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1) Preparing to Translate:
This translation will be used to educate students in the setting of a high school health
class. It will be presented to students who use ASL as well as to those who use LSL. It is
intended to be used year after year to teach the students about different diet choices. The
speaker's goal is to explain why she is vegetarian. She also explains how eating habits have
changed over time. The expected audience is a high school health class. The audience will
change as it is expected to be used for many years. The video that is needing to be translated is 1
minute and 54 seconds and I have been given around two weeks to complete the desired
translation.
(1) SL
After watching the SL message for the first time I believe I have a generally good
understanding of the main concept. There will be multiple sections that I will have to
slow down or watch multiple times in order to gain an understanding of what is being
said. One section that I am struggling with in particular is 0:11-0:14. She is saying
something about how diets have changed but I do not understand how that connects to
times watching it to understand what a specific sign meant, it turns out, it means
OVERWEIGHT.
(2) TL
will then be able to compare my translation to the SL message and test it for
adequately describe the meaning of the original message. If not, I will still have to use
my resources (the internet) in order to find what words best describe the ideas. Some
of the signs that were difficult for me was HUNGRY and ORDER. For Hungry I tried
to pick what was best for the context and chose the English word crave.
This subject is not something I know a great deal about, making it slightly more
difficult for me to understand. I have the resources of the internet in order to make
research for a general understanding of the topic and then during-assignment research
translation. I do not have any strong opposing or supporting feelings about the topic. I
I ended up using the internet to learn more about what vegetarians can and can’t eat.
2) Analyzing the Meaning of the Text
When looking at the meaning of the words there are some that I do not understand or
know how to phrase. The sign “SUNRISE” doesn’t necessarily connect to the concept of
Modern-Day but I think that, because of the concept, it means “Nowadays” or “Modern-Day”. I
will write down “MODERN-DAY” in the translation for now and see if it changes when I learn
more. When watching the video there was one idea presented that I wasn’t sure how to translate.
This sign is at:20. I couldn't find the sign online but I am depending on the context to understand
the meaning. I will ask Derrick about the sign, but for now, I think it has the concept of “raw
materials”, “growing their own crops”, and “living off the land.” I also stepped away from the
sentences and came back to them later. Doing this helped me to recognize where mistakes were
made. A sentence that was presented in the video was “Not have them very often”. This is in
regards to those in the 1800s not eating the cookies very often. I was thinking that I could change
the perspective to be “only have them once in a while”. I am not sure if the meaning or tone is
order to see how the sentences tie to the main idea. After watching the message a few times
through, I am now able to have an understanding of the main concept. The most central idea of
3) Message Transfer
a) Unconscious Bias
i) Subject matter
I do not have an unconscious bias about this translation by way of knowing too much. I
do not know a great deal about vegetarianism. I am starting to research the topic in connection to
this translation but do not hold strong personal opinions about it. I also do not know enough
about the subject for me to want to add information or correct any info when what is being stated
is false. Since I only have a very basic understanding of the topic, I can easily put myself into the
audience’s shoes. Of course, each person may have a different level of knowledge regarding the
topic, but I don’t think most of them would have an in-depth understanding of it. Being able to
visualize and imagine what their understanding may be about the subject before watching the
video, helped me to better translate the message. It also helped me with my word choice. I think
it is hard to visualize what the 1800s was really like since I did not experience it nor have I heard
ii) SL
The Source Language, in this case, is ASL. ASL is my second language, which
means that I have less of an understanding in terms of the cultural elements and
language it causes me to need more processing time. I can not easily listen to the
English language, rather, I need to give more effort in the comprehension step of the
translation process in order to simply understand what is being stated. I had to take
more time in the comprehension step by watching the video many times and writing
down small sections of what I understood until the ideas connected with each other.
