b.abdulsyukur@gmail.com INTRODUCE YOURSELF WITH A PERSONAL COMMERCIAL A personal commercial (also known as an elevator speech, personal introduction, 30-second commercial, etc.) is a quick, effective way to make an impressive introduction. You will use your personal commercial when introducing yourself to a potential employer at a job fair, an interview, or anytime you are asked to introduce yourself professionally. It is also helpful when responding to the popular statement, “Tell me about yourself.” TRY USING THESE QUESTIONS TO ORGANIZE YOUR THOUGHTS:
What is your career goal?
What skills, strengths, or experiences do you have that would help you realize that goal? What accomplishment best represents how you use these skills, strengths, or experiences? What are you searching for in a job or internship?
How can you immediately benefit the
organization? YOUR PERSONAL COMMERCIAL SHOULD BE CONVERSATIONAL AND NATURAL. THE STATEMENT SHOULD NOT SOUND MEMORIZED AND YOU SHOULD TAKE CARE NOT TO RAMBLE. YOU WANT TO APPEAR CONFIDENT, POISED, AND PROFESSIONAL.
Greeting: Hello, my name is (name). I am a (year in
school) studying (major) at Western Michigan University. Goal: I am looking for (internship/full-time position) at (employer name). Interest/passion: I am interested in (interests related to the company/industry). Strengths: I have many skills to contribute including (strengths) and (skills). Brief example of experience: Previously, I worked at (employer name), where I (achievements and/or responsibilities - use the STAR method). Goal (informational interview): I am looking to gain a better understanding of ... Question: Ask a question to keep the conversation going. TELL ME ABOUT YOURSELF! PERSONAL COMMERCIAL EXAMPLES “Good morning, my name is Bambang Abdul Syukur, and I graduated from Sebelas Maret University with a focus in English Education. I grew up in teachers family and believe that being an English teacher is my calling. My passion for teaching English has been evident by my involvement in Kusuma Husada Schools and as an english lecturer and translation counselor for the last three years. Through those experiences I have learned to interact with a diverse group of people (students, lecturers, community), which has increased my ability to teach English. I have also had the opportunity to create the english curriculum that focused on english for specific purpose (ESP) nursing development which serves an english materials for professional nurse in english communication goal i.e listening, speaking, reading, writing, teamwork, communicative purpose, and management. Having been a teacher yourself, what things should I be doing now to prepare for my scholarship search?” PERSONAL COMMERCIAL EXAMPLES “Hello, I am Bambang Abdul Syukur, and I completed my Master’s degree in English Education from Sebelas Maret University in August. I have worked on a wide variety of projects that have allowed me to put what I’ve learned in the classroom into use in a practical sense. I pride myself on being detail-oriented, analytical, and driven. I understand that you are searching for a new English taecher and I believe these qualities would benefit your school’s goal to increase your education quality base while continuing to provide professional teacher.” INTRODUCING OTHERSELF A. INTRODUCING SPEAKERS Beginning Your Speech I’m going to introduce you [name] or I’m going to introduce you to[name]? BEGINNING YOUR SPEECH Today I’m happy to introduce you to, who recently came to the Excelence university from Surakarta Good morning. I’d like to introduce you to that girl with the brown hair over there. She’s a nurse from Surakarta, Indonesia. My dear classmates, today I have the honor of introducing you to a nice Indonesian kid named . Hi, everyone. It’s my pleasure to introduce you to a nurse who never expected to be studying English Education. His name is .... I’m pleased to introduce you to a woman who’s interested in stones and bones. She’s studying physical anthropology here at the university. Her name is .... The introducer’s job is to: Remind the audience why the topic is important to them Establish the speaker’s qualifications to speak on the topic Get the presentation off on a high note by establishing an up-beat tone Make the speaker feel especially welcome HERE IS AN EXAMPLE OF AN APPROPRIATE AND EFFECTIVE SPEECH OF INTRODUCTION.
“Good evening ladies and gentlemen. It’s a great
pleasure for me to introduce our speaker tonight, who is going to talk to us about comom finacial mistakes. This is a subject in which we should all be deeply interested because it’s by avoiding financial mistakes that we can best ensure our financial futures. Our speaker, although having spent almost his entire career advising people on their finances in places like New York, Los Angeles and Toronto, grew up about thirty miles from where we are right now. He is an award-winning professional accountant who has specialized in personal finances and taxation for over twenty years, and has guided the financial affairs of some of this country’s best-known athletes, entertainers, entrepreneurs and executives. Ladies and gentlemen, please join me in welcoming home, Budi Prasetya!” CONCLUDING YOUR SPEECH When you conclude your introduction speech, try to end on a positive note. You may rely on formulaic expressions such as So let’s (please) welcome . . . .
