Recommendations

 KUMPLETUHIN NA LAHAT NG TASK!

 Make sure na malinaw yung picture na ilalagay sa Magazine.
 Siguraduhin din na right size yung picture.
COVER PAGE
 Finalize the cover page. Kailangan ko ng makita yun.
ABOUT THE COVER
 Ang daming typo!
 Not satisfied! Ayusin!
 Meron namang idea kaso nga lang kailangang kasing maipaliwanag ng maayos.
 Use spacing! Play with words!
 JUSTIFY IS SUPPOSED TO BE THE MARGIN!

EDITOR’S NOTE
 Do not just state the obvious content of the magazine! Improve the last paragraph. Play with words.
ART PROMOTION
 Know how to use punctuation marks. ANG DAMING ERRORS! – SAME THING AS BEFORE,
GANUN PA RIN
 NASAAN ANG ART PROMOTION?
 GIVE/STATE CONCRETE WAYS ON HOW TO PROMOTE ARTS!
 KULANG!
 YUNG TOTOO? BINAGO BA YUNG PART NA ‘TO? NAGBASA BA NG
RECOMMENDATION?

COMPARE AND CONTRAST

 ANG LIIT NUNG PICTURE!
 ANG SABI KO MAGDAGDAG NG INFORMATION! HINDI PICTURE LANG!!

T- SHIRT DESIGN
 YUN NA YUN?
 WALANG DATING!
 KULANG!
 AYUSIN!
REDESIGNED LOGO
 Use spacing!

NATIONAL ARTIST
  Include the works of the National Artist.
 ADD CREATIVITY!
ASIAN GAMES UNIFORM
 Improve the design!
 Magkaiba ang SEA GAMES sa ASIAN GAMES!
 Ang daming typo! BASAHIN NG MAAYOS!
SUMMER OLYMPICS VENUE
 All eyes will be on the Philippines for the summer Olympics to witness the prestige game. – prestigious
 Since the Philippine is chose to be the host of the summer Olympic Games the head of the Philippine
Sport Commission designed the venue for the Olympic Games. – chosen
 Magkaiba ang SEA Games sa Olympics. Olympic Logo na lang ang ilagay.
SEA GAMES LOGO
 Partaker – change it to participants na lang.
ART ADVOCACY

 Ano yung she&apo;?

 Ayusin yung advocacy!
 Edit the typo error sa advocacy ni Basbas.