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Welcome Aboard!
IELTS Writing Task 2 Course
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About me
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Who makes the IELTS?
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How can you take the IELTS?
● This is an English test. You don’t need any specialized background knowledge
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Exam Overview
● No breaks in between
○ Develop your stamina by practicing with full-length practice tests
● No penalty for wrong answers. Guess when you don’t know the answer!
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Listening
4 sections, 40 items
30 minutes
Academic Reading
Breakdown of 3 sections, 40 items
60 minutes
Speaking
11 to 14 minutes
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Next stop is…
● You can score a band 9 with the minimum requirement of just 250 words.
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Basics
● Unlike Task 1, you can use the words, I, you, we, us, but don’t overuse them
● 6 question types - The same basic strategy applies to every question type
● Your examples don’t have to be truthful! But they should sound real
● Your position/opinion can never be wrong, so feel free to choose any side!
Types of Questions
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The 6 Types of
Questions
Introduction to IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high
school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or
teaching sports to younger children).
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Agree/Disagree
WRITING TASK 2 Choose ONE side! This is not a “discuss both sides”
question. It is possible to write a partly-agree essay,
Write about the following topic: but this is risky. Just simplify it and pick a side.
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high
school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or
teaching sports to younger children).
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
WRITING TASK 2
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at
primary school rather than secondary school.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Advantage/Disadvantage
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at
primary school rather than secondary school.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Problem/Solution
WRITING TASK 2
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and
fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measure could be taken to
solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Problem/Solution
WRITING TASK 2
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and
fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measure could be taken to
solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words. Your opinion is required, but do NOT strongly express it
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Discuss/Opinion
WRITING TASK 2
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of
sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and
that other measures are required.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Discuss/Opinion
WRITING TASK 2 Here, you can agree with one side or both sides.
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of
sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and
that other measures are required.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Your opinion is required and you
Write at least 250 words. are allowed to strongly express it
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Opinion
WRITING TASK 2
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the
only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Opinion
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the
only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words. Your opinion is required and you are
allowed to strongly express it
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Two Parts
WRITING TASK 2
Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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How to Get a 7+
High Score
Introduction to IELTS Writing Task 2
Each band descriptor category is scored on a band of 0-9 and then averaged for the total score
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Band Descriptors
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What you must do to score well
Band Task Achievement
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What you must do to score well
Band Coherence & Cohesion
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What you must do to score well
Band Grammatical Range and Accuracy
● Uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor
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errors occur only as ‘slips’
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What you must do to score well
Band Lexical Resource
● Uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of
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lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’
● Uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings
● Skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in
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word choice and collocation
● Produces rare errors in spelling and/or word formation
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How This Course
Is Structured
An overview of our Writing Task 2 course
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II. Overview of Recipe
How to outline main How to introduce How to discuss How to discuss How to summarize
ideas and topic, paraphrase and/or support your and/or support your the main points of
supporting details the question position with main position with main your essay and
of the body language and state idea #1, supporting idea #2, supporting restate the thesis
paragraphs the thesis details and examples details and
examples
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III. Overview of Cooking
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Next stop is…
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Task Achievement
The first ingredient in Writing Task 2
1. Cover the requirements of the task by writing about everything in the question
2. Present a clear position/opinion throughout your response
3. Present, extend and support your main ideas with supporting details
4. Don’t overgeneralize
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An Overview of Structure
Paragraphs Requirements
Example: “Living in big cities is stressful, because they are too overcrowded.”
Is this true for everyone who lives in big cities? No, because some people enjoy big cities
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How to Stop Overgeneralizing
To avoid overgeneralizing, you have to soften your statement with the words below:
often many
could
sometimes some
may
usually few
might
generally a number of
can
typically a lot of
probable
tend to several
likely
occasionally numerous
Generalization: “Living in big cities is stressful, because they are too overcrowded.”
Correction: “Living in big cities can be stressful, because they tend to be too overcrowded.”
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How to Stop Overgeneralizing
Generalization Correction
Prison is more effective for reform. Prison may be more effective for reform.
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Second Ingredient:
Coherence & Cohesion
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Coherence &
Cohesion
The second ingredient in Writing Task 2
2. Connect sentences and paragraphs together with cohesive devices (words like however,
moreover, furthermore, therefore, etc.)
Example
To begin with, teaching children a foreign language in primary school does have some drawbacks,
namely the shorter availability of time for other subjects and the delayed development of the
child's first language. Learning another language can take away some time from other subjects,
such as math and science, which are vital for higher education. Additionally, children may mix up
the linguistic structures from the various languages, resulting in a possible delay in the
development of their native language.
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What are Cohesive Devices?
Cohesive devices are words and phrases that link your ideas together to make your essay flow
smoothly. They are the glue that stick your sentences and paragraphs to each other.
Example
To begin with, teaching children a foreign language in primary school does have some drawbacks,
namely the shorter availability of time for other subjects and the delayed development of the
child's first language. Learning another language can take away some time from other subjects,
such as math and science, which are vital for higher education. Additionally, children may mix
up the linguistic structures from the various languages, resulting in a possible delay in the
development of their native language.
Note that relative pronouns and Conjunctions and Relative Pronouns will be
conjunctions also act as cohesive devices discussed in detail in the Grammar section
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Cohesive Devices
Overview Opening Sequence Addition
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Cohesive Devices
Comparison Contrast Cause/Effect Emphasis
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Cohesive Devices
Illustration Qualification Reference Clarification
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Paragraphing
You can either indent each paragraph or skip a line when you start a new paragraph, but do not
mix both formats or change them midway - choose only one format and stick to it
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Third Ingredient:
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
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Grammatical Range &
Accuracy
The third ingredient in Writing Task 2
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When NOT to Change the Tense
Do no change the tense when there is NO time change for the action
Incorrect: During the lecture, Jane stood up and drops her phone.
Correct: During the lecture, Jane stood up and dropped her phone.
Correct: During the lecture, Jane stands up and drops her phone.
Correct: Sam reached for the apple after he had already eaten two oranges.
XXXXXXXX
X X
Timeline X
P Now F P Now F P Now F P Now F
Shows that a completed Shows that an action Shows that something Shows that something
Description action took place at a was ongoing, until it happened before started in the past and
specific time in the past was interrupted by another action in the continued up until
another action in past past another action in past
Timeline X X X X X X X
P Now F P Now F P Now F P Now F
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Future Tenses
Simple Continuous Perfect Perfect Continuous
X X X X X X X
Timeline
P Now F P Now F P Now F P Now F
Subject, Verb, S + ‘will be’ + (V+ing) S + ‘will have’ + V3 + O S + ‘will have been’ +
S + ‘will’ + V + O +O (V+ing) +O
Object
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Articles &
Agreement
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Writing Task 2
Use ‘a’ or ‘an’ with singular countable nouns when the reader does not know exactly to whom
or what we are referring:
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Subject-Verb Agreement
Subjects and Verbs must agree with each other in number (singular or plural). If a subject is
singular, its verb must also be singular; if a subject is plural, its verb must also be plural.
Incorrect Correct
People improves their life by learning from People improve their life by learning from
their past mistakes. their past mistakes.
Reflecting on our past help us to make better Reflecting on our past helps us to make better
decisions. decisions.
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Active & Passive
Voice
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Writing Task 2
Example: The dog bit the boy. Example: The boy was bitten by the dog.
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Active Voice
Active voice is best used for conveying simple, straightforward ideas and actions. This voice is far
more common than the passive voice, because it is:
● more direct and concise (to-the-point)
● easier to understand
● less awkward in structure
● clearer in indicating the relationship between different parts of a sentence
Note that both sentences are grammatically correct, but this particular idea is best conveyed with
active voice.
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Passive Voice
Passive voice is primarily used in these two situations:
● When we do not want to say, or do not know, who did the action.
● When focusing on the recipient of the action is more important.
Examples: Shoplifters were arrested. (No need to say ‘by the police’’ because it is obvious)
The road is being repaired. (We are only interested in the road, not in the
people
who are repairing it)
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Passive Voice To form passive voice, use different forms of ‘to be’
Present Continuous is/are being + past participle The food is being eaten.
Present Perfect have/has been + past participle The food has been eaten.
Past Continuous was/were being + past participle The food was being eaten.