There were many places where I have been struggling to transfer the concept of
the TL to an equivalent concept for the SL. One, in particular, is the concept of
“THINK HUNGRY” when used in the present vs when describing the past. I know
they have different meanings and need to watch them again with the understanding of
iii) TL
use English. I believe sometimes I struggle with translating ASL to English simply
because I want to find the best word to represent the idea accurately. I will use
synonyms and the Thesaurus in order to help me in this area. Since I have a deep
through common phrases. One example of this is, “living off the land.”
b) Transfer
i) Temporal
One part of the translation that may have been negatively affected if the temporal
relationships were not accurate was the section about where they get each ingredient
for the cookies. I decided that this section does not need to be kept in an appropriate
time sequence but may have been confusing if presented in a different section of the
video.
ii) Spatial
An important spatial relationship that was set up was the distance of South
America from where they were at. This distance is shown to be far away and out of
view. The speaker also set up the spatial relationships of where to get flour, where the
cows are, where is the past, and where is the present. She set up the signing space in a
way that makes it easy to understand if she is discussing the past or present. Since I
am translating into English I will have to make some of the visual information
voice.
iii) Logical
One section that you may have needed to use logical relations was when she listed
the ingredients and then jumped to when the cookies were made. It is logical to
assume the cookies were made during the time that wasn’t mentioned. We can use the
concept of “if-then”. If she gets all of the ingredients, and then has cookies. It is
c) Form vs Meaning
The Meaning of a message is the intent. The Form of a message is the actual words used.
The beginning form of this message is in ASL and becomes English after I translated it. The goal
of a translation is for the form to change but for the meaning to stay the same. I had to compare
my translation to the Target Language message numerous times in order to feel satisfied that the
form was equivalent. I struggled with one sentence because there were many forms that could be
used in English that would convey the same meaning. It is my responsibility as the translator to
find which one best fits the intent of the message. I created many forms of the following sentence
but ultimately decided on the following, “The government advertises that you need to eat red
d) Content Loss
i) Idioms
I am not aware of any idiomatic phrases within the original message. I did, in fact,
use an idiom in the translation because the concept that was being described had an
equivalent and commonly used phrase in the Target Message. This phrase is, “Living
off of the land.” This could be paraphrased as “Surviving from the raw materials that
are accessible.” That is the only idiomatic phrase that I used in hopes to better
I do often struggle with Negative Self Talk. I know I caught myself multiple times
throughout this process thinking negative thoughts about my skills and abilities. Since
I had to watch the video so many times in order to understand all of the details, I
caught myself being negative. Some of the thoughts were similar to, “..and how did
you get into this program?”, “This is the third time you watched that section and you
still don’t understand it?”. These when I noticed new information that I had
previously missed. I know that negative self-talk is not productive and takes my focus
away from my translation. I hope that as I continue to gain self-confidence, my
a) Main Idea
The signer uses the space around her a lot! After watching the video many times I
can tell that South America is placed on the right of the signer and the cow is on the
left. The flour is off to the right. It is amazing how she uses space and can set
everything up in so many different places with it still making sense. I think that her
use of space and facial expressions helped me to understand how long and involved
this process of making cookies really was. Using the space may be important in the
SL but is less important in the TL. It is important to include the information about the
ingredients being far away but it is not needed to say “the flour is far away to the
right”. Understanding the locations of actors and objects can help us understand the
main idea.
b) Idea Units
It is important to convey the message with correct idea units. For example,
always recognize idea units correctly and interpret them in a way that the
meaning is the same. One specific rhetorical question that I had to interpret
chocolate chips…”. Normally when I see rhetorical questions I think that I can
change it simply by saying “because” instead. I don’t believe that doing this,
in this situation, would be what best describes the message's meaning. I have
been trying to consistently change my grammar from word for word what the
don’t use rhetorical questions in the same way as we do in ASL and so we are
An example of a statement that stays a statement is, “Their diet was still
healthy because they wouldn’t eat them very often.” The ASl sentence of the
above example is still a statement and can be found at 0:45. Other sentences
balanced” and “In the past, as soon as they started feeling hungry they needed
to plan and prepare the food because of the process that was involved in
making it.” I had to practice and reformulate those statements many times in
c) Word level
i) Borrowing ii) Modulation (+/-) iii) General to Specific (vice versa)
a spoken language. I have recognized some places throughout the translation that I
could change the perspective but I am not sure if the meaning would change. One
example of this is by saying, “Not have them very often” and “Only have them once
in a while”. Not very often doesn’t imply any regularity. It is more seen as “on rare
occasions”. The saying “only have them once in a while” makes me think that they
have a set time every so often that they make them. I see, “They have them once
every other month” similarly to “on rare occasions”. Also, it is important to consider,
what is rare? What makes something “rare”? I will have to keep thinking about which
I want to use. Next, is specific to general. I do think that there are parts where the
details don't influence the main idea, and so I generalize them. An example of this is,
America”, I said, “Americans”. It is important to make sure that the sentence sounds
5) Priorities in Translation
The original video was made so that the presentation could be used in the future. The
context of the video is explained on canvas under the “scenario”. This video was created in
hopes of teaching students about being a vegetarian. I hoped that the main idea was
understandable through my translation. I looked back on the canvas page throughout the process
to remind myself of my audience and the context in which this information will be given. I just
thought about how part of context equivalence could be formality and word choice in the
translation. I will have to change some words because they are too formal for this scenario.
