Instructor: Teacher Hans

Bauer

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Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate

Date: 01/12/2015 Term: I1315

Paragraph One: Introduction

Background/Hook-grabber: The technology has been increasing over the years and it has
facilitated human life
since its existence.
Focusing: However, increasing technology can be dangerous for the existence of human
race, since the human
beings can be replaced by a new race based on the artificial intelligence and cyber body.
Thesis Statement (State your opinion: three reasons may be inserted): I claim that
technology will help people
And It make lives people more confortable as long as it increase. I claim that three
future technologies will
change peoples lives in the next decade

Paragraph Two: Body 1

Topic Sentence (Reason 1) Intercontinental flights at the speed of sound can change
peoples live
Completely. It can increase the globalization and facilitates the international commerce
reducing the cycle of Support one: the commerce by accelerating purchases and sales
between countries.
Example: people and businessmen could travel to another continent and one hour and
return and one hour.
Support two: It would increase the tourism between countries. Since, many people will
want to travel.
Example: A trip between Tokyo and New York could be done in just 70 minutes.
Support three: It would be possible work in another country and return to your home at
the end of the day.
Example: People could work in countries with a better salary and return to their home to
stay with their family.
Closing/Transition Sentence: Definitely, this technology could improve the economy of the
countries and of the people, globalizing more the world, and promoting the tourism.

Paragraph Three: Body 2

Topic Sentence (Reason 2) On the other hand, finding the cure of the cancer would
change the world, and
It would increase life expentancy.

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Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate

Date: 01/12/2015 Term: I1315

Support one: Cancer is one of the main causes of death of people, finding a cure would
increase the life expentancy.
Example: Each year about 14 million people globally are told they have cancer and eight
million die from the disease.
Support two: Finding the cure for the cancer would reduce the mortality rate.
Example: the highest percentage of deaths worldwide are caused by cancer.
Support three: Find the cure for cancer save money spent on treatments today.
Example: Cancer patients spend up to Bs 80,000 to heal the cancer on chemotherapy
treatments.
Closing/Transition Sentence: As you can see, finding the cure for the cancer would be a
big advanced in the field of medicine and practically people would live longer.

Paragraph Four: Body 3

Topic Sentence (Reason 3)Lastly, Robotics of last generation can revolutionize the world.
Support one: Firstly, it can replace human in jobs very dangerous for people that put at
risk their life.
Example: One of the most dangerous jobs in the world is the bomb deactivator
Support two: Secondly, they can work more time than human beings because they dont
get tired.
Example: Robots could work in mines for more time because their bodies are more
adaptable and flexible.
Support three: Robotics could be used to work in exhausting jobs for humans in order to
increase the productivity.
Example: Many companies would use robots like a way to increase its fixed costs and

increase the gains.

Closing/Transition Sentence: In conclusion, robots could replace to the man in some jobs
where the conditions are very bad and dangerous for the people.

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Name: Joel Fernando Muriel Zrate

Date: 01/12/2015 Term: I1315

Paragraph Five: Conclusion

Restatement of Opinion: Thus, these three future technologies can change peoples live
in the next decade, all of them for the benefits of the people.
(Possible: Sum up major points)
Clincher: Recommendations and/or Predictions In this way expectancy of peoples life
would increase more years.

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