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Thesis formula: Topic+ c.

idea + support
ideas
TOPIC
C. IDEA

• Small teams can be in less disadvantage if the soccer organizations


regulate players’ price, players ‘salaries, and equally advertising
profits

S. IDEA 1 S. IDEA 2 S. IDEA 3


Thesis formula: Topic+ c. idea + support ideas

Topic C. idea

• Big soccer teams’ money management is fair since their profitability


depend on players, injuries, insurances, and games´results.

S. Idea 1 S. Idea 2 S. Idea 1


Small teams can be in less disadvantage if the soccer organizations regulate players’ price,
players ‘salaries, and equally advertising profits

• Argument topic: Players´price


• Argument sentence: Soccer organizations must establish a maximum
price for players that can be affordable for all teams.
• Counterargument: The quality of a soccer player is usually regulated
by his salary and by the teams which pay for it
COUNTERARGUMENT
ARGUMENT

• The quality of a soccer player is usually regulated by his salary and


by the teams which can pay for him. For this reason, soccer
organizations must establish a maximum price for players that can be
affordable for all teams. Soccer player stars do not need to be paid
exorbitant amounts of money since they do not need excessive
amounts of money to live well. The accumulation of money in few
people creates inequality. If soccer organizations regulate salaries on
soccer players, the surplus money can be invested in small soccer
teams and in youth that can find in sports a solution to drugs and any
other social problems. In addition, the tournament is fairer for all
teams and money ambition and corruption is decreased SUPPORT OF YOUR
ARGUMENT

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