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Sentence Structures Revision (II)

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Lesson Flow
● 15 mins | Checklist
● 15 mins | Report
● 10 mins | Diary Entry
● 05 mins | Vocabulary & Next Steps

Learning Objectives
I’ll be able to…
● identify common mistakes in level 3 samples.
● use a mix of advanced sentence structures and vocabulary in writings correctly.

Exercises
● Sentence Rewriting Exercise

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Checklist

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Checklist
Phase 4

Sentence Structures Functions Examples

SVO, given that SVO. To illustrate a result based on a

Inasmuch as any human might infer the nonverbal cues of any other animal,
condition
______________________ we diverged from apes millions of years ago.

If SVO, SVO. To illustrate a condition, then a

“_______ we ____________ (look) honestly at our relationship with horses, we
result
must ________________________ (acknowledge) that the decision to take part

in horseback riding is made solely by one individual.”

SVO, as long as SVO. To illustrate a result based on a

Our trainer refers to him as a point-and-shoot, ________________________ he
condition
can sense that I’m not wildly off-balance in the saddle, he’s going over the rails.

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Phase 5

Sentence Structures Functions Examples

When it comes to Ving / To identify the specific topic

When it comes to _____________________ (vie) within the Wagyu world, there
N, SVO. that is being talked about
are scales that determine the beef's quality (and ultimately its price).

Gerund subject VO. To function as the subject of

_____________________ (Achieve) steak perfection in Japan is more about
the sentence
the journey than the goal, however.

While SVO, SVO. To indicate that two separate

_____________________ it’s impossible to achieve true perfection in any one
clauses occur at the same time
thing, the Wagyu Olympics helps drive farmers to get really close as they pursue

their life’s work.

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Phase 6

Sentence Structures Functions Examples

With N, SVO. To show reason(s)

________________ globalisation, different parts of a product may be made in

different regions of the world.

In order to V, SVO. To express the purpose(s) of

Globalisation gives organisations the opportunity _____________________
doing something
take advantage of lower labour costs in developing countries, while leveraging

the technical expertise and experience of more developed economies.

SVO, which is Adj O. To to express an elaborative

The U.S. automobile companies relocated their operations to Mexico, where
thought
labour costs are lower. The result is more jobs in countries where jobs are

needed, ___________________ conducive to the economy.

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Common Mistakes

Phase 4

1. Mark is a generous man, given that donating to the homeless even when he lives below the poverty line.

2. If the government has lifted the travel restrictions, inbound tourism improves.

3. Citizens will wear a mask, as long the mask mandatory law is still in force.

Phase 5

4. When it comes to revise, students get distracted easily.

5. Sleeping early and maintain a balanced diet are efficient ways to stay healthy.

6. While high cost, people still enjoy travelling abroad.

Phase 6

7. With harmonious, the countries that have been in a war reconciled themselves to peaceful terms.

8. In order to achieving a better performance, you should keep your nose to the grindstone.

9. Less-developed countries like Iran and Ethiopia are often in wars, which is harm to their development.

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Report

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Report
Many of Hong Kong’s spectacular scenic countrysides like Tai Lam Country Park and Hong Kong UNESCO Global Geopark have taken away the
breaths of many, especially Instagrammers. However, it is found that some visitors have left trash uphill after their visits. Write a report on
this irresponsible behaviour and propose two solutions to relieve the situation.

Complete the following excerpt of the report with the correct phrases. Your answers should be grammatically correct.

SVO, given that SVO. If SVO, SVO. SVO, as long as SVO.

When it comes to Ving / N, SVO. Gerund subject VO. While SVO, SVO.

Problem: Irresponsible trash dumping behaviour

1. __________________________ outdoor venues like mountains and beaches, it is observed that a plethora of garbage has been left in
sight, causing a nuisance to other visitors and a harm to the environment, 2. ___________________ everyone should shoulder the
responsibility in conservation and protection works. If all hikers 3. ______________ (abide) by the law and work jointly, nature
4. ___________________ (be) able to remain undisturbed. 5. _____________ some condemn the callous intentions of the hikers, some put
the blame on the authorities for their inefficacy in enforcing laws strictly. Acknowledging the relentless voices in society, everyone should
bear in mind their civic responsibilities 6. ______________________ they are in public places so that others can take pleasure when they
are indulging in their city getaway activities.

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Language Enhancement

Many of Hong Kong’s spectacular scenic countrysides like Tai Lam Country Park and Hong Kong UNESCO Global Geopark have taken away the
breaths of many, especially Instagrammers. However, it is found that some visitors have left trash uphill after their visits. Write a report on
this irresponsible behaviour and propose two solutions to relieve the situation.

With N, SVO. In order to V, SVO. SVO, which is Adj O.

SVO, given that SVO. If SVO, SVO. SVO, as long as SVO.

Let’s try to rephrase the first two paragraphs with other sentence structures!

1. It is observed that a plethora of garbage has been left in sight,

____________ a plethora of garbage being left in sight, nuisance to
causing a nuisance to other visitors and a harm to the
other visitors and harm to the environment have been caused.
environment.

2. Everyone should shoulder the responsibility in conservation

______________________ conserve and protect nature, everyone
and protection works.
should shoulder the responsibility.

3. Some put the blame on the authorities for their inefficacy in

Some put the blame on the government, which is __________________
enforcing laws strictly.
in enforcing laws strictly.