Dynamic equivalence is all about impact. The TL and SL message should have the same
impact on the audience. I think this can apply back to word choice. When your messages aren’t
equivalent then you will struggle and might have “Formal Correspondence”. Since I can’t
measure the impact of the audience it is difficult to know what words or sentences will impact
the audience differently. As I reread my translation I changed the sentence, “The process in the
1800s to make cookies was a lot” to “Just imagine the process that was needed to make cookies
in the 1800s”. iI think the change in sentence structure and vocabulary makes it so the audience
would be impacted in the same way. Also, I need to keep in mind, that as I do the voice
translation, I need to express the same tones as her. Especially at the ending where she says,
The audience for this video is a high school health class. This means that my vocabulary
shouldn’t be in Formal register and that my word choice should be understandable to those with
a very basic understanding of vegetarianism. This is specifically important to keep in mind when
talking about jargon. You need to make sure that the audience can understand it or what is the
point? For example, I could choose specific types of vegetarians, but it would not add to their
understanding, it would only confuse them. It is beneficial to have a specific audience in mind
a) It is very important to test a translation because we need to know if our goal of equivalence
has been met. Translations should be faithful to the source text message and sound natural.
i) Accuracy
accurate. I didn’t end up changing anything. At this point in time, from what I can
tell, there is not any additions or implicit information that needed to become explicit.
ii) Clarity
We test for clarity within the translation in order to make sure it is easily
understandable for those who need it. After reading through my translation I made
slight changes because some of the information was not presented in a clear manner.
Some of the places I struggled with and had to edit was because I left out details that
actually turned out to be important. I had to add those details back in and see if it
flowed.
iii) Naturalness
We test for naturalness within translations so that the message can easily flow and
sound correct for native speakers. One section that I struggled with regarding this is
as follows, “In the past, as soon as they started to crave cookies they needed to plan
and prepare ahead of time because of the process that was involved in making it.”.
This sentence was difficult for me to form into English because although I understood
it and wrote it into English, it did not sound natural. I had to read the sentence to
multiple people and use online grammar platforms to come up with a natural-
sounding sentence.
b) How
I conducted this test myself throughout the translation process. I did this simply to
make sure that I had understood the section and that the sentences weren’t broken.
ii) Back Translation (someone who knows SL but hasn’t seen the text)
I had Derrick read my translation and then record himself signing it. By doing this
I was able to see if there was any information loss in my translation. I did not ask him
any questions about the meaning of signs until after he had recorded the video. This
was a really good test for me to understand what may be different in the form where
other places may be different in meaning. From this test, I found small errors and was
I conducted this test by asking my mother where, within the translation, does it
not sound natural. “Where does it sound as if it is a translation and not from this
language?” There were a few places that she pointed out were not correct English
grammar. I made the changes and then repeated the process until she said it sounded
v) Readability
I asked my mother to listen to me read it aloud and tell me where it doesn’t sound
natural. After I made the edits recommended, I had my brother read it. He had never
read or heard the translation before and so it was beneficial to see where he pauses or
stuttered while reading it aloud. I then looked back at those sections and edited them.
c) Seriousness of Errors
i) Not Serious
There may be a few errors that are “Not Serious”. These errors may be because of
word choice or sentence structure. The overall concept is still understood but it is a
If I missed any details from the SL then I would have errors within this category. I
don’t believe that my translation includes any of these errors because, after a long
did then it would be because I followed the SL syntax instead of the TL syntax.
I don’t believe there are any very serious errors. This would mean that I had not
Translations
Translation #1
I am Brooke and I want to explain the importance of planning your diet in a way that is
best for your health. In SUNRISE America it seems impossible because of the environment,
food, and what we eat. In the past, people would live… imagine 100 cookies. They want cookies
badly but it is a long process to do so. They would have to get on their horse, get flour and bring
it back. Then they would have to get the cows milk and churn it to make butter. How on earth did
they get chocolate chips? They would have to order it from South America and have it delivered.
