BRAVER! BOLDER! STRONGER! NEWS is information about current events printed in newspapers or broadcast by the media. --Microsoft Encarta, 2009. Recent information Current events Somebody or something interesting Something previously unknown Timeliness Proximity or Nearness Significance Prominence Oddity or Unusualness Conflict Progress Classroom story Enrolment story Meeting story Program/Party Story Honor roll Awards story School Improvement story Election story School Organization/Club story Out-of-School Activity Accuracy Brevity (briefness) Clarity Objectivity offices, departments, library School calendar Invitations and Memos Different clubs and organizations Sports teams Students and teachers Community Straight news – consists of facts reported without elaboration News feature – based on facts; writer may give his impressions, may describe and narrate without resorting to biased opinion Most interesting or The Inverted most important Pyramid of news Least suggests that interesting news be told in or least order of most important interesting or important to least interesting or important Inverted Pyramid of News I’LL TAKE THE LEAD! 1 paragraph: Most st The important part of the article, summarizes the story The Hook: Arouses the readers interest Answers right away the most important questions: 5 W ’s and 1 H There are two kinds of lead: the straight and novelty leads. Depending on the nature of the story and its driving news elements, a straight lead can focus on one or a few of the six question words. Who? What? When? Where? Why? How? Many students in GJC are getting bald early. The GJC board had a meeting. The meeting was held last night. They ate chicharon during the meeting. One of the causes of baldness might be the wearing of caps. The board passed a resolution banning the wearing of hats in the school. The board voted 9-1 in favor of the resolution. Who? — The school board passed a resolution last night banning the wearing of caps in all school buildings. What? — Cap wearing was banned in all school buildings last night after the school board passed a new resolution. Where? — In General de Jesus College last night, the school board passed a resolution to ban the wearing of caps in all school buildings. When? — Last night, the school board passed a resolution banning cap wearing in all school buildings. How? — By a 9-1 margin last night, the school board passed a resolution banning cap wearing inside the school premises. Why? — Citing a pattern of early-onset baldness in GJC students, the school board last night passed a resolution that restricts cap wearing in all school buildings. Astonisher Lead Better attend your classes on November 5! Contrast Lead Twenty years ago, he was the school’s janitor. Now, he came back to become the college dean. Epigram Lead – verse, quotation Like father, like son… Picture Lead – describes to create a mental picture of the subject. The new dean, although only in his 30s, is already silver-haired. Background Lead – describes the setting Decorated with buntings and multi- colored lights, the quadrangle became a grand setting for a barrio fiesta as GJC celebrated its….. Parody Lead – a parody of a well-known song or poem Never say never… This must be far away from the mind of a 45-year old man who killed himself.. Punch Lead - short, forceful, explosive God is dead! Quotation Lead “Ignorance, not poverty, causes Malnutrition.” Thus, revealed former Isabela governor Grace Padaca to … Question Lead Who will be the next CSC governor? The answer will be known on… Pack the most important info in one sentence Start with the most important or unusual idea of the news event. Go direct to the point Rarely use the “when” and “where” leads Use less than 30 words Avoid starting with articles: a, an, the Do not mention names in the lead unless the person is well-known WHAT A GREAT BODY! The details of the lead Arranged from most important to the least important One sentence, one paragraph Sentences are generally less than 25 words Include quotations from at least two different people Make sure your facts are accurate Keep your sentences short. Use the SVO formula Be specific. Avoid long and complex words. Write in the third person. Use adjectives sparingly. Do not editorialize. POINTERS: 5 W’s and 1 H Quotations Details One paragraph, one sentence Thank You!