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College Admission Essay

I have always believed that an individual's life is defined by their efforts and focus. My desire

while growing up has been to do my best in school and get excellent grades that would enable

me get into college and undertake a course in the business field. The way corporations operate,

and how the diverse elements are integrated intrigues me, that served to create interest in the

subject. I want to pursue a business course that will give me the skills and knowledge to be an

excellent entrepreneur. I am a focused, self-driven individual with high integrity and desire to

learn more. That I believe is significant in both the graduate experience and the business field.

The book Rich Dad Poor Dad by Robert Kiyosaki best describes my beliefs in life. The book

gives the story of the difference between a poor dad whose focus was on getting excellent grades

and the rich dad who believed in going beyond what one learns in school. I also have a yearning

to understand the deeper concepts of the business field that can help me be innovative and a

problem-solver. I trust that success does not come to the ordinary but rather to those that can take

risks in looking beyond what others are seeing. Robert explains in his book that the difference

between the rich and the poor is the lack of understanding of finances. I desire to grasp an in-

depth knowledge concerning the subject.

Apart from the business field, I have an interest in the healthcare field. I was brought up in a

remote area where medical services were many miles away. We lost people in our community

due to the lack of access to medical facilities. Particularly, my alternative profession would have
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been in health administration; this would be an excellent avenue to plan and make decisions that

are meant to enhance quality care. As an established business person, I will open up a charity

healthcare in my hometown to help my people access quality medical services.