Yessica Daniela Ardaya Gira

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In my personal opinion definitely I would prefer live my life at slower
pace and
enjoying all.
First, If we take our life very quickly, sonner or later we can enter into
monotony for instance; if we live quickly we will not be able to enjoy all
around us such special people, activities of distraccion, maybe sports
etc., second; We should take our time in our way to thinking bette every
step that we do in our way for example; If we dont thinking good, our
decision could has consecuences in our life and our enviroment and then
could be late to fix it Finally; If we take extra time with our things, we
are going to have more time to learn about every experience that the
life give us, and off course we will see how we can do better a thing that
we have done worst. In conclusion; live our life

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In my personal opinion definitely I would prefer to live my life a slower

pace and enjoying all. First, if we take our life very quickly, sonner or
latter we can enter into monotony. For instance, if we live quickly we will
not be able to enjoy all the things around us such special people,
activities of distraction, maybe sports etc. Second, we should take our
time to think better every step that we take in our way. For example, if
we dont think well our decisions, they have consequences in our lives
and our environment and then, it could be late to fix our bad decisions.
Finally, if we take extra time with our things, we are going to have more
time to learn about every experience that life gives us, and of course we
will see how we can do a thing that we have done worst. In conclusion,
live our life..