TheAdventurousAdventuresofSusieandMadison:Outline

byJasmineGillieandCeceKucan

Name
Susie

Madison

Traits
Small,big
colorfullab
coatthatwas
giventoher,
braids

Backstory
8yearsold

Tall,plain
29yearsold.Been
whitelabcoat, workingatlabfor
glasses,
aroundtwoyears.
ponytail

Mr.Bossman Suitwith
colorfultie.

43yearsold.

Personality

Character
Relationship

Carefree/Careless,
Quirky,Tolerant,
Annoying,Curious

Susieisthe
bossskid
andMadison
isan
employee,
Onesided
respect

Shorttempered,
Judgemental,
Responsible,
Persistent,Sarcastic,
Serious
Cheery,Happy,
Bubbly

PointInStory

GeneralIdeas/ImportantDetails

FirstScene

Sceneopenswithascientistworkingonastrangelookingmachine,
expressionisconcentratedanddeeplyfocuseddespitenoisy
background.Concentrationisinterruptedwhenthescientists
(unnamed)bossbringstheirchildintothelabroom.Thebossasks
thescientisttotakecareoftheirkid,andwithouttheoptiontorefuse,
thescientiststepsawayfromtheirprojectandtriestoentertainthe
child.BasicIntroductions,welearnthechildandthescientists
names.

SecondScene

MadisonseesabunchofflowersthatSusieisholding.Shegrabs
themandstartsexplainingthattheresacoolorganicchemistry
experimentthatinvolvesflowersanddoesntnoticethatpartway
throughshewanderedoff.SusiefindswhatMadisonwasworkingon
earlierandstartspressingallthebuttons.WhenMadisonrealizesthis
shetriestostopherbutistoolateandtheybothareshrunkendown.

ThirdScene

SusieisobviouslyconfusedandsoMadisonexplainseverythingto
herandhowatomsarenowthesizeofabasketball.

FourthScene

SusieisexcitedandwantstogoaroundandexplorewhichMadison
thinksisaverybadideabutSusiestartstowanderawaydespite

everythingshewastold.Madisonhasnochoicebuttofollowher
becauseshewantstomakesuresheissafeotherwiseshemightlose
herjob.

FifthScene

SusieandMadisoncomeacrossanatom,andSusie,wantingtobe
helpful,grabsitandtriestosplitittoshowMadisonwhattheinside
ofanatomlookslike.MadisoninterferessotheydontdieandSusie
getsfrustrated(nameminiscene,somewherealongthelinesofIm
anadult!Spellyourname.)

SixthScene

Madisonthenexplainswhatanatomisandwhatsinsideofit.Susie
wandersoffagain.

SeventhScene

Susieisholdinganatomwhenitshrinksandshegetsreallywhiny
andupsetuntilMadisonexplainsthatitdidntgetsmallerandthat
theygotbiggerbecauseofasafetyprecaution.

EighthScene

Susiegetshungryandtheyspotapieceofbreadonthebackofan
ant.Susie,beingaragingandhungryeightyearold,triestobattlethe
antforfood(basicRPGlikefightscene).

NinthScene

SusiewinsandshegivesthebiggerhalftoMadisonwhorejectsit
becauseitwasonthefloorandonanantsback.

TenthScene

Susieiseatingthebreadandlooksawayrightastheygetbiggerso
thecrumbdisappears.Susiesupsetthatshehasnomorefood
becauseshesstillhungry.

EleventhScene

SomeonewalksintothelabjustastheygrowtothesizeofaBarbie
dollandMadisontellsSusietohidebutshedoesntwantto.The
personleavesandthenSusieasksaboutwhytheygrewagainsofast.
Madisonthenexplainshowthegrowingprocessgetsfasterand
speedsupastheymovealong.

Conclusion

Theygettonormalsizeagainjustintimeforthebosstowalkinand
thankmadisonforwatchingSusie.