Past Perfect had been + past participle The food had been eaten.
Future Simple will be/going to be + past participle The food will be eaten.
Future Continuous will be being + past participle The food will be being eaten.
Future Perfect will have been + past participle The food will have been eaten.
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Simple & Compound
Sentences
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Writing Task 2
As you can see, simple sentences can include other basic elements, such as modal verbs,
prepositions, articles, etc.
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Compound Sentences
Independent Clause + Independent Clause(s) = Compound Sentence
Idea is complete , coordinating conjunction for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so
Britain invested over 1 million pounds in books, and France only invested 100,000.
Switzerland ranked the highest in 1999, but it was outranked by Britain the following year.
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Coordinating Conjunctions
Coordinating Conjunctions Examples
When a coordinating conjunction The proposed legislation seems promising, but it has
but
connects two independent
several drawbacks.
clauses, a comma is always used
It is common knowledge that exercise is healthy, yet many
yet
people never go to gyms.
* Placing a comma before “and” in a list is optional → I love books, movies , and music.
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List of Coordinating Conjunctions
F for
A and
N nor
B but
O or
Y yet
S so
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Complex Sentences
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Writing Task 2
Whereas Britain invested over 1 million pounds in books, France only invested 100,000.
Switzerland ranked the highest in 1999, although it was outranked by Britain the following year.
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Subordinating Conjunctions
Subordinating Conjunctions Examples
If dependent clause comes before
independent clause, place the comma Although this proposal has some drawbacks, its
at the end of Although…,
the dependent clause
advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
If the dependent clause comes Despite the new regulations, many people still do not
Despite…,
after the independent clause, the
comma is usually NOT used
fully disclose their income to the government.
A comma is not usually used between the two components of a correlative conjunction, unless
other elements are present
Relative Pronoun
Incorrect Correct
Parents should neither yell at their children nor be Parents should neither yell at their children nor
punishing them. punish them.
I used to love both swimming competitively and I used to love both swimming competitively and
to play golf. playing golf.
Vegetables not only are delicious but also healthy. Vegetables are not only delicious but also healthy.
both … and
either … or
neither … nor
not … but
whether … or
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Relative Clauses
Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Writing Task 2
● Necessary in a sentence. Without it, the ● Not necessary in a sentence, because the
noun remains incomplete. idea is complete even without it
● Used to clarify who or what you are ● Used to give extra information about
talking about the noun in a sentence
● No comma before relative pronoun ● Need comma before relative pronoun
Example: Belgium is the country that sold Example: Belgium earned 1.7 million euros
the most coffee. from coffee sales , which made it the most
profitable country.
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Relative Pronouns
Relative Pronouns They refer to... Examples
The Italians, who form the vast majority of
who people
population, are 15-59 year olds.
Overgrazing represented the primary cause of global
which/that things land depletion, which accounted for approximately
30% of land degradation.
The only country where the population declined was
where places
Australia.
The only period when mobile phones plummeted in
when times
demand was in December.
whose possession The only country whose sales declined was Yemen.
The reason why they migrated to the nearby islands is
why reason
not clear.
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Relative Pronouns
Relative Pronouns They refer to... Examples
Essential Relative Clause The Italians, who form the vast majority of
who
Clarification of what we’re people
population, are 15-59 year olds.
talking about (use comma)
Overgrazing represented the primary cause of global
which/that things land depletion, which accounted for approximately
30% of land degradation.
The only country where the population declined was
where places
Australia.
Non-essential Relative Clause
Extra information about the The only period when mobile phones plummeted in
when times
noun (no comma) demand was in December.
whose possession The only country whose sales declined was Yemen.
The reason why they migrated to the nearby islands is
why reason
not clear.
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Combining Elements
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
I like to sleep in, but I can get up early if I have to go to work or meet up with my friends.
Even though pollution is increasing at an alarming rate, I believe that we can still improve the
health of our planet and reverse the environmental damage that has caused numerous ecosystems
to collapse.
Research has shown that people who consume meat have higher rates of disorders due to
cholesterol, which not only contributes to heart disease but also diabetes, high blood pressure
and a host of other problems, whereas plant-based foods have been shown to alleviate such
disorders.
Grammatical Range:
Punctuation
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Conditional Sentences
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
Conditional Use
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Zero Conditional
Used for when the time being referred to is now or always and the situation is real and possible.
The zero conditional is often used to refer to general truths. In zero conditionals, the word "if" can
usually be replaced by the word "when" without changing the meaning.
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First Conditional
Used to refer to the present or future where the situation is real. The type 1 conditional refers to a
possible condition and its probable result.
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Second Conditional
Used to refer to a time that is now or any time, and a situation that is unreal. These sentences are
used to refer to a hypothetical condition and its probable result.
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Third Conditional
Used to refer to a past situation that is contrary to reality. It refers to an unreal past condition
and its probable past result.
If you had studied harder you would have passed the exam.
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Punctuation
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
, 3) Commas: Generally, use them whenever you hear a brief audible pause
; 6) Semicolons: Use them to join two independent clauses that are closely related in ideas
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Commas
Commas can be very difficult to use in English. However, for the IELTS essays, these 4 rules are
the most relevant:
1. If the dependent clause comes before the independent clause, use a comma at the end of the
dependent clause
○ Even though junk food is unhealthy, many people consume it due to cheaper costs
2. Use comma before any coordinating conjunction that links two independent clauses
○ Teachers should be paid higher wages, because their work is of utmost importance.
2. For singular and plural nouns ending in “s” → apostrophe only (without “s”)
○ Ensuring job satisfaction of the employees is the boss’ responsibility.
○ The education of children is their teachers’ responsibility.
3. Months (January, February) and days of the week (Sunday, Monday) are treated as proper
nouns and are thus capitalized, but seasons (summer, winter) are not
○ After a sharp growth in March, the profit from banana sales plummeted in December
but recovered by the following summer.
4. Names of school subjects (math, algebra, geology, psychology) are not capitalized, with the
exception of the names of languages (French, English)
○ My favorite subjects in high school were Spanish and psychology.
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Semicolons
Semicolons indicate an audible pause that is longer than a comma, but shorter than a period. You
probably will not need to use it in your essay, but here are the main rules, just in case:
1. Semicolon is usually used to link two independent clauses that are closely related
○ Some people write on computers; others prefer to write by hand.
3. Use a semicolon before words/terms like namely, however, therefore, that is, for example, for
instance, etc., when they introduce a complete sentence (followed by a comma)
○ Science is one of the most significant subjects; however, the arts are just as important.
The paragraph below contains 12 punctuation errors. Can you find them all?
Example
To begin with teaching children a foreign language in primary school, does have some drawbacks;
Namely, the shorter availability of time for other subjects and the delayed development of the
childs first language. learning another language can take away some time from other subjects, such
as Math and Science which are vital for higher education. Additionally children may mix up the
linguistic structure’s from the various languages, resulting in a possible delay in the development
of their native language! However, these drawbacks are temporary and outweighed by the benefits
that can be reaped from this arrangement
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Fix the Punctuation Errors
The paragraph below contains 12 punctuation errors. Can you find them all?
Example
To begin with, teaching children a foreign language in primary school does have some drawbacks;
namely, the shorter availability of time for other subjects and the delayed development of the
child’s first language. Learning another language can take away some time from other subjects,
such as math and science, which are vital for higher education. Additionally, children may mix up
the linguistic structures from the various languages, resulting in a possible delay in the
development of their native language. However, these drawbacks are temporary and outweighed
by the benefits that can be reaped from this arrangement.
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Writing Numbers
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
Correct: It was found that four Middle of sentence: Residents Incorrect: There was zero point
out of 10 students failed. aged 60 and above should receive eighty six inches of rain this
free medical insurance. month.
Incorrect: She has four sisters
aged six, eight, 13, and 17. Beginning of sentence: Seventy Correct: There was 0.86 inches of
children came to the class trip this rain this month.
Correct: She has four sisters aged year, but last year there were 90.
6, 8, 13, and 17.
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Writing Numbers
Dates Fractions Percentages
Dates are written in numerals. Always spell out simple fractions Percentages should be written in
Do not use ordinal numbers (i.e. (use hyphens) numerals (unless they appear at
1st, 2nd, 3rd with full dates). the beginning of a sentence)
Incorrect: School begins on Incorrect: About 1/3 of the Middle of sentence: According to
September 2nd, 2019. science class comes from Japan. the latest research, 63% of
professors live in the city.
