MYSTERY ON EVEREST

Made by : I Komang Agus Alit Putra

NIM : A1B117094
 THE FIRST PARAGRAPH
• In this paragraph, the point is “George Mallory and Andrew Irvine reached
the summit previously”
• The fact is Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay are the first people can
reached the top of mountain Everest and they are truly can do it.
• Why I say it ?
• Because in my opinion, Mallory and Andrew isn’t the first people can
reached the summit. That’s statement is hard to prove and in other condition
Mallory and Andrew are vanished on the mountain.
 THE SECOND PARAGRAPH
• In this paragraph, the point is “The discovered of a Mallory body”
• A team climbers hope to solve the mystery of Mallory and Andrew. But in the
way to the summit, the team found Mallory’s oxygen tank. This signifies that’s
Mallory and Andrew were near with the summit. In this section, a member of
the team namely Conrad Anker discovered Mallory’s body.
• And once again, in this section is supported my opinion that’s Mallory and
Andrew isn’t the first people reached to the summit of mount Everest.
 THE THIRD PARAGRAPH
• In this paragraph, the point is “team found some items like a knife and
matches”
• I found two question in this part. The question is
• Where is photos of Mallory wife ?
• Isn’t he have a planed to leave or put it on the top of Everest ?

The answer is, maybe the photos is broke or buried by snow. Because we know,
that’s photo is printed by paper. And paper isn’t resist with water or cold
temperature. In my opinion that’s photos is broke or lost, so the team climbers
can’t found.
 THE FOURTH PARAGRAPH
• In this paragraph, the point is “Mallory and Andrew didn’t achieve their goal”
• Conrad Anker is member of the team who finds the Mallory body says :
Probably not. Its show that’s Mallory and Andrew didn’t achieve their goal.
 THE FIFTH PARAGRAPH
• In this paragraph, the point is “Everest’s second step is extremely difficult
section”
• This paragraph is continued from Anker’s opinion. Anker’s explained about
the factor can make Mallory and Andrew failed.
• In Anker opinion, he say the difficult path and without the right tools its
doubtful Mallory and Andrew were able to proceed to the top.

In my opinion, I agree with Anker says.

 THE SIXTH PARAGRAPH
• In this paragraph, the point is “Mallory and Andrew didn’t suffer the frostbite”
• Anker added his opinion that’s Mallory and Andrew didn’t suffer the frostbite.
It causes by Mallory’s body had no sign of frostbite.
 THE SEVENTH PARAGRAPH
• In this paragraph, the point is “what happened with Mallory and Andrew ?”
• To answer this question. In the last opinion Anker says, when Mallory and
Andrew was going down and he accidentally fell and Andrew’s body has
never been found.

• In my opinion, the mystery about George Mallory and Andrew Irvine always
be a mystery. And I think Edmund Hillary and tensing Norgay are the first
people can reach the summit of the mount Everest.
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