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Politics - Discuss
Politics - Discuss
(12/07/2014) Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in
the government. Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is
not suitable . Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Essay:
Commented [AB1]: ‘consider this tendency as unsuitable’ –
It is true that the number of young people who hold highly responsible posts in the government is consider sth as sth.
no guarantee that a little older, they will earn more life, or political, experience. While some one do not Commented [AB19]: ‘age equals wisdom’
believe young people can play some key roles in the government, I strongly believe young people is
completely relevant. Commented [AB20]: I believe that key roles in the government
can be played by both young and old individuals’
(255 words)
Comments:
Overall Score: 7.0 – a good answer to the question- generally solid and relevant to the question.
Some inaccurate word choice and noun and preposition issues.