Correct: School begins on Correct: About one-third of the
September 2, 2019. science class comes from Japan. Beginning of sentence: Eighty
and one-half percent of students
drive to school.
Whenever you are in doubt, it’s usually best to spell out the number in words
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Lexical Resource
(Vocabulary)
The fourth ingredient in Writing Task 2
We have created an interactive list of IELTS vocabulary words for you on Quizlet.
Click here to get the interactive version: https://quizlet.com/class/8957279/
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Basics
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Useful Phrases
Lexical Resource: Writing Task 2
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Lexical Resource: Topic
Related Vocabulary
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Topic Related
Vocabulary
Lexical Resource: Writing Task 2
Universities are great places for people to get an education, thanks to the knowledge of their
staff, well-designed agenda and spaces for studying different things.
Uses such general vocabulary that it
can be used for other topics!
Universities are great places for students to pursue higher education, thanks to the knowledge
of their faculty, well-designed course curriculums and research facilities for varied disciplines.
Both sentences are saying the same thing, but this second sentence uses topic-
related vocabulary, which can only be used for discussing universities
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Use Topic-Related Vocabulary
Read the two sentences below and decide which sounds better:
Museums are great places for people to get an education, thanks to the knowledge of their staff,
well-designed agenda and spaces for studying different things.
For example, if we replace ‘universities’ with
‘museums,’ the sentence still makes sense.
Universities are great places for students to pursue higher education, thanks to the knowledge
of their faculty, well-designed course curriculums and research facilities for varied disciplines.
Limit the use of general vocabulary which can be used for other subjects. Instead, throw in
some topic-related vocabulary to show off your English (without overusing it).
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Create vocabulary lists for
Use Topic-Related Vocabulary common topics
Obesity (n.) Kindergarten (n.) Global warming (n.p) Cultural values (n.p)
Eating Disorder (n.p) Post-graduate (n.p) To dump waste (coll.) Perceptions (n.)
To be on a diet (coll.) Syllabus (n.) Pollution (n.) Conformity (n.)
Overweight (adj.) Curriculum (n.) Clean energy (n.p) Ethnocentrism (n.)
Overeating (n.) Research facility (n.p) Burn fossil fuels (coll.) Segregation (n.)
Prescribe (v.) Diploma (n.) Natural resources (n.p) Diversity (n.)
Medical (adj.) Faculty (n.) Rainforests (n.) Ethnicity (n.)
Wellness (n.) Dissertation (n.) Deforestation (n.) Interdependence (n.)
Depression (n.) Scholarship (n.) Ecosystem (n.) Globalization (n.)
Nutrition (n.) Distance learning (n.p) Species (n.) Cultural heritage (n.p)
Dehydration (n.) Higher education (n.p) Biodiversity (n.) Etiquette (n.)
Sleep deprivation (n.p) Literacy/Illiteracy (n.) Habitat (n.) Residents (n.)
n. (noun) adj. (adjective) v. (verb) n.p. (noun phrase) coll. (collocation) 129
Use Topic-Related Vocabulary
Below is a list of the 20 most common topics that often appear on IELTS Writing Task 2. You
should practice the topic-related vocabulary for each of these 20 topics:
Lexical Resource:
Collocations
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Collocations
Lexical Resource: Writing Task 2
The wrong version will immediately jump out to native speakers and show your weak
English.
Let’s look at some examples...
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Use Collocations
Verb-Noun Collocations
1. There are some people who have a raised a question.
2. The government is giving priority to the issue of water quality in cities.
Verb-Adverb Collocations
3. Many customers have complained bitterly about the terrible service.
4. She apologised profusely after bumping into her boss and spilling his drink.
Adjective-Noun collocations
5. Due to the heavy snow overnight, all roads were blocked.
6. There is a strong possibility that ocean levels will rise due to climate change.
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Use Collocations
Adverb-Adjective Collocations
1. I was utterly shocked by her bad behaviour.
2. It is incredibly stupid to drink and drive.
Noun-Noun Collocations
3. She got a round of applause after her performance.
4. It can be challenging to work in the service industry for several reasons.
As you can see, collocations can come in countless varieties. Therefore, the best way to learn
them is to immerse yourself in English by reading books, listening to audiobooks and
conversing with native speakers.
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Lexical Resource:
Word Formation
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Word Formation
Lexical Resource: Writing Task 2
Root words cannot be Some root words have By adding a suffix to Not every word can be
broken down further suffixes; others don’t the root word, we can changed into every
change its word class word class
Example: Drinking alcohol makes the body weaker. → Drinking alcohol weakens the body.
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How to Form Nouns
Note that ‘-ise’ is used in British English, whereas ‘-ize’ is used in American English.
Both spellings are accepted on the IELTS exam.
Some root words contain By adding a prefix to the root Not every prefix can be
prefixes; others don’t. word, you change its meaning applied to every word
Example: I do not agree with this view. → I disagree with this view.
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How to Make New Words
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Part 2: Recipe
Basic Strategy for Writing Task 2
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How to Create
Outlines
Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
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Template #1 Format of Outline
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Agree/Disagree Outline - Template #1
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Advantage/Disadvantage Outline - Template #2
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Problem/Solution Outline - Template #1
To what extent do you think laws are II. Critical for improving planet’s health
needed to make people recycle more 1. ↓ Env. pollution
2. Conserves natural resources
of their waste?
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Two Parts Outline - Template #2
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“I don’t know how to
come up with ideas”
Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
Example: Infants will not Example: Instead of harshly Example: If a child is punished,
understand what is happening or punishing negative behavior, it will teach the child that it is
why he or she is being punished, children should be rewarded for acceptable for larger people to
because their brains are good behavior for positive hit smaller ones, which may
underdeveloped. reinforcement. This kind of result in the child starting to
approach is more effective. bully others.
Use these 3 questions to outline your main ideas and supporting details
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3 Questions for Generating Ideas
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however,
believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Example: Once a child goes to Example: At school, children Example: If a child’s education
school, they are entering a wider will experience working with becomes the responsibility of
community where teachers and people from various parents alone, then children will
peers will have just as much backgrounds. This experience miss out on the opportunity to
influence as their parents do at should teach them how to be learn valuable lessons from
home. good members of society. others.
Use these 3 questions to outline your main ideas and supporting details
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How to Write
Introductions
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How to Write
Introductions
Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
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Template
1 State why the topic is 2 Write about recent 3 Write about the impact of
important development in the topic topic on daily life or society
Example: Every nation needs Example: In the last few years, Example: Volunteer work
citizens who display social numerous approaches to directly benefits the society by
commitment and actively work to improve society and reinforce increasing the productivity of its
improve the community for the the ties between community residents and imparting valuable
welfare of its residents. members have taken root. life skills.
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Phrases for Starting Introductions
● Many/some people claim/opine/believe that...
● There is no denying/doubt that...
● It is often said that...
● These days.../ Nowadays...
● In this day and age...
● Recently,.../Lately,...
● In the last few years, ...
● It is universally accepted that...
● We live in an age when many of us are...
● People are divided in their opinion regarding...
● .... is one of the most important issues...
● Whether .... or .... is a controversial issue/subject...
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How to Paraphrase
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How to Write the Thesis
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school
programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching
sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Position/Opinion
+ Main Ideas
I strongly agree with this view, because volunteering not only improves the
community as a whole but also builds valuable character traits.
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How to Write
Introductions
Agree/Disagree: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Question Statement
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high
school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or
teaching sports to younger children).
