Attending a live performance provides unforgettable experiences such as sharing excitement with new friends and interacting with performers, but it can be expensive and carry safety risks. Watching an event on television is more affordable and safe, though it lacks a live atmosphere and direct interaction. Overall, live performances and television each have their own advantages - live events allow interaction while television viewing is more economical and safe.
Attending a live performance provides unforgettable experiences such as sharing excitement with new friends and interacting with performers, but it can be expensive and carry safety risks. Watching an event on television is more affordable and safe, though it lacks a live atmosphere and direct interaction. Overall, live performances and television each have their own advantages - live events allow interaction while television viewing is more economical and safe.
Attending a live performance provides unforgettable experiences such as sharing excitement with new friends and interacting with performers, but it can be expensive and carry safety risks. Watching an event on television is more affordable and safe, though it lacks a live atmosphere and direct interaction. Overall, live performances and television each have their own advantages - live events allow interaction while television viewing is more economical and safe.
Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or
sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on
television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? I partly agree that being viewers of a live performance is less interesting than being its audiences. From my point of view, an event watched on television or attended has its own attractiveness. On the one hand, attending a live performance provides people with unforgettable experiences. Firstly, (1) so exciting is the atmosphere brought by the crowd that whoever attends the event undoubtedly enjoys it. It is no There is nothing more fantastic than sharing the same interests with new friends on such a special occasion. For example, there is a big high possibility that the audiences of a concert will celebrate in style, which brings strangers closer together. Secondly, the audiences of the event stand valuable chances of interacting directly with the performers. The chances are that the fans will watch their idols perform lively, and those admirers might have opportunities to ask the superstars for a selfie or an autograph. Therefore, (2) not only does being audiences of an event give people the chance to be in a new relationship, but it also is also an effective way for them to free their energy. On the other hand, it is an indisputable fact that watching the same performance on television makes people comfortable. Firstly, viewers can save a lot of money thanks to enjoying the performance by broadcast on television. (3) Only by watching an event through the screen of that electronic device, can people avoid spending their money on tickets. Moreover, the live programme broadcast recorded to be shown on television definitely gives provides viewers performance with better quality owing to the image and sound processing. Secondly, unintentional accidents seem might to be avoided when people decide not to attend the occasion. For instance, if the spectators who are the fans of two rival football teams become extreme aggressive, there may be conflicts, or even scuffles. Moreover, criminals such as pickpockets and thieves might take advantage of noise and crowds to disable security measures. In conclusion, being audiences of a live performance is as exciting as being its viewers. People can have better interaction with the strange and the famous by attending the event, but watching it on television seems to be the more economically efficient and safer way of the two.
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Band 7.0 Strong points: - You avoid overgenaralization by using Modal Verbs very effectively. - Good conclusion - Wide range of grammr with flexible use of inversion (1) (2) (3) , if clauses, relative clauses! This is great! Weak points: - Shoud be more focused on elaborating your ideas. Remember the format: Big idea 1: – explanation 1 – example 1 – explanation 2 – example 2 Big idea 2: – explanation 1 – example 1 – explanation 2 – example 2 The explanation and examples are included to support the big ideas. They must be all relevant!!!!! - There are some grammatical mistakes that you should also work on.