The time it would take to make everything… delicious and shared with others…. They tasted
delicious. They were only able to have them once in a while, but that was fine by them.
Nowadays we go to the store and are ready to eat right then. We put it in the oven when in the
past it was much more of a process. In the past, they had to think when they would be hungry
and plan ahead because of the process involved. The problem for Americans now is that… where
not required to make the food?? I decided to change my diet and became a vegetarian. Becoming
a vegetarian helped me to balance my body. The government advertises that you must eat red
meat but really they are wrong. Your body doesn’t need meat because vegetables include protein.
These foods could be dark greens, nuts, or eggs. If you want eggs, then there are different levels
of becoming a vegetarian. Some vegetarians can drink milk or maybe can eat eggs, or fish. Some
people are called “Chicken vegetarians”, but really the basic rule is no meat. This means no red
Translation #2
I am Brooke and today I am going to explain the importance of planning your diet in a
way that is best for your health… In the past people would survive by..Just imagine, if people in
the 1800s wanted cookies They would want them so badly but would have to first go on their
horse and get some flour. Once back, they would have to get the cows milk and churn it into
butter. In order to get chocolate chips, they would have to order some from South America and
wait for them to be delivered. When everything was finally made the cookies tasted delicious
because of the fat from the butter and were so rich!... Their diet was still healthy because they
would not have them very often. Nowadays we go to the store and get chocolate chips easily. If
we are hungry we bake them without having to put forth too much effort. In the past, they would
have to think of when they will be hungry and plan in order to make food on time. The problem
for Americans now is that we don’t watch what we eat. We really should make food from
scratch. I decided to change my diet and become a vegetarian. Becoming a vegetarian helped me
to balance my body. The government that you need to eat red meat but really that isn’t true. Your
body doesn’t need red meat because vegetables include the protein necessary. Protein can be
found in dark greens, nuts, or eggs. If you want to eat eggs then you can. There are different
categories of vegetarians. Some vegetarians may drink milk or maybe choose to eat eggs or fish.
Some people are called “chicken vegetarians”, but really the basic rule is no meat. This means no
Translation #3
I am Brooke. Today I am going to explain the importance of planning your diet in a way that is
best for your health. In modern America, there is a lot of obesity because of the environment and
the way we choose to eat. In the past, people would survive by collecting what was close by. Just
imagine the process that was needed to make cookies in the 1800s. If they really wanted cookies
then they first needed to get on their horses to get the flour. Once back, they would have to get
the cows milk and churn it into butter. In order to get chocolate chips, they would have to wait to
have them delivered from South America. When everything was finally made, the cookies would
taste delicious because of the fat from the butter. They were so rich and would be shared with
everyone. Their diets were still healthy because they would not eat them very often. Nowadays
we go to the grocery store and get ready to bake cookie dough. In those moments we want to
make it and bake it quickly because we are hungry. We are able to put it in the oven and before
we know it they will be ready! In the past, they would have to be aware of when they would be
hungry because they had to take the time and go through the process of making food. The
problem for Americans today is that we don’t watch what we eat. I realized that we really should
be making food from scratch, and so I decided to become a vegetarian. Becoming a vegetarian
helped me to balance my body. The government advertises that you need to eat red meat, but that
actually isn’t the case. Your body doesn’t need red meat because you can get the proteins you
need by eating vegetables. Protein can be found in dark greens, nuts, or eggs. If you want to eat
eggs then you can because there are different levels of being vegetarian. Some vegetarians may
drink milk or others may choose to eat eggs or fish. Some vegetarians are called, “chicken
vegetarians”. Really the basic rule is “no meat”, this included red meat, white meat, and fish.
I am Brooke. Today I am going to explain the importance of planning your diet in a way that is
best for your health. In modern America, there is a lot of obesity because of the environment and
the way we choose to eat. In the past, people would survive by collecting what was close by. Just
imagine the process that was needed to make cookies in the 1800s. If they really wanted cookies,
then they first needed to get on their horses to get the flour. Once back, they would have to get
the cows milk and churn it into butter. To get chocolate chips, they would need to order them and
wait to have them delivered from South America. The cookies would taste delicious when they
were finally made because of the fat from the butter. They were so rich in flavor and would be
shared with everyone. Their diets were still healthy because they would not eat them very often.