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Template
1 Give general statement This general statement tells us
2 Paraphrase question statement why the topic is important
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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Agree/Disagree Introduction
Paraphrase
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Agree/Disagree Introduction
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How to Write
Introductions
Advantage/Disadvantage: Recipe for Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Question Statement
Write about the following topic:
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at
primary school rather than secondary school.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Advantage/Disadvantage Introduction
Template
This general statement
1 Give general statement tells us about a recent
2 Paraphrase question statement development in the topic
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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Advantage/Disadvantage Introduction
Paraphrase
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Advantage/Disadvantage Introduction
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How to Write
Introductions
Problem/Solution: Recipe for Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Question Statement
Write about the following topic:
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and
fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measure could be taken to
solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Template
1 Give general statement This general statement tells us
2 Paraphrase question statement why the topic is important
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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Problem/Solution Introduction
Paraphrase
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Problem/Solution Introduction
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How to Write
Introductions
Discuss/Opinion: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Question Statement
Write about the following topic:
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of
sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and
that other measures are required.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Discuss/Opinion Introduction
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Discuss/Opinion Introduction
How to Write
Introductions for
Opinion Questions
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How to Write
Introductions
Opinion: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Question Statement
Write about the following topic:
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the
only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Opinion Introduction
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Opinion Introduction
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Opinion Introduction
How to Write
Introductions for Two-
Parts Questions
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How to Write
Introductions
Two Parts: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Question Statement
Write about the following topic:
Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Nowadays, the way many people interact with There is no doubt that technology has had a
each other has changed because of technology.
significant bearing on all facets of our life,
including work, education, and
Template communication.
1 Give general statement
2 Paraphrase question statement This general statement tells us
3 State thesis (position + main ideas) about the impact that this
topic has had on society
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Two Parts Introduction
Nowadays, the way many people interact with There is no doubt that technology has had a
each other has changed because of technology.
significant bearing on all facets of our life,
including work, education, and
Template communication. This impact is particularly
1 Give general statement noticeable in modern-day relationships,
2 Paraphrase question statement which have been remarkably enhanced
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
through telephones, video-conferencing,
emails, and social media platforms.
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Two Parts Introduction
Nowadays, the way many people interact with There is no doubt that technology has had a
each other has changed because of technology.
significant bearing on all facets of our life,
including work, education, and
Template communication. This impact is particularly
1 Give general statement noticeable in modern-day relationships, which
2 Paraphrase question statement have been remarkably enhanced through
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
telephones, video-conferencing, emails, and
social media platforms. This essay will
Outline explore how technology has impacted our
I. How technology shapes relationships relationships and why this has been a
1) Form new relationships positive development.
⤷ Ex. → FB groups, forums, dating app
II. Pos. dev. Main ideas Position
1) Phones, email → brings us closer
⤷ Ex. → stay updated, work meetings
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Two Parts Introduction
Nowadays, the way many people interact with There is no doubt that technology has had a
each other has changed because of technology.
significant bearing on all facets of our life,
including work, education, and
Template communication. This impact is particularly
1 Give general statement noticeable in modern-day relationships, which
2 Paraphrase question statement have been remarkably enhanced through
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
telephones, video-conferencing, emails, and
social media platforms. This essay will
Outline explore how technology has impacted our
I. How technology shapes relationships relationships and why this has been a positive
1) Form new relationships development.
⤷ Ex. → FB groups, forums, dating app
II. Pos. dev.
1) Phones, email → brings us closer
⤷ Ex. → stay updated, work meetings
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Paragraphs
Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
● Template #1 and Template #2 are both used in the examples that follow to give
you a better understanding of both methods
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Specific General
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How to Explain Supporting Details
Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same
products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Outline Template #1
I. Loss of cultural diversity 1 State main idea #1
1) Cultural artifacts will lose their value 2 Give 2 supporting details
2) It will prevent cultural learning 3 Explain detail #1
4 Explain detail #2
II. Loss of jobs for local people 5 Transition into next para (optional)
1) Decline in sales of local products
2) Decline in tourism
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How to Explain Supporting Details
1 Why/Why not? 2 Example 3 Personal Experience
Example: A country's history, Example: An illustration of this Example: For instance, I once
language, and ethos are all so loss of heritage is visible in travelled to South Africa and
inextricably bound up in its India, where local citizens have found that local artifacts were
manufactured artifacts that buying replaced traditional attires with near impossible to locate and I
a cultural item non-locally would western clothing, like jeans, was instead forced to purchase a
be devoid of richness and jackets, and t-shirts. generic souvenir devoid of
meaning. cultural richness.
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Transitions
● You only need one transition between two paragraphs
Transition
● A transition can take two forms:
Paragraph
○ End a paragraph with a sentence that leads forward
Paragraph
to the next paragraph, or
○ Start the new paragraph in a way that links back to
the previous paragraph
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How to Write Body
Paragraphs
Agree/Disagree: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high
school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or
teaching sports to younger children).
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Outline
I. Builds character
1) Adds new perspective
2) Builds work ethic
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Agree/Disagree Body Para 1
Outline
I. Builds character
1) Adds new perspective
2) Builds work ethic
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Agree/Disagree Body Para 1
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Agree/Disagree Body Para 1
Outline
II. Improves community
1) Creates unity
2) Can inspire solutions to problems
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Agree/Disagree Body Para 2
Outline
II. Improves community
1) Creates unity
2) Can inspire solutions to problems
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Agree/Disagree Body Para 2
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Agree/Disagree Body Para 2
First and foremost, community service develops strong-charactered individuals by exposing them to
new perspectives and encouraging a healthy work ethic. I recall that when I volunteered to clean up
the trash in my high school, I gained an immense appreciation for the arduous work that janitors
went through each day to keep our school tidy. Witnessing such labor with which society members
improve our society can impart valuable lessons about hard work, commitment, and meeting goals
and deadlines.
Moreover, volunteering actively improves one's community as a whole. It serves as a bridge that
connects community members with each other and can inspire solutions to community problems. In
my experience, the volunteering program at my high school allowed me to form lifelong friendships
with fellow volunteers, which has strengthened my relationship with my neighborhood. It is also
worth noting that such exposure can put students in touch with the obstacles their community faces,
which can inspire them to choose a significant line of work that directly benefits their community.
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How to Write Body
Paragraphs
Advantage/Disadvantage: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at
primary school rather than secondary school.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Template #2
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Advantage/Disadvantage Body Para 1
Outline
I. Dis.
1) Underperformance in math, science
⤷ Ex. → Digitalization → Job Security
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Advantage/Disadvantage Body Para 1
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Advantage/Disadvantage Body Para 1
Outline
II. Adv.
1) Cultural edu. → healthy social life
⤷ → happier state → more important
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Advantage/Disadvantage Body Para 2
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Advantage/Disadvantage Body Para 2
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Advantage/Disadvantage Body Para 2
In regards to the disadvantages, the main drawback of teaching a foreign language at primary school
is that it may result in underperformance in other vital subjects. Subjects like math, science and
computer programming have real world applications, and allocating time away from these subjects
can lower our children’s employability in the future. For example, digitalization is now displacing
more and more jobs with automation, and as a result, many favor scientific subjects over creative
ones, in order to ensure their children’s job security. However, although this is an understandable
concern, this viewpoint undermines the true value of bilingualism.
Knowing a foreign language will result in significant advantages to the child’s overall development.
One of the biggest benefits would be that children will learn to appreciate other cultures from an
early age. This is likely to lead to a healthy social life and improved psychological and emotional
state, which are far more vital than job security. In fact, research proves that the level of one’s
happiness and his/her income are directly correlated.
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Paragraphs
Problem/Solution: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and
fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measure could be taken to
solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Outline
I. Causes
1) Lack of time
2) Lack of money
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Problem/Solution Body Para 1
Outline
I. Causes
1) Lack of time
2) Lack of money
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Problem/Solution Body Para 1
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Problem/Solution Body Para 1
Outline
II. Solutions → Government initiative
1) National campaigns
2) Subsidies
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Problem/Solution Body Para 2
Outline
II. Solutions → Government initiative
1) National campaigns
2) Subsidies
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Problem/Solution Body Para 2
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Problem/Solution Body Para 2
In essence, the principal causes of obesity are two fold - the fast-paced modern lifestyle and the poor
economic condition endured by many. Firstly, a typical day of average working people is marked by
a substantial lack of time, which can cause them to prioritize convenience and ease of accessibility
over health. Alternatively, there are those who are unemployed or underpaid and are forced to
consume detrimental foods in an attempt to conserve their short supply of funds.
Despite these challenges, it is possible to resolve this health crisis through educational campaigns
and government subsidies. National campaigns, which can be promoted through social media and
street outreach, have the power to educate people about the importance of prioritizing their health
over convenience and time-saving. Moreover, if the government were to subsidize healthy foods, it
would allow farmers to produce them at a cheaper cost and lower the price for consumers as a result.
