NAME: Kanz-ul-emaan Ahmed

YEAR: Third year

SEMESTER: Spring
COURSE TITLE: Business Communication
COURSE CODE: EA-202
INSTRUCTOR: Ms. Samrah Raza
1. Collaboration Opportunities: Inquire about potential collaboration opportunities
between the organization and academic institutions or research centres in the field of
biomedical engineering.
 2. Research and Development Projects: Express interest in any ongoing research and
development projects within the organization related to biomedical engineering and
inquire about potential opportunities for involvement or collaboration.

KEY TAKEAWAYS:

 In my first email to the Bioniks Corporation, my subject line is very generic it should be
specific. I rectified this mistake in my follow-up email.
 I should write the follow-up email to the Bioniks within 1 week of my initial email.
 In all my emails I started with the purpose of writing to the organization and asked
relevant questions in bullet points to enhance the readability and understanding.
 I end all my emails with a call for action and a formal signing off.