Amaris Pazos

Period.6

23 March 2019

The American dream

I feel that this essay help me understand how it really likes when people have a dream to

make it big and do better things for the world. In the world, we can see that every person's

dream does not come true and could be complicated to get to that dream. I feel that this essay

has really opened my eye more to really see how the world is. It could that everyone can be

different than others and not be the same but be a much difficult situation when a person wants

to reach a big dream. My goals for this essay were to do good on it to see if my facts really

made since when there is an American dream. Another of my goals was for a person to

understand why an essay could make a difference when someone reads it and takes different

thoughts about the American dream.

Some decisions I made in this essay were to see if all the points where going to connect

back to the essay that I would be doing. Most decisions were because I had to see all the

instructions to put them all on the essay. With this essay, we can see that not all people have it

easy because they have some situation that can prevent them from getting to their goals that

have. Some steps that I took with the essay where to see what was I going to include in the

essay. Throughout the essay, we had to see which information what we had to put to explain it

in details. In the essay when we explain it we have to put quotes to see what the information

was going to be like.

Something that I learned in the essay was how I was going to put all the information and

how I was going to separate everything. While I separated everything I had to see which is a

way to put them all in order. From the order, we put quotes in the essay and explain it. Another

thing that I excel at was to see what the essay was going to come out like with all the

information put in and how we could see that everything in the world could be changed.
 I investigated the world by seen how a dream can change everything and to see how it

could help people. With all the people from the world, everyone can have a different dream and

be changing. By not reaching a dream it cannot help them. I also communicated ideas by talking

to everyone in the class and see how I could revise it.