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How to Write Body
Paragraphs
Discuss/Opinion: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of
sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and
that other measures are required.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Discuss/Opinion Body Para 1
Outline
I. Benefits of more gyms
1) Easier accessibility
⤷ → increased motivation
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Discuss/Opinion Body Para 1
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Discuss/Opinion Body Para 1
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Discuss/Opinion Body Para 2
Outline
II. Other measures are needed
1) Gov. initiatives
⤷ → education + help poor areas
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Discuss/Opinion Body Para 2
1) Gov. initiatives
⤷ → education + help poor areas
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Discuss/Opinion: Body Paragraphs
It is true that this proposition does offer some benefits. For instance, if a sports facility was
established in every zip code of a city, people would find it quite convenient and time-efficient to
commute to the nearby gym and as a result would be more likely to work out. Additionally, gym-
goers may come into contact with other like-minded individuals who share similar health goals,
which could result in an increased motivation to exercise. However, despite these benefits, merely
increasing the number of gyms is not the ideal solution.
In my view, more effective strategies are needed to promote public health. The government should
take the initiative to promote healthy eating, because research has shown that food plays a larger role
in fitness than exercise. National campaigns should be launched to educate people about their food
choices and economic stability should be promoted in underserved communities, since
malnourishment rates tend to be the highest in poor areas. I believe that these measures have the
potential to have the most profound impact on public health.
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Opinion Questions
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How to Write Body
Paragraphs
Opinion: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the
only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Template #1
Outline
I. Many ignore recycling
1) People will take recycling seriously
2) Law → build good habits
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Opinion Body Para 1
Outline
I. Many ignore recycling
1) People will take recycling seriously
2) Law → build good habits
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Opinion Body Para 1
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Opinion Body Para 1
Outline
II. Critical for improving planet health
1) ↓ Env. pollution
2) Conserves natural resources
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Opinion Body Para 2
Outline
II. Critical for improving planet health
1) ↓ Env. pollution
2) Conserves natural resources
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Opinion Body Para 2
It is an unfortunate fact that many ignore recycling either out of ignorance or laziness; however,
legally enforcing this practice would compel residents to pay more attention to recycling and result
in the formation of positive behavior. Research has shown that punishing negative behaviors with
monetary penalties motivates people to correct their behavior in an attempt to preserve their hard-
earned funds. Moreover, consistently repeating the act of recycling would reinforce it into a lifelong
positive habit, which can inspire others to follow in similar footsteps.
The opponents of this proposal should realize that our environment directly bears the burden of any
residents' negligence toward waste management. In recent years, we have witnessed the collapse of
ecosystems and depletion of natural resources. Recycling regulations would ensure that hazardous
waste like chemicals and plastics do not upset any ecosystems or endanger any marine or terrestrial
species. Additionally, if people recycled their waste, it would result in the conservation of natural
resources like trees, which are routinely cut down to produce our everyday items like paper and
rubber.
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Paragraphs
Two Parts: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Two Parts Body Para 1
Outline
I. How technology shapes relationships
1) Form new relationships
⤷ Ex. → FB groups, forums, dating app
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Two Parts Body Para 1
Outline
I. How technology shapes relationships
1) Form new relationships
⤷ Ex. → FB groups, forums, dating app
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Two Parts Body Para 1
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Two Parts Body Para 1
Outline
II. Pos. dev.
1. Phones, email → brings us closer
⤷ Ex. → stay updated, work meetings
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Two Parts Body Para 2
Outline
II. Pos. dev.
1. Phones, email → brings us closer
⤷ Ex. → stay updated, work meetings
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Two Parts Body Para 2
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Two Parts Body Para 2
Transition + Position
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Two Parts: Body Paragraphs
Modern technology has shaped our relationships in a myriad of ways. Social media platforms have
enabled us to not only maintain ties with the people in our lives, but also to form new relationships.
For example, we can now meet like-minded people through Facebook groups and online forums,
and even meet potential mates through dating applications. In fact, I have found three of my
business partners on LinkedIn and I first met my wife through a matrimonial website, so it is evident
that technology has had a positive influence on our relationships.
Perhaps the most constructive contribution of technology to relationships has been to bring people
closer to each other, irrespective of physical distances. Phones, emails and social media have
allowed us to exchange information at phenomenal speeds. For example, we can now stay updated
with the daily ongoings of our loved ones, conduct business meetings over Skype or collaborate
remotely via task management software. All of these possibilities have enhanced personal
relationships and increased work productivity.
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How to Write
Conclusions
Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
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Template
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How to Write
Conclusions
Agree/Disagree: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high
school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or
teaching sports to younger children).
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Every nation needs citizens who display social commitment and actively work to improve the community for the
welfare of its residents. Since students are the nation’s future, some people have argued that volunteer work
should be a mandatory part of the school curriculum. I strongly agree with this view, because volunteering not
only improves the community as a whole but also builds valuable character traits.
First and foremost, community service develops strong-charactered individuals by exposing them to new
perspectives and encouraging a healthy work ethic. I recall that when I volunteered to clean up the trash in my
high school, I gained an immense appreciation for the arduous work that janitors went through each day to keep
our school tidy. Witnessing such labor with which society members improve our society can impart valuable
lessons about hard work, commitment, and meeting goals and deadlines.
Moreover, volunteering actively improves one's community as a whole. It serves as a bridge that connects
community members with each other and can inspire solutions to community problems. In my experience, the
volunteering program at my high school allowed me to form lifelong friendships with fellow volunteers, which
has strengthened my relationship with my neighborhood. It is also worth noting that such exposure can put
students in touch with the obstacles their community faces, which can inspire them to choose a significant line of
work that directly benefits their community.
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Agree/Disagree Conclusion
Main ideas
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Agree/Disagree Conclusion
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Full Essay (294 words)
Every nation needs citizens who display social commitment and actively work to improve the community for the welfare of its
residents. Since students are the nation’s future, some people have argued that volunteer work should be a mandatory part of the
school curriculum. I strongly agree with this view, because volunteering not only improves the community as a whole but also
builds valuable character traits.
First and foremost, community service develops strong-charactered individuals by exposing them to new perspectives and
encouraging a healthy work ethic. I recall that when I volunteered to clean up the trash in my high school, I gained an immense
appreciation for the arduous work that janitors went through each day to keep our school tidy. Witnessing such labor with which
society members improve our society can impart valuable lessons about hard work, commitment, and meeting goals and
deadlines.
Moreover, volunteering actively improves one's community as a whole. It serves as a bridge that connects community members
with each other and can inspire solutions to community problems. In my experience, the volunteering program at my high school
allowed me to form lifelong friendships with fellow volunteers, which has strengthened my relationship with my neighborhood.
It is also worth noting that such exposure can put students in touch with the obstacles their community faces, which can inspire
them to choose a significant line of work that directly benefits their community.
To sum up, teenagers should be made to partake in volunteer work as part of their high school curriculum, since it will build
strong character traits while simultaneously progressing the community. As a firm believer in this approach, I suggest that every
high school across the nation should take this proposal into serious consideration and implement it into their school agenda.
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How to Write
Conclusions
Advantage/Disadvantage: Recipe for Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at
primary school rather than secondary school.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Our Answer So Far...
A growing number of parents are enrolling their children in foreign language classes for well-rounded linguistic
development. In this regard, some educators propose that primary school is the best place for learning another
language instead of secondary school. This essay will explore both, the advantages and disadvantages of this
proposal, and demonstrate why its proponents are correct.
In regards to the disadvantages, the main drawback of teaching a foreign language at primary school is that it may
result in underperformance in other vital subjects. Subjects like math, science and computer programming have
real world applications, and allocating time away from these subjects can lower our children’s employability in
the future. For example, digitalization is now displacing more and more jobs with automation, and as a result,
many favor scientific subjects over creative ones, in order to ensure their children’s job security. However,
although this is an understandable concern, this viewpoint undermines the true value of bilingualism.
Knowing a foreign language will result in significant advantages to the child’s overall development. One of the
biggest benefits would be that children will learn to appreciate other cultures from an early age. This is likely to
lead to a healthy social life and improved psychological and emotional state, which are far more vital than job
security. In fact, research proves that the level of one’s happiness and his/her income are directly correlated.
