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Date: Monday Feb.

2016

Secret Email

There was a guy name Nelson he was in grade 5


and he had a crush on a girl. The girl name was
Sky-lynn. Sky-lynn had a boyfriend already so that
made Nelson so sad. Nelson went on the computer
and wrote a secret email to Sky-lynn. sly-lynn got
the email. She walked around the school and ask
ever boy if they shared the secret email to her.
Finally she got to Nelson and asked if he shared the

secret email Nelson said, No. Sky-lynn said oh i


really hope it was you fine it was me. now there
old Sky-lynn and Nelson got married had a babies
named joy, faith ,hope and herry. They lived
happily ever after.

THE END

Student / Self
Writing Process

Student devotes a
lot of time and effort
to the writing
process (prewriting,
drafting, reviewing,
and editing). Works
hard to make the
story wonderful.

Student devotes
sufficient time and
effort to the writing
process (prewriting,
drafting, reviewing,
and editing). Works
and gets the job
done.

Student devotes
some time and effort
to the writing
process but was not
very thorough. Does
enough to get by.

Student devotes
little time and effort
to the writing
process. Doesn\'t
seem to care.

Characters

The main characters


are named and
clearly described in
text as well as

The main characters


are named and
described. Most
readers would have

The main characters


are named. The
reader knows very
little about the

It is hard to tell who


the main characters
are.

Title Page

pictures. Most
readers could
describe the
characters
accurately.

some idea of what


the characters
looked like.

characters.

Title page has a


graphic or fancy
lettering, has the
title, author\'s name,
illustrator\'s name,
and the year.

Title page has the


title, author\'s name,
illustrator's name,
and the year.

Title page has the 3


of the 4 required
elements.

Title page has fewer


than 3 of the
required elements.

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