I’m sure we’ll all enjoy getting to know . . . .
Let’s give a warm welcome to . . . .
Avoid an abrupt ending such as So that’s all or
I’m done. HERE’S AN EXAMPLE OF AN APPROPRIATE AND EFFECTIVE THANK-YOU SPEECH.
“Thank you Mr Budi Prasetya for an enlightening and
entertaining presentation on the right way to apply for a bank loan; we appreciate having this mysterious area clarified. Your advice to always present an annual budget document to the loan officer showing how we intend to use the loan proceeds and how we’ll be able to service the loan is especially useful. The audience may not know this, Mr Budi Prasetya , but we owe you a special vote of thanks for being here because I happened to find out that you delayed your annual golf trip a couple of days so that you could make it. We really appreciate that. I have a small token of our appreciation here for you, Mr Budi Prasetya . Please accept it with our sincere thanks.” Remember, when introducing or thanking a
speaker, you are not the star.
B. INTRODUCING YOURSELF IN GROUP WORK
Communicate Your Contribution
Hi everyone, my name is Abe Syukur. I’ve got 5 years’ worth of experience education like this education seminar, colleges, and curriculum development. What I am good at, and the reason why I’m here, is getting the right people, businesses and great ideas in a room together. I’m not good on details; that’s why I work with Tim. I promise that I’ll get people excited about the conference and the gifts and talents of everyone else in this room will take over from there. I’m looking forward to working with all of you. C. PROMOTE YOURSELF Set Yourself Apart. Be Memorable. I’m Abe Syukur, The Public Speaker. I can help you or your organization improve productivity through my workshops, consulting, or keynote speeches. I’m passionate about communication and your success is my business. D. INTRODUCING IN FOCUS GROUP DISCUSSIONS
“Hello everybody, my name is Bambang Abdul
Syukur and this is Habibie Syukur. I will conduct the discussion and Mr. Habibie will observe and take notes. We invited you all to discuss “how to introduce yourself”. I will ask you several open questions. Your personal opinions and view are very important for us. There are no right or wrong answers. Please feel welcome to express yourself freely during the discussion. This conversation will be recorded on tape. This is only for purpose of the research, only Mr. Habibie and I will listen to the tape. No names or personal information will be used in the report. SOME PRACTICAL ISSUES: The discussion will last for about one hour. We ask you to please switch off your mobile phones. Please give everyone the chance to express their opinion during the conversation. You can address each other when expressing your opinion, we are only here to assist in the discussion. Is everything clear about the course of the focus group discussion? INTRODUCING IN WEBINAR Webinars or webcasts are a powerful lead generation tool in your digital marketing program. INTRODUCTION Host: Welcome, everyone! Thank you for joining us for today's webinar. My name is [HOST NAME] and I'm the [JOB TITLE] at [COMPANY NAME]. [COMPANY NAME] is the leading provider of [SERVICE]. Today we are presenting "[TITLE]" presented by [PRESENTER]. Just a little housekeeping before we get started. If you have any questions during the presentation, please type them into the question box in your [Zoom, GoToWebinar, WebEx] control panel. I'll bring them up during the presentation and we will also have time for questions at the end. Now without further ado, we will turn the time over to [PRESENTER]! Our presenter today is [details/bio of PRESENTER to highlight credibility and expertise on subject matter]. PRESENTATION
Presenter: Thank you, [HOST]! I appreciate the
introduction. It's great to be speaking with all of you today… [Give presentation]
Presenter: ...so with that, we will go ahead and
take some time for questions. QUESTION & ANSWER Host: Thank you, [PRESENTER]! We will go ahead and take some time for questions now. Just a reminder, please be sure to type your questions into the question box in your control panel. It looks like we have a few questions. Jim asks...
[GO THROUGH QUESTIONS WITH HOST
ASKING THEM AND PRESENTER ANSWERING THEM Host: It looks like we've covered all of our questions. [PRESENTER], is there anything else you wanted to cover before a wrap-up? Presenter: No, I think we're good for now! Thank you, everyone... it was a pleasure being with you today. WRAP UP Host: Great! Thank you, everyone... we appreciate you being here. [MENTION ANY OTHER ANNOUNCEMENTS & MAIN CALL TO ACTION]. Thanks again for joining us today and we will see you next time.