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Advantage/Disadvantage Conclusion
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Advantage/Disadvantage Conclusion
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Full Essay (272 Words)
A growing number of parents are enrolling their children in foreign language classes for well-rounded linguistic
development. In this regard, some educators propose that primary school is the best place for learning another language
instead of secondary school. This essay will explore both, the advantages and disadvantages of this proposal, and
demonstrate why its proponents are correct.
In regards to the disadvantages, the main drawback of teaching a foreign language at primary school is that it may result in
underperformance in other vital subjects. Subjects like math, science and computer programming have real world
applications, and allocating time away from these subjects can lower our children’s employability in the future. For
example, digitalization is now displacing more and more jobs with automation, and as a result, many favor scientific
subjects over creative ones, in order to ensure their children’s job security. However, although this is an understandable
concern, this viewpoint undermines the true value of bilingualism.
Knowing a foreign language will result in significant advantages to the child’s overall development. One of the biggest
benefits would be that children will learn to appreciate other cultures from an early age. This is likely to lead to a healthy
social life and improved psychological and emotional state, which are far more vital than job security. In fact, research
proves that the level of one’s happiness and his/her income are directly correlated.
In conclusion, while studying a foreign language in primary school does have some drawbacks, they are temporary and
outweighed by the significant benefits of this approach, which is why I would urge school boards to introduce foreign
language classes as early as possible.
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Conclusions
Problem/Solution: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and
fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measure could be taken to
solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Maintaining optimal health is crucial for living a healthy lifestyle and avoiding diseases and disorders.
Unfortunately, some nations are now witnessing an increase in the average weight of their population and a
decline in their health and well-being. This essay will highlight the principal causes of these issues and possible
solutions to resolve them.
In essence, the principal causes of obesity are two fold - the fast-paced modern lifestyle and the poor economic
condition endured by many. Firstly, a typical day of average working people is marked by a substantial lack of
time, which can cause them to prioritize convenience and ease of accessibility over health. Alternatively, there are
those who are unemployed or underpaid and are forced to consume detrimental foods in an attempt to conserve
their short supply of funds.
Despite these challenges, it is possible to resolve this health crisis through educational campaigns and government
subsidies. National campaigns, which can be promoted through social media and street outreach, have the power
to educate people about the importance of prioritizing their health over convenience and time-saving. Moreover, if
the government were to subsidize healthy foods, it would allow farmers to produce them at a cheaper cost and
lower the price for consumers as a result.
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Problem/Solution Conclusion
Main ideas
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Problem/Solution Conclusion
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Full Essay (257 Words)
Maintaining optimal health is crucial for living a healthy lifestyle and avoiding diseases and disorders. Unfortunately, some
nations are now witnessing an increase in the average weight of their population and a decline in their health and well-
being. This essay will highlight the principal causes of these issues and possible solutions to resolve them.
In essence, the principal causes of obesity are two fold - the fast-paced modern lifestyle and the poor economic condition
endured by many. Firstly, a typical day of average working people is marked by a substantial lack of time, which can cause
them to prioritize convenience and ease of accessibility over health. Alternatively, there are those who are unemployed or
underpaid and are forced to consume detrimental foods in an attempt to conserve their short supply of funds.
Despite these challenges, it is possible to resolve this health crisis through educational campaigns and government
subsidies. National campaigns, which can be promoted through social media and street outreach, have the power to educate
people about the importance of prioritizing their health over convenience and time-saving. Moreover, if the government
were to subsidize healthy foods, it would allow farmers to produce them at a cheaper cost and lower the price for consumers
as a result.
To conclude, although many nations are currently experiencing declining health, such challenges can be resolved with
careful planning. I would advise the food and health administrations of nations facing such issues to allocate a significant
portion of taxpayer funds to improve the well-being of their citizens through educational campaigns and subsidies.
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How to Write
Conclusions
Discuss/Opinion: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of
sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and
that other measures are required.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
In many nations, the average weight of people is increasing, and their level of well-being is declining. In this regard, it
is proposed that expanding the number of gyms is the most effective way to boost the health of the general public,
although many disagree and contend that other measures are needed. In my opinion, the proposal of expanding the
number of gyms is an insufficient measure; however, this essay will explore both aspects of this discussion.
It is true that this proposition does offer some benefits. For instance, if a sports facility was established in every zip
code of a city, people would find it quite convenient and time-efficient to commute to the nearby gym and as a result
would be more likely to work out. Additionally, gym-goers may come into contact with other like-minded individuals
who share similar health goals, which could result in an increased motivation to exercise. However, despite these
benefits, merely increasing the number of gyms is not the ideal solution.
In my view, more effective strategies are needed to promote public health. The government should take the initiative to
promote healthy eating, because research has shown that food plays a larger role in fitness than exercise. National
campaigns should be launched to educate people about their food choices and economic stability should be promoted in
underserved communities, since malnourishment rates tend to be the highest in poor areas. I believe that these measures
have the potential to have the most profound impact on public health.
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Discuss/Opinion Conclusion
Main ideas
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1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Discuss/Opinion Conclusion
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1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Full Essay (288 Words)
In many nations, the average weight of people is increasing, and their level of well-being is declining. In this regard, it is
proposed that expanding the number of gyms is the most effective way to boost the health of the general public, although
many disagree and contend that other measures are needed. In my opinion, the proposal of expanding the number of gyms is
an insufficient measure; however, this essay will explore both aspects of this discussion.
It is true that this proposition does offer some benefits. For instance, if a sports facility was established in every zip code of
a city, people would find it quite convenient and time-efficient to commute to the nearby gym and as a result would be more
likely to work out. Additionally, gym-goers may come into contact with other like-minded individuals who share similar
health goals, which could result in an increased motivation to exercise. However, despite these benefits, merely increasing
the number of gyms is not the ideal solution.
In my view, more effective strategies are needed to promote public health. The government should take the initiative to
promote healthy eating, because research has shown that food plays a larger role in fitness than exercise. National
campaigns should be launched to educate people about their food choices and economic stability should be promoted in
underserved communities, since malnourishment rates tend to be the highest in poor areas. I believe that these measures
have the potential to have the most profound impact on public health.
All things considered, while increasing the number of gyms would have some benefits, it would be an inadequate measure. I
would advise health committees to instead focus on exploring more effective measures, such as education and
incentivization.
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How to Write
Conclusions
Opinion: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the
only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Our Answer So Far...
The growing pollution and the resulting environmental concerns have stirred a crucial debate. Some
environmentalists claim that due to public's negligence towards proper waste disposal, recycling should be legally
enforced. I strongly agree with this proposal, since a legal mandate will compel citizens to take recycling more
seriously and result in the recovery of our planet’s health.
It is an unfortunate fact that many ignore recycling either out of ignorance or laziness; however, legally enforcing
this practice would compel residents to pay more attention to recycling and result in the formation of positive
behavior. Research has shown that punishing negative behaviors with monetary penalties motivates people to
correct their behavior in an attempt to preserve their hard-earned funds. Moreover, consistently repeating the act
of recycling would reinforce it into a lifelong positive habit, which can inspire others to follow in similar
footsteps.
The opponents of this proposal should realize that our environment directly bears the burden of any residents'
negligence toward waste management. In recent years, we have witnessed the collapse of ecosystems and
depletion of natural resources. Recycling regulations would ensure that hazardous waste like chemicals and
plastics do not upset any ecosystems or endanger any marine or terrestrial species. Additionally, if people recycled
their waste, it would result in the conservation of natural resources like trees, which are routinely cut down to
produce our everyday items like paper and rubber. 345
Opinion Conclusion
Main ideas
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Opinion Conclusion
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Full Essay (288 Words)
The growing pollution and the resulting environmental concerns have stirred a crucial debate. Some environmentalists claim
that due to public's negligence towards proper waste disposal, recycling should be legally enforced. I strongly agree with
this proposal, since a legal mandate will compel citizens to take recycling more seriously and result in the recovery of our
planet’s health.
It is an unfortunate fact that many ignore recycling either out of ignorance or laziness; however, legally enforcing this
practice would compel residents to pay more attention to recycling and result in the formation of positive behavior.