Script

(Sceneopenswithascientistworkingonastrangelookingmachine,expressionisconcentrated
anddeeplyfocused.)
(Asoftmarshmallowmanenterstheroomwithachildaroundeightyearsoldwhoiscarrying
flowers.)
B
HeyMadison,Iwaswonderingifyouwouldwatchmydaughterforalittlewhile.Ihave
togotoanimportantmeetingandIdontwanttoboreher.
M
UhUm
B
Great!Seeyouinanhour,showhersomethingcool.
(Thebossturnsandleavesthescene,leavethelittlegirlandscientistalone.Thelittlegirlgrins
eagerlyandsticksoutherarm.)
S
Hi,ImSusieBossman!TodayIwokeupandthenIwentoutsideandpickedabunchof
reallyprettyflowersandthenmydadtoldmethathewasbringingmetoworkwithhimbuthis
jobisreallyboringandIdontwanttogotoameetingwithhimsohebroughtmehereandIm
reallyexcitedandyouretall!Whatsyourname?
(TheresalongpauseandthenMadisonsighs,notunderstandingmostofwhatSusiesaid)
M
ItsMadison.
S
Thatsreallycool!OnetimeIhadafriendnamedMaddieandshehadareallycoollizard
thatchangedcolorsandstuffbutthenhediedbecausehermomforgottofeedit.Itwasreallysad
andMaddiedoesntevenknowbecausehermomliedaboutitrunningaway.Iknowthetruth
though.
M
Heyyouknowtheresthisreallycoolorganicchemistryexperimentthatyoucandowith
thoseflowersyoureholding.
(MadisongrabstheflowersoutofSusieshandsbutshedoesntseemtomind)
S
Wowreally?Sohowdoesthiswork?Doyoulikemaketheflowerchangecolor?CauseI
sawthisreallycoolfloweroncethatmyfriendhadanditwasrainbowandshetoldmethather
momsaidthatitwasmagicalsoshemadeawishandithasntcometrueyetbutIbetthatitwill
soon.Doyouwanttoknowwhatshewishedfor?WellIcantreallytellyouthatbecauseifyou
telltoomanypeoplethenitwontcometrue.Thatswhatmydadtoldme.Hesaidthatitsokay
totellyourverybestfriendwhatyouwishedforbecausesecretsarehardtokeepwhenitsjust
yousoyougettoshareitwithsomeone.Isntthatgreat?Sodoyouknowwhatthatmeans?It
meansthatImherbestestfriend!ImsohappyaboutthatbecauseIhaventreallyhadabest
friendforabitcausemyoldbestfriendMaddie,youknowMaddie,wellshemovedawayandI
wasalllonelyunt
M
Youtalkalot.
S
YeahIknow.Butmydadsaysthatsokaycause

M
Yeahokaywhatever.So,gettingbacktotheexperiment,whatyouwanttodofirstissoak
thepetalsinvegetablefat.
(Susieisdisgustedandbecomesuninterested,soshestartstowanderaroundthelab,but
Madisondoesntnotice.)
M
Thenweusealcoholtoseparatetheoilsfromthefat.Sowhatwereleftwithisthesweet
smellingaromaoftheflower.Theorganicextractcanbeusedforaromatherapyandbodycare
whichconsistsoflotions,perfumes,andanyotherproducts.
S
Whatdoesthisdo!?
M
NODONTTOUCHTHAT!
S&M BLAAAAAH!!
M
WHATDIDYOUJUSTDO!?!?
S
IDONTREALLYKNOW!THEREWASABUTTONANDIPUSHEDITAND
THENTHEREWEREMOREBUTTONSANDONETHINGLEDTOANOTHER!WAIT!
WHYISEVERYTHINGBIG?WHYAREWESOSMALL?ARETHOSEATOMS?WHAT
ISGOINGON??
M
Okay,okay,letsjustcalmdownforasecond.Themachinethatyoumessedwithwas
meanttoshrinkgermcellsinthehumanbody,butobviously,therewasanerroranditshrunkthe
twoofuscompletely.
S
WAIT,SOIFWERESUPERTINYRIGHTNOWTHATMEANSTHATBUNNIES
AREHUGECOMPAREDTOUS?LIKEBIGGERTHANELEPHANTS?!
M
Well,uh,Iguessso?
S
NOWAYTHISISTHEBESTINVENTIONINTHEWHOLEWIDEWORLD!!
M
Canyoustopscreamingforasecond?
S
Yeahsorry.Letsgoexploring!Iwonderifwellseeanybunnies!
M
Werethesizeofatoms.Ifyousawbunnies,youwouldntknow.
S
Imgonnagoexploring!
(MadisonimaginesSusiefallingoffofacliffandgettingfiredforit)
M
Ohgod.Imcomingwithyou.
(Astheyrewalking,Susiespotsabunchofatomsandgrabsone)
S
Nowwecanfinallyseewhatsinsideanatom!
(Susietriestosplitanatom)
M
Nodontdothat!
S
Whynot?
M
Becausethenthewholeworldwillexplodeincludingallthebunnies.
S
Oooooohhh.
M
Seethisiswhyyoucantgooffalone.
S
Icantoo!
M
No,yourejustalittlekid.
S
Amnot!Imanadult!