4. Everyone should bear in mind their civic responsibilities as

If everyone _________ (bear) in mind their civic responsibilities when
long as they are in public places so that others can take
they are in public places, others can take pleasure when they are
pleasure when they are indulging in their city getaway
indulging in their city getaway activities.
activities.

Others can take pleasure when they are indulging in their city getaway
activities, ______________________ everyone bears in mind their civic
responsibilities when they are in public places.
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Diary Entry

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Diary Entry
After the peak month of exams, you have become drained and adrift, losing sight of what to pursue in the next stage. Write a diary entry to
share your view on the importance of setting goals. You may share your experiences on how you lost then regained purposes in life.

Correct the underlined 9 mistakes to complete the diary entry.

Corrections

4th May, 2023 | Rainy 1. __________________________

Dear Diary,
2. __________________________
[1] With countless assignment deadlines and exam revisions 1. are having, last month has been
3. __________________________
arduous. While the exams 2. are not done well, I still made it till the end! 3. Not have any goals to
achieve now, however, makes me feel jiggered and adrift. 4. __________________________

[2] 4. In order to waste time, I tried to pick up my language learning hobbies, which have been kept 5. __________________________
at bay for decades. Given that I am inquisitive, 5. enrolling Spanish classes online, hoping that I
could still have a vague memory of my previous knowledge. 6. __________________________

7. __________________________
[3] When it comes to 6. spell and grammar, they almost took my breath away. Awed by the fact that
Spanish is interesting but challenging to learn, I would be glad as long as 7. excelling at beginner's 8. __________________________
level. To my surprise, I am finally armed with a new goal such that I can regain the purposes of my
life again! 9. __________________________

[4] From this experience, it came to my realisation that 8. get lost is the key to being found. Even
though my 9. sub-par exam performance, perhaps Spanish learning could be another way out for
me to actualise my goals!

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Topic

After the peak month of exams, you have become drained and adrift, losing sight of what to pursue in the next stage. Write a diary entry to
share your view on the importance of setting goals. You may share your experiences on how you lost then regained purposes in life.

With N, SVO. In order to V, SVO. SVO, which is Adj O. When it comes to Ving / Gerund subject VO.
N, SVO.

SVO, given that SVO. If SVO, SVO. SVO, as long as SVO. While SVO, SVO. /

Let’s try to rephrase the first two paragraphs with other sentence structures!

1. With countless assignment deadlines and exam revisions, last _______________________________ last month, it has been arduous,
month has been arduous. being fully occupied with countless assignment deadlines and exam
revisions.

2. While the exams had not been done well, I still made it till the I am glad that the exams are finally over, ______________ have been
end! unfortunately underperforming.

3. Not having any goals to achieve now, however, makes me feel ____________________________ (have) any goals to achieve now,
jiggered and adrift. however, makes me feel jiggered and adrift.

4. In order not to waste time, I tried to pick up my language I tried to pick up my language learning hobbies that have been kept at
learning hobbies, which have been kept at bay for decades. bay for decades, ______________________ I do not waste time.

5. Given that I am inquisitive, I enrolled Spanish classes online, ________________ I merely have a vague memory of my previous
hoping that I could still have a vague memory of my previous Spanish knowledge, I continued to enrol classes online, given that I am
knowledge. inquisitive in nature.

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Next Steps

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Next Steps
Now you’re able to…
● identify common mistakes in level 3 samples.
● use a mix of advanced sentence structures and vocabulary in writings correctly.

Congratulations! You can achieve even more if you kindly complete or read:
● Sentence Rewriting Exercise

See you in our next class!

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Sentence Rewriting Exercise

Rewrite the following sentences with the sentence structures you learned in class. Make sure your answers are grammatically correct.

1. Education could change the life of an adolescent. (Rewrite with “With N, SVO.”)

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2. I enrolled in English tutorial courses to sharpen my language skills. (Rewrite with “In order to V, SVO.”)

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3. I went to Lotte World in Korea. It was brilliant! (Rewrite with “SVO, which is Adj O.”)

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4. Charlotte is a generous individual because she gives more than she takes. (Rewrite with “SVO, given that SVO.”)

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**5. Drink some water or you will pass out due to dehydration! (Rewrite with “If SVO, SVO.”)

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Sentence Rewriting Exercise (Continued)

6. The husband will still be with her if he loves her. (Rewrite with “SVO, as long as SVO.”)

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7. Regarding keeping fit, you should consume less carbohydrates. (Rewrite with “When it comes to Ving / N, SVO.”)

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8. It is devastating to lose all money in a night. (Rewrite with “Gerund subject VO.”)

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9. Desserts are scrumptious although they could cause diabetes and obesity. (Rewrite with “While SVO, SVO.”)

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Answers
Sentence Rewriting Exercise
1. With education, it could change the life of an adolescent.
2. In order to sharpen my language skills, I enrolled in English tutorial courses.
3. I went to Lotte World in Korea, which was brilliant!
4. Charlotte is a generous individual, given that she gives more than she takes.
5. If you don’t drink some water, you will pass out due to dehydration!
6. The husband will still be with her, as long as he loves her.
7. When it comes to keeping fit, you should consume less carbohydrates.
8. Losing all money in a night is devastating.
9. While desserts could cause diabetes and obesity, they are scrumptious.

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