Research has shown that punishing negative behaviors with monetary penalties motivates people to correct their behavior in
an attempt to preserve their hard-earned funds. Moreover, consistently repeating the act of recycling would reinforce it into
a lifelong positive habit, which can inspire others to follow in similar footsteps.
The opponents of this proposal should realize that our environment directly bears the burden of any residents' negligence
toward waste management. In recent years, we have witnessed the collapse of ecosystems and depletion of natural
resources. Recycling regulations would ensure that hazardous waste like chemicals and plastics do not upset any ecosystems
or endanger any marine or terrestrial species. Additionally, if people recycled their waste, it would result in the conservation
of natural resources like trees, which are routinely cut down to produce our everyday items like paper and rubber.
All in all, I firmly believe that recycling should be mandated by law and enforced with hefty fines to encourage the public to
take recycling seriously and aid in the recovery of our planet's health. I would suggest the government to make this
legislation a top priority and urgently implement it for the benefit of all.
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How to Write
Conclusions
Two Parts: Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
WRITING TASK 2
Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
There is no doubt that technology has had a significant bearing on all facets of our life, including work, education, and
communication. This impact is particularly noticeable in modern-day relationships, which have been remarkably
enhanced through telephones, video-conferencing, emails, and social media platforms. This essay will explore how
technology has impacted our relationships and why this has been a positive development.
Modern technology has shaped our relationships in a myriad of ways. Social media platforms have enabled us to not
only maintain ties with the people in our lives, but also to form new relationships. For example, we can now meet like-
minded people through Facebook groups and online forums, and even meet potential mates through dating applications.
In fact, I have found three of my business partners on LinkedIn and I first met my wife through a matrimonial website,
so it is evident that technology has had a positive influence on our relationships.
Perhaps the most constructive contribution of technology to relationships has been to bring people closer to each other,
irrespective of physical distances. Phones, emails and social media have allowed us to exchange information at
phenomenal speeds. For example, we can now stay updated with the daily ongoings of our loved ones, conduct
business meetings over Skype or collaborate remotely via task management software. All of these possibilities have
enhanced personal relationships and increased work productivity.
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Two Parts Conclusion
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Two Parts Conclusion
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Full Essay (273 Words)
There is no doubt that technology has had a significant bearing on all facets of our life, including work, education, and
communication. This impact is particularly noticeable in modern-day relationships, which have been remarkably enhanced
through telephones, video-conferencing, emails, and social media platforms. This essay will explore how technology has
impacted our relationships and why this has been a positive development.
Modern technology has shaped our relationships in a myriad of ways. Social media platforms have enabled us to not only
maintain ties with the people in our lives, but also to form new relationships. For example, we can now meet like-minded
people through Facebook groups and online forums, and even meet potential mates through dating applications. In fact, I
have found three of my business partners on LinkedIn and I first met my wife through a matrimonial website, so it is evident
that technology has had a positive influence on our relationships.
Perhaps the most constructive contribution of technology to relationships has been to bring people closer to each other,
irrespective of physical distances. Phones, emails and social media have allowed us to exchange information at phenomenal
speeds. For example, we can now stay updated with the daily ongoings of our loved ones, conduct business meetings over
Skype or collaborate remotely via task management software. All of these possibilities have enhanced personal relationships
and increased work productivity.
In summary, technology has had a significant impact on every aspect of our relationships and has enhanced our social ties
by bridging the distance between people. As such, we should embrace the role of technology in our lives and encourage new
developments in this field.
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Check Your Essay
Recipe for IELTS Writing Task 2
● Ideally, you should have 5 minutes left over for checking your work
● Use this time to correct small errors that are easy to fix
“To help child learn the difference between right and wrong teachers and parents should provide
first good role modelling in their own behevior.”
“To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong , teachers and parents should first
provide good role modelling in their own behavior.”
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To Check or Not to Check
5 minutes is short amount of time. You should not check the elements which take too long to find
or fix (unless you have extra time). Focus on correcting small errors.
Employees get job satisfaction in number of ways. Firstly a person need to feel that
they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback with superiors is very
importance in this respect. A sense of fulfilling is also encouraged if an worker feel the
is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole.
Secondly, the amount right of challenge are also important for enjoying ones work.
when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills at training
opurtunities, there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker.
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Practice Question 1
Cooking: Real exam question answered in real-time
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender equality.
In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female students for every
course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine national progress and lead to
inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of skilled
individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to maintain the set
ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and employment, which will
negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the importance of hard work and result
in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many deserving
students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue further education.
Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a class only because of their
gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as they lose faith in the educational
system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing on gender
would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I strongly urge school
boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Breakdown of
Strategy
Practice Question 1: Cooking for Writing Task 2
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words. Choose ONE side only! You can partly agree, but it’s easier to
just simplify it and pick one side
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Outline
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Introduction
Universities should accept equal numbers of The subject of male to female student ratio in
male and female students in every subject. university classes has been a trending topic in
recent debates on gender equality.
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This general statement tells us
1 Give general statement
about the recent development
2 Paraphrase question statement related to the topic
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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Introduction
Universities should accept equal numbers of The subject of male to female student ratio in
male and female students in every subject. university classes has been a trending topic in
recent debates on gender equality.
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This general statement tells us
1 Give general statement
about the recent development
2 Paraphrase question statement related to the topic
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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Introduction
Universities should accept equal numbers of The subject of male to female student ratio in
male and female students in every subject. university classes has been a trending topic in
recent debates on gender equality. In this
regard, it is proposed that university seats
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should be equally allocated between male and
1 Give general statement
2 Paraphrase question statement female students for every course.
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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Introduction
Universities should accept equal numbers of The subject of male to female student ratio in
male and female students in every subject. university classes has been a trending topic in
recent debates on gender equality. In this
regard, it is proposed that university seats
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should be equally allocated between male and
1 Give general statement
2 Paraphrase question statement female students for every course.
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
Outline
I. Undermine national progress
1) Wasting talents/time
2) Lead to underperformance
II. Create inequality
1) Deprive deserving students
2) Demotivate students
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Introduction
Universities should accept equal numbers of The subject of male to female student ratio in
male and female students in every subject. university classes has been a trending topic in
recent debates on gender equality. In this
regard, it is proposed that university seats
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should be equally allocated between male and
1 Give general statement
2 Paraphrase question statement female students for every course. However, I
3 State thesis (position + main ideas) strongly disagree with this view, because
focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality
Outline
towards well-qualified students.
I. Undermine national progress
1) Wasting talents/time
2) Lead to underperformance
II. Create inequality
1) Deprive deserving students
2) Demotivate students
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Our Essay So Far...
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender equality.
In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female students for every
course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine national progress and lead to
inequality towards well-qualified students.
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Body Para 1
Outline
I. Undermine national progress
1) Wasting talents/time
2) Lead to underperformance
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Outline
I. Undermine national progress
1) Wasting talents/time
2) Lead to underperformance
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Body Para 1
Outline
I. Undermine national progress
1) Wasting talents/time
2) Lead to underperformance
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Body Para 1
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender equality.
In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female students for every
course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine national progress and lead to
inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of skilled
individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to maintain the set
ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and employment, which will
negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the importance of hard work and result
in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance into university classes than their competence.
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Body Para 2
Outline
II. Create inequality
1) Deprive deserving students
2) Demotivate students
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Outline
II. Create inequality
1) Deprive deserving students
2) Demotivate students
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Body Para 2
Outline
II. Create inequality
1) Deprive deserving students
2) Demotivate students
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Body Para 2
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender equality.
In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female students for every
course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine national progress and lead to
inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of skilled
individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to maintain the set
ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and employment, which will
negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the importance of hard work and result
in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many deserving
students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue further education.
Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a class only because of their
gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as they lose faith in the educational
system or begin to doubt their abilities.
386
Conclusion
Main ideas
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Conclusion
Template
1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Full Essay (286 Words)
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender equality.
In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female students for every
course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine national progress and lead to
inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of skilled
individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to maintain the set
ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and employment, which will
negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the importance of hard work and result
in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form ofParagraphing/spacing
inequality. Many deserving
students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue further education.
Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a class only because of their
gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as they lose faith in the educational
system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing on gender
would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I strongly urge school
boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Breakdown of Ingredients for
Practice Question 1
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Breakdown of
Ingredients
Practice Question 1: Cooking for Writing Task 2
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing on
gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I strongly
urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Cohesive Devices
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing on
gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I strongly
urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Coordinating Conjunctions (Compound Sentences)
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing
on gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I
strongly urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Subordinating Conjunctions (Complex Sentences)
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing
on gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I
strongly urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Relative Pronouns
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing
on gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I
strongly urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Voice
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing
on gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I
strongly urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Tenses
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing
on gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I
strongly urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
. Present Simple . . Present Perfect . . Future Simple . . Modal Tenses . 398
Collocations
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing
on gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I
strongly urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Vocabulary
The subject of male to female student ratio in university classes has been a trending topic in recent debates on gender
equality. In this regard, it is proposed that university seats should be equally allocated between male and female
students for every course. However, I strongly disagree with this view, because focusing on gender would undermine
national progress and lead to inequality towards well-qualified students.
To begin with, implementing this proposal would degrade the productivity of our nation by wasting the talents of
skilled individuals and setting up students to underperform. Disqualifying deserving students from a class simply to
maintain the set ratio of male to female students will waste their precious time and delay their graduation and
employment, which will negatively impact our national economy. Furthermore, such a proposal would undermine the
importance of hard work and result in underperformance as students learn to rely more on their gender for acceptance
into university classes than their competence.
Ironically, such an attempt to create gender equality in universities would give rise to a new form of inequality. Many
deserving students would be deprived of equal educational opportunity and this can demotivate students to pursue
further education. Numerous hardworking students take their education very seriously and to disqualify them from a
class only because of their gender would be a great injustice. In fact, such injustice can easily demotivate students as
they lose faith in the educational system or begin to doubt their abilities.
In conclusion, university seats should not be equally distributed between male and female students, because focusing
on gender would undermine national progress and result in inequality towards well-qualified students. As such, I
strongly urge school boards across our nation to reject such proposals.
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Practice Question 2
Cooking: Real exam question answered in real-time
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. It is my view that both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this
essay will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. Therefore, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these essential
skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Strategy
Practice Question 2: Cooking for Writing Task 2
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others
believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful
adults.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
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Outline
I. Benefits of competition
Some people think that a sense of
1. Push their boundaries
competition in children should be
⤷ Ex. → Soccer
encouraged. Others believe that children
who are taught to co-operate rather than II. Benefits of cooperation
compete become more useful adults. 1. Teamwork
⤷ Ex. → Brainstorming projects
Discuss both these views and give your
own opinion.
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Some people think that a sense of competition in There are many competing views on the
children should be encouraged. Others believe that pedagogy of raising children.
children who are taught to co-operate rather than
compete become more useful adults.
This general statement tells us
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1 Give general statement related to the topic
2 Paraphrase question statement
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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Introduction
Some people think that a sense of competition in The subject of male to female student ratio in
children should be encouraged. Others believe that university classes has been a trending topic in
children who are taught to co-operate rather than
recent debates on gender equality.
compete become more useful adults.
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Introduction
Some people think that a sense of competition in There are many competing views on the
children should be encouraged. Others believe that pedagogy of raising children. In this regard,
children who are taught to co-operate rather than
some educators believe that encouraging
compete become more useful adults.
children to compete is most beneficial to their
Template development, whereas others argue in favor of
1 Give general statement teaching cooperation.
2 Paraphrase question statement
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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Introduction
Some people think that a sense of competition in There are many competing views on the
children should be encouraged. Others believe that pedagogy of raising children. In this regard,
children who are taught to co-operate rather than
some educators believe that encouraging
compete become more useful adults.
children to compete is most beneficial to their
Template development, whereas others argue in favor of
1 Give general statement teaching cooperation.
2 Paraphrase question statement
3 State thesis (position + main ideas)
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I. Benefits of competition
1) Push their boundaries
⤷ Ex. → Soccer
II. Benefits of cooperation
1) Teamwork
⤷ Ex. → Brainstorming projects 411
Introduction
Some people think that a sense of competition in There are many competing views on the
children should be encouraged. Others believe that pedagogy of raising children. In this regard,
children who are taught to co-operate rather than
some educators believe that encouraging
compete become more useful adults.
children to compete is most beneficial to their
Template development, whereas others argue in favor of
1 Give general statement teaching cooperation. It is my view that both
2 Paraphrase question statement skills are essential to the well-rounded
3 State thesis (position + main ideas) development of children, and as such, this
essay will explore both facets of this debate
Outline and show why both are necessary.
I. Benefits of competition
1) Push their boundaries
⤷ Ex. → Soccer
II. Benefits of cooperation
1) Teamwork
⤷ Ex. → Brainstorming projects 412
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There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. It is my view that both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this
essay will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
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There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. It is my view that both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this
essay will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
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Outline
II. Benefits of cooperation
1) Teamwork
⤷ Ex. → Brainstorming projects
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Outline
II. Benefits of cooperation
1) Teamwork
⤷ Ex. → Brainstorming projects
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1) Teamwork
⤷ Ex. → Brainstorming projects
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1) Teamwork
⤷ Ex. → Brainstorming projects
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There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. It is my view that both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this
essay will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves as important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
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Main ideas
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1 Summarize main points/restate thesis
2 Give suggestion or recommendation
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Main ideas
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Full Essay (265 Words)
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. It is my view that both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this
essay will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. Therefore, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these essential
skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Full Essay (265 Words)
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. It is my view that both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this
essay will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate. Paragraphing/spacing
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. Therefore, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these essential
skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Breakdown of
Ingredients
Practice Question 2: Cooking for Writing Task 2
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this essay
will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Cohesive Devices
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this essay
will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our
learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Coordinating Conjunctions (Compound Sentences)
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this essay
will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Subordinating Conjunctions (Complex Sentences)
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this essay
will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Relative Pronouns
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this essay
will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Voice
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this essay
will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this essay
will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor of teaching
cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as such, this essay
will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments, and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our
learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Vocabulary
There are many competing views on the pedagogy of raising children. In this regard, some educators believe that
encouraging children to compete is most beneficial to their development, whereas others argue in favor
of teaching cooperation. In my view, both skills are essential to the well-rounded development of children, and as
such, this essay will explore both facets of this debate and show why both are necessary.
Teaching competition serves an important role in kids’ development. A competitive attitude can compel children to
push beyond their current limitations. For example, in my childhood, it was the drive to be better than the competing
team at soccer that motivated me and my team to put in extra hours of practice, which eventually led to our victory in
many soccer tournaments, and helped us to discover our athletic potential. Let us now turn to the other side of this
debate.
No less important is the role of teaching students to cooperate with each other. Such cooperation can prepare students
to be good team players and understand the value of other people’s perspectives. For example, I remember that in my
early childhood education, our teachers assigned us projects in which all the kids were required to collectively
brainstorm solutions to various problems. As a result, we were able to solve puzzles faster and accelerate our learning.
In summary, a healthy balance of both, competition and cooperation, is vital for the well-rounded maturation of
children. As a result, I would advise schools to introduce a wide range of activities that incorporate both these
essential skills into their teaching curriculum.
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Final Tips
What to do before your exam…
● Don’t stay up at night to prepare for your exam! Get a good night’s sleep
○ Research shows that students who sleep at least seven hours the night before a test
typically score higher than those who get only six hours of sleep.
○ Get as much sleep as you need to feel well rested and prepared for your test.
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What things to bring for the IELTS exam?
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What things to bring for the IELTS exam?
● Stationary items
○ Carry your own pencils, sharpener, erasers and pens (ballpoint pen with black/blue
ink) in case your test center does not provide them
● Water bottle (optional)
○ Should be transparent without any writing or labels on it
○ Not allowed in some test centers. In this case, a water facility will most probably be
available.
● Snacks (optional)
○ Not allowed in the test room, but you can eat while waiting to go into the examination
hall (sometimes, it can be a long wait)
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The Day of the Test
● Gotta pee?
○ Use bathroom before the test, as there are no bathroom breaks in the exam.
○ To use the restroom during the test, raise your hand to ask the examiner.
○ Don’t go during your listening test, because the listening test will not stop and you
will miss the answers (and get a lower score as a result).
○ If you must, then go to the toilet during your reading or writing test.
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