M
Ohyeah?Thenhowdoyouspellyourname?
S
C
M
Wrong.
S
Waitletmetryagain!ItsSoo
(Intermission)
Susietellsastoryaboutacloudandanicecubewhochangeformswiththeuseoftheevilsun.
(Endofintermission)
S
Susie!Theregotit.ThatmeansImoldenoughtogooffonmyownadventures.
M
Youknowwhat?Fine.Goonthen.Whatareyouwaitingfor?
S
Canyoucomewithme,itsboringallbymyself.
M
Wowokay,fine.Butdonttouchanyatomsanddontdie.Okay?
S
Okay,Illtrymybest!So,whatdoyouthinksinsideanatomanyway?
M
Wellthespecificsdifferdependingontheatom,buteverysingleoneiscomprisedofa
protonsandneutronsclumpedtogetheratthecenterwhichmakesupthenucleus.Protonshavea
positivechargewhereasneutronsdonthaveanycharge.Thenthereareelectronswhichhavea
negativechargethatflyarounditontheelectronbelts.
S
WellthatswaymoreboringthanIexpected.
(Susiegrabsanotheratom)
M
HeyItoldyounottotouchthose!
(Atomshrinks)
S
Itsgone!Madisonitdisappeared!
M
Itdidntdisappear,wejustgrew.Iprogrammedthemachineyouruinedtobringthings
backtonormalsizeovertime.Thatwaychaoslikethiswouldbeavoidable.
S
Wowyouresosmart!Sorryformessingwithyourmachine,butthatexperimentwas
superboring.
(TheykeepwalkingandthenSusiesstomachgrowls)
S
Imhungry.
M
Wellwhatdoyouwantmetodoaboutit?Ihavenofood.
S
IdontknowIfiguredyoudhavesnacksonyouorsomething,mydadalwayscarries
candyinhispockets.
M
Yourdaddoeswhat?
S
Nothing!Heylookanant!
M
Donttrytodistractme.
S
Noseriouslytheresanant,anditsHUGE!
M
Wait,isitcarryingbread?
S
Bread?Iwantsomebread.Imtakingit.
M
Leavetheantalone.
S
Iwannafighttheant.
M
Dontfighttheant.

S
Imgonnafighttheant.
M
SeriouslySusie,dontfightthe
(TheantisapproachedbyawildandhungrySusie,thebattlebeginsplayingtypical8bitRPG
music.)
M
Ohmygodstop.
S
MadisonIchooseyou!
M
Imnotdoingthis
(Madisonwalksawayfromthebattle,absolutelydone.AfewhitsareshownandthenSusie
acquiresaBreadCrumb!)
S
Here,youcanhavethebiggerhalf.
M
Idontwantit.Doyouknowhowunsanitarythatis?Itwasonanantsbackandnowyou
wanttoeatit.
S
Yeah!
(Theygetbiggeragain)
S
Waitwheredidthecrumbgo?
M
Wegrewagain.
S
Whyarewegrowingsofast?
M
ItspartoftheprogramthatImadeitskindacomplicatedtounderstandsinceyoureight.
SOMEONESCOMINGHIDE!
Theyhidebehindthedeskandwhenthepersonleavestheygrowagainbacktonormalsize)
S
Heywerebacktonormalsize!
M
Finally
(MrBossmanwalksin)
B
Hellothere!Youguyshadagoodtime?
S
Yeah!Itwassomuchfun!
M
No,notreally
B
Thatsgreat!WellthanksagainMadisonforallyourhelp.Bye!
S
YeahbyeMadison!