital role in human life. To be more specific, doctor is a
job with high intensity training to have enough knowledge , in order to cure people sickness
with precise remedy. On top of that, a doctor can give many a lot of good advices to help the
patient feel better. For instance, when people get stomachache, a doctor can spot the right
symptom and know to the root what cause that disease. This will lower the risk of complications
compared to self-medication option.

From these two reasons, it is clear that usual doctor is an indispensable role and people should
visit them if they feel unwellness instead of trying substitute medicines and remedy that can
lead to badly repercussion.

(252 words)
Each accommodation will have its own historical stories and after every period went through,
these place will leave many memories so people feel that is understandable. This essay will
present the reason and research method.

First of all, the biggest reason of seeking historical information about the place that they live is
because of the curiosity. To be more specific, each individual will always exequitive about the
thing that they do not know. So learning about the history of the place, where they live for a
long time, about how it made, the stories behind it, can satisfy them. For example, Landmark
72 is a building in VietNam that has many people living there, it has an interesting history that
this building was built by korean and became a symbol of economic development in 2018.

People can look for the details of the house and building that they stay through the neighbors
who live around their area. That means, the residents of this area usually live here for a very
long time so they will definitely know the information of the place near them.

Overall, from two paragraphs, it is wonderful that people are more and more indulge in a
historical side of the building or house.

(271 words)

You might also like