Nowadays, we go to the grocery store and get ready to bake cookie dough. In those moments, we
want to make it and bake it quickly because we are hungry. We can put it in the oven and before
we know it they will be ready. In the past, they would have to be aware of when they would be
hungry because they had to take the time and go through the process of making food. The
problem for Americans today is that we don’t watch what we eat. We really should be making
food from scratch. So, I decided to become a vegetarian. Becoming a vegetarian helped me to
balance my body. The government advertises that you need to eat red meat, but that actually isn’t
the case. Your body doesn’t need red meat because you can get the proteins you need by eating
vegetables. Protein can be found in dark greens, nuts, or eggs. If you want to eat eggs then you
can, because there are different levels of being vegetarian. Some vegetarians may drink milk, or
others may choose to eat eggs and, others eat fish. Some vegetarians are called chicken
vegetarians. The basic rule is no meat, which includes red meat, white meat, and fish.
Translation #5
I am Brooke. Today I am going to explain the importance of planning your diet in a way that is
best for your health. American diets have changed, and there is now a lot of obesity, because of
the environment and how we choose to eat. In the past, people would survive by living off the
land. Just imagine the process that was needed to make cookies in the 1800s. If they really were
craving cookies, they first needed to get on their horses to go get flour. Once they got back they
would have to get the cows milk and churn it into butter. In order to get chocolate chips, they
would have to order them and wait for them to be delivered from South America. When the
cookies were finally made and ready the fat from the butter would make them taste delicious.
They were so rich in flavor and would be shared with everyone. Their diets were still healthy
because they would not eat cookies very often. Nowadays, we go to the grocery store and get
ready to bake cookie dough. In those moments, we are hungry and want to make it and bake it as
quickly as possible. We can put it in the oven and before we know it they will be ready. In the
past, as soon as they started to crave cookies they had to plan and prepare ahead of time because
the process of making food was very involved. The problem for Americans today is that we
don’t watch what we eat. We really should be making food from scratch. So, I decided to change
my eating habits and become a vegetarian. Becoming a vegetarian helped my body to feel
balanced. The government advertises that you need to eat red meat, but that actually isn’t the
case. Your body doesn’t need red meat because you can get the proteins you need by eating
vegetables, dark greens, nuts and eggs. Since there are different levels of being vegetarian, if you
want to eat eggs you can. Some vegetarians may drink milk, while others may choose to eat
eggs, or others will eat fish. Some vegetarians are called chicken vegetarians. The basic
vegetarian doesn’t eat any meat, which includes red meat, white meat, and fish.
I’m Brooke. Today I’m going to explain the importance of planning your diet in a way that is
best for your health. American diets have changed, and there’s a lot of obesity because of the
environment and how we choose to eat. In the past, people would survive by living off the land.
Just imagine the process of making cookies in the 1800s! If they were craving cookies, they had
to ride their horses to go get flour. Once they got back they would have to get the cows milk and
churn it into butter. In order to get chocolate chips, they’d have to order them from South
America and wait for them to be delivered. When the cookies were finally ready to eat, the fat
from the butter made them taste delicious. They were so rich and would be shared with everyone.
Their diets were still healthy because they wouldn’t eat cookies very often. Nowadays, we go to
the grocery store and get ready to bake cookie dough. In those moments, we’re hungry and want
to make it as quickly. So, we put them in the oven and they'll be ready in no time. In the past,
when they started craving cookies, they had to go through a long process to make them. The
problem for Americans today is that we don’t watch what we eat. We really should make food
from scratch. So, I decided to change my eating habits and become a vegetarian. Becoming a
vegetarian helped my body to feel balanced. The government advertises that you need to eat red
meat, but that isn’t true. Your body doesn’t need red meat because you can get the proteins you
need by eating vegetables, dark greens, nuts and eggs. Since there are different levels of being
vegetarian, if you want to eat eggs you can. Some vegetarians will drink milk, while others may
eat eggs, or others will eat fish. Some vegetarians are called chicken vegetarians. The basic
vegetarian doesn’t eat any meat, which includes red meat, white meat, and fish.