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Night Fever Draft
Night Fever Draft
Written by
Noelle Hanson
EXT. WOODS - DAWN
SECLUDED CABIN
All wood. Two stories, yet quaint. A porch wraps around the
second story.
PETER
Hello?! Hello!
Silence.
He knocks harder.
PETER (CONT’D)
Hello! Please! Is anyone in
there?!
PETER (CONT’D)
Please!
Peter dunks his head under the running faucet to clean off
the last of the blood.
The women ascend the staircase. Peter discards the shirt and
blood-stained towel INTO THE TRASH UNDER THE SINK. He snaps
upright just as --
CARRIE
You have three seconds to explain
yourself before I throw you off
that porch.
PETER
It -- it’s not what it looks like --
CARRIE
One.
PETER
Please! I need help --
3.
Another step.
CARRIE
Two.
PETER
I just woke up like this!
OVER BLACK
CARRIE
Try and help, Ana?
ANA
Can’t we just let him go and lock
the doors.
CARRIE
He broke in once already. What’s
from stopping him a second time?
Look, don’t worry, he’s most likely
harmless.
ANA
Then why are you tying him up?
CARRIE
Just in case. Any luck?
ANA
Still nothing. I don’t think it’s
ever worked actually.
CARRIE
Well, he’s paying for the door.
ANA
(whispering)
You remember that from Girl Scouts?
4.
CARRIE
Improvised.
(To Peter)
Wake up.
Carrie nudges Peter with the bat. He opens his eyes wide,
gathering his wits.
CARRIE (CONT’D)
Any funny business and you’re out
like a light again, capeesh?
PETER
(gagged)
Is ah wah ih oohs ike.
CARRIE
I said capeesh?
Peter understands. Nods his head. Carrie rips out his gag.
PETER
It’s not what it looks like -- I --
CARRIE
What’s your name?
PETER
Peter. Peter Jacobson. Please you
have to --
CARRIE
Peter. Why’d you break into our
cabin? That door, it’s solid oak.
Not cheap. You’re paying for that.
PETER
Listen! Somebody is trying to kill
me!
PETER (CONT’D)
I don’t know who or why, but
whoever it is they --
I came here looking for help!
ANA
What can we --
5.
CARRIE
No. Nuh uh. Forget about it.
PETER
Can I use your phone?
CARRIE
Doesn’t work.
PETER
How about a ride? I’ll take
anything.
CARRIE
If someone’s after you, I don’t
want to be seen with you. Don’t
worry about the door. I’ll fix it.
Just don’t let it hit you on the
way out.
PETER
PLEASE --
PETER (CONT’D)
I can’t go back out there.
Peter shakes the image out of his head. Doesn’t mention it.
ANA
We can’t just throw him out.
CARRIE
You were gung-ho about it earlier.
ANA
Look at him. He’s wearing the same
ridiculous jammies as Dad. The
wagon wheels.
6.
CARRIE
Okay lets not lose our heads over a
pair of pajama pants.
ANA
You said this vacation was for me.
And I want to help him. Let him
stay over night, clear his head.
We can drive him to a station
tomorrow.
Peter walks away from the cabin, but he can’t shake the image
of Lynn, lifeless, out of his head.
ANA
Are you crazy?!
ANA (CONT’D)
I said, are you crazy?
CARRIE
This might fit.
PETER
Thank you.
CARRIE
Well, it’s an improvement.
Ana enters the room with a TRAY OF TEA. Sets it down on the
table, grabs her cup. Carrie takes her cup from the tray
while simultaneously taking out a FLASK from her back pocket.
She pours whiskey into her tea.
7.
PETER
Do you have any sugar?
ANA
Uh yeah of course.
PETER
Thank you.
Peter stirs in two sugar cubes. Adds three more, one by one,
stirring them in. Satisfied, he guzzles the cup. Carrie and
Ana look at each other, recognizing his odd, nervous
behavior. Carrie clears her throat as Ana refills his cup
with tea.
CARRIE
So Peter, tell us about yourself.
You have a job? Wife? Kids?
PETER
Uh yes. Yes I have a wife.
PETER (CONT’D)
Oh -- her name is Lynn.
CARRIE
Does she have any idea where you
are? Is she worried about you --
PETER
She’s fine. Thank you, she’s fine,
yeah.
ANA
I’m going to go make more tea.
8.
Ana takes the tray with her, leaves the living room.
CARRIE
Peter. Why do you think somebody
is trying to kill you?
PETER
I -- I woke up in the middle of the
woods and I --
PETER (O.S.)
I felt threatened.
BACK TO SCENE
CARRIE
How do you not remember how you got
there? Drugs?
PETER
No no. I sleepwalk. But usually
just -- cooking a meal or couch
pillows in the fridge. I’ve NEVER
left the house. I must’ve been
sleepwalking and someone tried to --
(he processes, confused)
Someone -- I don’t remember it.
That’s the only explanation I can
come up with, honestly.
CARRIE
It’s okay, Peter. Ana’s a
psychologist, I’m a PT. You’re in
good hands.
(MORE)
9.
CARRIE (CONT'D)
Get some sleep and tomorrow, we’ll
get you back to Linda.
PETER
Lynn.
CARRIE
To Lynn.
PETER
To Lynn.
CARRIE
I’m sorry. I didn’t mean --
PETER
It’s okay. Thanks for the
blankets.
CARRIE
How are you?
PETER
Sleep will do me good.
CARRIE
Good. Holler if you need anything,
yeah?
PETER
Yeah.
PETER (CONT’D)
Hey, Carrie?
PETER (CONT’D)
Thank you. I know I’m intruding
and I’m not the greatest house
guest, but I really appreciate your
kindness.
CARRIE
Sleep tight Peter.
ANA
Mmmmm. Sleeping. Shh.
CARRIE
Sorry that this weekend isn’t the
relaxing getaway you needed.
ANA
Mmmm it’s fine.
CARRIE
Dad would have been proud of you
for standing up for that poor guy,
you know that?
ANA
I know. That’s why I did. And the
jammies.
Carries smiles.
CARRIE
Yeah. Wagon wheels.
LYNN
Hun why are you up so late?
LYNN (CONT’D)
Sleepwalking again? C’mon, lets
get you to bed.
LYNN
Peter stop! Wake up! Peter wake
up it’s me!
PETER
Shhhh go to sleep.
Carrie and Ana are fast asleep. A CRASH FROM THE KITCHEN
ripples through the cabin. Carrie startles awake. ANOTHER
CRASH. Ana stirs.
ANA
What was that?
CARRIE
You stay.
CARRIE
Peter?
BLACK
THE END.